About Last Night THREAD 3**Part 27 - 37**

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

simply beautiful..very well written..😊

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devsum

@devsum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Absolutely fabulous, but checking for the update. I jut love the way you are showing Arnav, and how he is handling his feelings and his guilt. And also the way you have portrayed Khushi. It is absolutely true that we can forgive our loved ones, but that does not mean that it does not hurt. Thanks for the pm.

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

I'm so so glad that she voiced her concern. It is very likely that Khushi will forgive him but the hurt that she has received from him, a person she loves beyond reason, because he believed the worst of her will be extremely painful. You've remained true to the characters you've created. Lovely update! :)

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

res :D :D :D

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Aww. . . . Arnav was crying??
Say what you may, about him deserving much more punishment than what he's getting, for not trusting Khushi, I still can't see him like this. . . . .

That makes me feel all empty-ish!! Not making sense?! Oh, well. . . That's how I feel when I see him or read about him crying. . . :'(

And Khushi was the right mixture of anger, despair, and love today. I like!! :D
Right from ignoring her husband's choice of her saree, to the scene when she looked at the tears in her husband's eyes. . .

Now I'm curious to see how his tears affects her. . . .
Can't wait until tomorrow ;) :D

Thanks for the PM. . . . :) <3

Edited by -_-harsh42 - 13 years ago

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Kookiemonster

@Kookiemonster

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

i like it how the story is shaping and the best part is that u have kept all characters in place.

ASR is still the same ASR and KKG is still the same .

u are like the best updater ever..

keep up the good work.

Edited by kookie2020 - 13 years ago

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Nazibah

@nazibah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

OHHH I feel so bad for them both of them love each other but they are also still hurt their love story will never be easy will it? but at least he let her see the tears she needed to see😊

Edited by nazibah - 13 years ago

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e_enigma

@e_enigma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

This is so breathtaking.

Gosh. Especially loved how you finished this chapter.

Letting her see his tears. Ah. Wonderful.

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Smita

@..Smita..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

An emotional yet very beautiful update!And again,exceptionally well written,as always!👏

I loved Arnav here-his understanding of his wife's likes pleasures,his husbandly pride,the way he abducted her,the way he posed the correct question in the correct manner and lastly his reaction to what she said!

I can totally understand what Khushi is going through and m glad she's telling it all to him,without holding back anything.

Thanks for the pm!

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Gargee

@Gargee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

You have always found it remarkably easy to believe the worst of me. That hurts."

There, you summed up the very essence of the Arnav-Khushi relationship, there. he's unwilling to let her into his heart- yet she somehow always finds a way... and leaves him feeling angry and apprehensive- which makes him react in the worst possible way- hurting her and convincing himself in thinking the worst about her.

Beautifully portrayed as usual! 👏

Thanks for the PM!