About Last Night THREAD 3**Part 27 - 37**

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vidya.sanjay

@vidya.sanjay

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

It was such a sweet way to make up.
Arnav respecting Khushi's feelings and making up is really wonderful.
Thanks for the PM.

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arhi__4ever

@arhi__4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Emotional update

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

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oops-whoops

@oops-whoops

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

its finally good 2 see two mature adults in love talking and listening to each other.

Edited by oops-whoops - 13 years ago

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

wow khushi...in ur ff never fails to amaze me she loves him forgives him for wat he did but cant forget the idea that her husband thought dat she can be after a married man...loved it thanks for the pm:)

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

To all Fellow Fashionistas:

Khushi in a sunflower yellow saree

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medha

@medha16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

i loved khushi here...her last few words almost made me cry!!!lovely update...

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

awww this was such a beautiful part

so emotional n touching..

loved it

fab work hun

take care

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Krani

@Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

I dno't think I've ever been this excited to receive a PM.

*Edited*

Okay, you have blown me away with you writing once again.

Man I am actually really happy that you made Khushi have that breakdown, because while it is in Khushi's heart to forgive everyone, it cannot be easy to know that the person you loved initially believed you to be a home-wrecker.

And so I am glad that through this part, through this breakdown she is finally getting the closure she deserves.

The thing is many authors would once again go down the predictable path of Khushi being unhappy and angry and unforgiving towards Arnav which would result in him repenting for his sins.

Or it would be that Khushi has understood and forgiven him completely and put everything behind her and they are living happily ever after.

But you combined the two and gave us a more realistic view on things. And I hope this happens in the show, because this is how I imagine Khushi to be like. She is forgiving by nature, but Arnav needs to understand the pain he caused her.

The last sentence where she makes him look up to see the tears in his eyes - My mouth dropped open. That made one vivid image in my mind, and my heart skipped a beat at that. You have an amazing way with words. I absolutely love this FF. I can't wait to read more!

Thanks for the PM!

PS: Sorry if my comment is a bit disjointed. I usually write whatever comes to my mind, and half the time my mind is jumping from one place to another :p

Edited by Krani - 13 years ago

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Ajita Spencer

@sini1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Today's update was an emotional one . Her actions and reactions are completely justified , and Aawwh ... nice to know at least he putting some effort into repairing what he himself has broken . Thanks Maya Loved the update , Muuaahh... 🤗 🤗