ArHi SS: Memories... Part 3; Page 26 (Completed)

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Safiya

@ssafiyaa

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

It was great.. Loved how much of an effort he has to put into tryin to avoid her.. nd still hes not able to forget her... He evn conjures her up in his dreams...

Loved the ending, it was full of hope for a new tmrw..

Wud love to see u continue this..

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Fabulous OS. I am waiting for him to start acting on his decision to go get her!

Pls continue soon.

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Awww this was so sad!!!!
U wrote it beautifully!!!

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Tia.0

@Tia.0

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Such a heartfelt piece, Pearl. Make it a ss. This piece has so much potential.

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Mind blowing... amazing... awesome... loved it...

The above words says it all... how much I loved this ss... please update and do pm me... thank you

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Ishrafan11

@Ishrafan11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Beautiful and emotional OS love the last line he had her he lost her now was the time to win her again.

Edited by shyperson - 13 years ago

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farfar319

@farfar319

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

aww sucks that it was 2 years, but still loved it!

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SedonaScarlet

@SedonaScarlet

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Loved it!

God Arnav creates WAY too many problems for himself,doesnt he? :/

Is there gonna be a second part to this one? *Hopeful*

Thanks for the PM! :D

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@Jhalak29

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Absolutely Completely loved it... do continue will wait for the second part..

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--Sobi--

@--Sobi--

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

This was amazing Sai!!!

Even i want her to win her back...will it be too much if I ask you to write a part 2...on him winning her back!!!😳

This is the ASR, I am looking for!!!

I just loved you style of writing...I was so lost in it!!!

Superb piece of work!!