arsha + kriyaansh.(ss)..part 4 updtdpg50*last* - Page 30

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Posted: 13 years ago
oops!!tat ws damn hAWTTT!!!!
loved the arsha part more than anythng!!
wish they come bck 2gthr real!!
thnks 4 the update n pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wen will u update??
Dying 2 read the last part!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
next upate at 50th page huh...

chl beta aaj teri thodi si help mai bhi kar deti hu... šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
i wish ye FF hota... bt still...

koini...

lets get ovr wid dis now... šŸ˜‰

bt yeah.. i must say... amazin SS... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: deetha

hey guys!!!!! im back with the update...and this is specially dedicated to cherry!!!!!!!(luv_arsha) she really had worked hard...itna kaam agar office mei karege then promotion is 4r sure...šŸ˜† so here is the 3rd part of the 4 parts...yes in next part this ss would end...




arsha:






she sat and was abt to say smthng when he got up and strtd walking...she too joined him...they took a long walk along the shore...her heart was paining see him lyk dis ...very silent ...he looked lyk a body without soul...she cursed herself 4r this...

u moron!!!!!!! teri wajah se kunwar aisa hai...what have u done to him...tumhari uss ek galti ki wajah se isiki kya haalat bangayi...i hate u shakti...i hate u...

"dnt blame urself...galti meri thi"

she looked confused at him...

"aisa kyun keh rahe ho..."

"ur ri8 mujhe utna seriously lena nahi chahiye tha.."

"nahi kunwar"

"dnt call me lyk dat ...plzz...it kills"

he said as a drop rolled down his cheek ...he quitely layed on the sand...she sat beside him...she wanted to give him a tight warm hug that he can leave all the pain back...

"plzz kunwar im sorry...plzz"

"sorry ki koi jaroorat nahi hai shaks...sorry... shakti"

"kunwar plzz..."

"u know shakti tumhe abhi party mei hona chahiye..."he spoke never looking at her ,his gaze was fixed to the sky...

"ur wrong mujhe yahi hona chahiye"she tried to ccheer him up...

"haan...ur ri8 ...im wrong as always...and ur ri8 as usual...aaj bhi...uss din bhi.." his voice was shaking coz of the tears and the pain he was hiding ...

"kunwar!" she burst out loud keeping her head on his chest and hugging him tight...

he hugged her as tight as he could and pulled her on top of him...his tears which were hiding till now made their way out...

she cried loud...he comforted her...

"sorry...im sorry..."she continuosly mummbled during crying ...he quietly comforted her by tightening his grip...

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"shaks plzz dnt do this...mujhe pata hai tum aisa kyun keh rahi ho"

"ohh plzz kunwar...dnt be childish"

"baby ...plzz..believe me...bas 3-4 mnths ki baat hai...humari memories khafi hai mereliye...aur toh aur phone pe baat bhi kar skte hai...skype hai..."

"ohfo...kunwar why dnt u get this into ur mind...i dnt love u ..."

"no shaks dnt lie...mai apni shaks ko sab se acha jaanta hun"

"wait...tumhari shaks???? kunwar dnt expect more...mere peeche bohut saare log padte hai iska matlab ye nahi ki mai sabse pyaar karne lagun..."

"agar aisa hai toh ye humari relation jo 6 mnths se chal rahi hai uska kya kahogi????"

" oh...kunwar...really ur too innocent...mujhe teri cmpany achi lagi so i dated with u ...it doesnt mean ki i love u"

"shaks plzz dnt do this to us...i know tum ye sab kyun kehrahi ho??"

"oh stop it kunwar...im a dumbo that i forgot that u r 1 life 1women types...and ye hum hum kya laga rakha hai...i never loved u kunwar get it straight..."saying this she hopped into her car and drove off...

"shaks .plz...plzz shaks dnt do this to us...i can wait 4r u baby...i luv u baby and can wait 4r the whole life...y cnt u understand...dnt do this to us baby...plzz shaks ...plzz..."

he fell on knees and cried his heart out...

she drove ailessly ...she almost ran into a truck but took a sharp cut and gave a sudden halt at the side of the road...she bet her hand hard on the steering...

"why dnt u believe kunwar...y dnt u...mujhe itna ache se kyun jaante ho...cnt u jst hate me lyk i do...plzz hate me...plzz"

she shouted at top of her voice but no one was there to hear her...he is not there to cmfrt her...she rubbed her tears and headed to house...

there after they never met...neither he came to bid her bye...nor she tried to call him...

everyone in the set used to msg and chat with her...finally he decided and called her...neither she lifted his call nor msgd back...when he took the mobile 4rm others she used to cut...

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"i told u i can wait."

"but i dnt want u to be struck in one place in ur life."

"im exactly like dat now"

she looked at him...he was abt to rub her tears when she rubbed her cheeks on his face rubbin the tears of both...

missed u" she spoke


"me too..."

"mee too..."

"mee too..."

both looked at each other laughed their heart out..,...

she dug her face in the crook of his neck never wanting to leave him...

"its funny na shaks??"

"what???šŸ˜•"

"humari so called breakup yahi pe hui ...and now our patch up..."

"yeah.ri8"

they laughed again...but interupted by his ring...

she pulled his mobile out of his pocket

"ab bhi isi ko use kar rahe ho??"

"haan..u know my bff gave me"

"oh really"

they both laughed but her smile vanished as she same the name of the msg sender...

"ye charlie tumhe aadhi raat ko msg kyun kar rahi hai??? ,...kya kar rahe ho baby ...???"she imitated charlie...

kunwar laughed...

"oh shaks plzz ...tumhe pata hai she is just mah frnd ...aur u know that wo chipakti jyaada hai...so leave it baby/...waise i rarely reply her..."

"matlab wo har roj msg karti hai??"

she rolled down and slept facing her back to him showing fake anger...he smiled at her childish behaviour...

he turned and pulled her to him by her waist...she ended crushing his chest with her back...

he turned making her on him...both facing the sky...


" really ...u still suck in acting baby...u know u cnt fool me...so dnt give it a chance..."

she pouted...he caught her lips with is hand and crushed them with his fingers...


"u kill me with this."

she turned slightly and saw him 4rm her corner of eyes...

"keep those away...i cnt breath"

she chuckled and turned front...she caught her hair and rubbed on his face expecting a irritated reaction...but to her surprse he was quite...

"kunwar doesnt it irritate u."

"nah ...im waiting to have this fragnance"

she was touched she turned slightly pushing her hair back she offered him her lips ...he gently took them into his...their legs played with each other...her left leg caressing his ri8 and his left her ri8...he caught her hands tight on her stomach ...the kiss was too soft and gentle...after smtym she pulled back and turned to him totally theirs chests crushed into each others...she slowly bent to catch his lips...he sucked her lower lip ...she was abt to pull it into a kiss when he pulled back...

this continue 4r 6-7 tyms...she got irritated...

"what???" she asked him...

"u know ur lips are very tasty" he smiled ...

" i guess i taste more better than this"she ran away 4rm there

"what!!!!!! did she jst say that...gosh man im getting crazy...shaks tumhe aisa nahi kehna chaiye tha...ab bach nai sakti dear..."her brushed his hair and ran after her...

finally he caught her and rolled down on the sand...

(dnt expect a bheega seen ...itna paani hai iska matlab ye nahi ke wo bheegengešŸ˜›)

they were full of sand he ended on her ...

"tumhe aise kehna nahi chahiye tha"

"kyu??"

"kyun ki mai kuch bhi kar sakta hun"

"kya karoge???"

" do u want me to tell u??"

"kyu keh nahi sakte???"


"baby dnt drive me crazy"

"agar kiya toh kya karoge??"

"hmm...not anymore"

he pulled his jacket and tee of ...she waited silently 4r him to cmplt his work looking at him with her seducing eyes...

"i missed u a lot in this 3 mnths"he said after a long kiss

"really tumhari kiss se aisa nahi laga" she teased him


he looked at her with a naughty smile and pulled her tee up in the next sec...

she layed there with hands up and still looking at him quitely...he crushed him more into her...she almost was half into the sand...he strtd kissing her down her neck and on the exposed chest ...she tried a lot to move but he caught her legs in btw his and his figers interwined with hers...

finally he looked at her...

"ab pata chal??"

"n...no!!!!!"she said breathing hard ...

"then experience it baby..."

he pulled her inner tight and kissed her and her body to the earnest...


"ab?? "


"umm...hmm" she couldnt utter any words...

he pulled her tee and put it on her and alse put his jacket on her...and he wore his tee ...
she still layed there on hte sand...

he layed beside her...

she moved closer to him and he pulled her onto him...she brought her knees close to her chest and slept on him digging her face onto his chest ...he hugged her tight...


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final part
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thats 4r now
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kriyaansh:



before she could protest he lifted her and made her sit in his car and drove off...

all were shocked,confused , angry and very tensed abt wat happened to her...


finally taani came
"sorry guys der hogayi...shall we go"

"haan"all said silently and walked back to their hotel...

days passed the gang always tried to find kriya where ever they went...finally on the 16th day they found her in a shopping mall...she was sitting in the food counter and eating a pastry ...rey was not able to cntrl more he was abt two feet away 4r kriya when arjun came and hugged kriya 4rm back...rey bet his fist on the nearby pillar...

"arjun ye kya kar rahe ho??"

"hugging my bestie"

"hmm...toh chale??"

"eah"

they left and rey was vry angry and hurt...his mind said that she moved on but his heart never agreed to it...again he startd struggling with mind and heart...


days passed on...after 5 days they were moving towards the bus as the driver said today they were gng to a waterfall nearby...the drver was taking the bus back to turn it .the gang saw a person who was in a hurry and was abt to be hit by their bus...rey and swayam pulled him back...

"arey dekhke yaar!!!!!!"both said...

"driver dekh ke nahi gaadi peeche lesakte??" vicky shouted...

"arey unki koi galthi nahi.mai hi jaldi mai..."the man turned and all were dumbstruck...he was arjun...

"and thanks 4r saving me..."

"its...k...kk"rey replied...

"waise kya mai jaan sakt hu ki aap kaha jaa rahe ho??"

"ji wo hum waterfall ke paas jaa rahe hai"simmi said

"if u dnt mind beech nei mera ghar hai can u drop me there?"

"yeah"swayam


the journey was quiet...finally arjun asked the driver to stop..

"so reyaansh. ...ri8??"
rey nodded

"so plzz if u dnt mind mere ghar me coffe keliye chalenge??"

"nahi...u carry on..actua.."rey

"arey aise kaise aap logon ne meri jaan bachayi aur mujhe lift di...u have to"

finally they agreeed and followed him

as they entered they were shocked...kriya's and her mom s pic was hanging on the front door...

"aunty dekhiye koun aaya hai"

smriti was also shocked to see them...all were qiute...

"waise aunty meri jhalli kaha hai??"

"woh baahar gayi"

"KYA??? "he almos shouted all looked at hm cnfused

" bahar gayi wo bhi bina mujhe inform kiye???"

"kaha"aur kab gayi aunty???"

"kaha gayi pata nahi par 1 hr hua hai...par tum itna tensed kyun??"

"jhalli im gonna kill u 4r this..."he almost ignored smritis qsn and called kriya..

"kriya kaha ho??"

"wo mai ghar ke paas jo temple hai na waha aayi thi"

"toh mujhe bataya kyun nahi???"

"arey ghar ke paas hi toh hai"

"phir bhi...MAINE TUMSE KAHA GHAR KE BAHAR KADAM RAKHTE HI MUJHE BATA"

he shouted...

"so.sorry"

"now i want u back in 2 mins...ri8 now here.in ur home...mai tumhare ghar pe hun..."

"tum ghar kyun aaye ho??? aur maa ...maa ko kuch bataya??"

"shut up and cm..."

he shouted and cut the call...

"aisa chilla kyun rahe ho beta..."


"toh aur kya karoon aunty ...use dipression hai.kab kaha aur kaise gir gayegi pata nahi...aur dawayi lene mei jyaada der hui toh kuch bhi ho sakta hai..."


all were taken a back...


"depression???" rey asked loud...

"haan teri wajah se"

"meri wajah se????'

"haan usne tumhari dil thodi ...uske liye apne aapko blame karti rahi aur tumse door rehne ki wajah se depression mei chali gayi..."

"aur haan tum yahi soch rahe ho na ki mai koun hu aur ye sab kaise jaanta hun???... actually mai uska senior tha school me...meri behan jaisi hai...jab wo mumbai se wapas aayi toh ek din usne sab kuch mujhe bataya and rote rote depression mei chali gayi...wo toh acha hua im a doctor,...warna pata nahi mai kya karta...uski treatment chal rahi hai ...and on a serious note uski haalat bohut kharab hai."

all gasped...he narrated all the story y kriya left and broke up with rey...

"par usne mujhe bataya kyun nahi???" smriti


"kyun ki aapko woh uski wajah se dukhi nai dekhna nahi chahti... aunty plzz...mei rey ko 5 din se follow kar raha hun...aur zaroorat se jyaada samaj gaya hun use...plzz accept him"

smriti turned back to see rey on his knees folding his arms as if pleading her and crying to the worst...

he didnt speak anything but his silence explained all to smriti...


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hope u like it
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hayeee...loved ur each and every part Deetha!
really u just create magic !!!šŸ˜
it get immense pleasure in reading ur FF or SS dear...ā˜ŗļø
really very well done nd keep it up !!!!šŸ‘
Do keep giving us such treats on both arsha nd kriyaansh dear...😃

am just deeply,immensly in luv with ur writing skills !!!!😳

very well done cuz u just rocked it !!!!šŸ‘šŸ¼
ur creativity...emoticons...execution nd concept everything is just Fab !ā¤ļø

so,continue writing...ā­ļø
pls update the next part sooon nd do PM me for sure !😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha

hayeee...loved ur each and every part Deetha!
really u just create magic !!!šŸ˜
it get immense pleasure in reading ur FF or SS dear...ā˜ŗļø
really very well done nd keep it up !!!!šŸ‘
Do keep giving us such treats on both arsha nd kriyaansh dear...😃

am just deeply,immensly in luv with ur writing skills !!!!😳

very well done cuz u just rocked it !!!!šŸ‘šŸ¼
ur creativity...emoticons...execution nd concept everything is just Fab !ā¤ļø

so,continue writing...ā­ļø
pls update the next part sooon nd do PM me for sure !😃


Absolutely true just love ur work!!!!
Do keep writing!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
48...
2 more pages 2 go...

sry... us tym kuch prob hogyi thi so ni kar payi...
abi b chup k aayi hu 4 2 mins only... hehehehe... šŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago
arey... ye to 49th page hogya... 🤣

now 1 more 2 gooo...

yyyeeeaaa...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: akku16

arey... ye to 49th page hogya... 🤣


now 1 more 2 gooo...

yyyeeeaaa...


hey is there any demand??
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely7010


hey is there any demand??



yes dear... deetha said ki 50th page pe she's gonna update... so dats y v r continuosly postin... 😃

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