ArHi SS: Memories... Part 3; Page 26 (Completed)

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cuteheart96

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

I can feel wat he is feeling plz conti. How he will win her back

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rima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

continue please. it's good. please make the wining back real fun

Edited by rima - 13 years ago

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Pooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

I cried like hell :( Too good! The comparison with water/paper was phenomenal :)

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Rumaisa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

hi hun

beautiful os

im hoping u continue wid a 2nd part...

thanks for the pm

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Jahnvi Mehra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

its beautiful, fabulously written...loved it...thnx for PM

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-doe-eyes-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

and you call this a naive attempt?? This is amazing! The hurt, the pain, the longing, all so potent- and the imagery so strong I felt this wonderful sense of place :) And especially the poignant ending- a beautiful positive note with lots of possibilities for the future, and the symbolism as well...

TRULY BEAUTIFUL :) :)

Oh and I hope your exams went well:)

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kiran deep kaur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

heart touching awesome os ..loved it ...thnks for pm😳

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Geet24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Oh... Loved It Dear :))Thanks 4 the PM :)

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pc17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Pearl! I loved this-your writing is as elegant and beautiful as your name! Absolutely loved it! I think you're fabulous when it comes to writing OSs 😉 You always brilliantly depict intense emotions.