IPKKND SS: Fraternizing With The Enemy[Chapter 4]

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saba

@ASR6262

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

AWESOME UPDATE PLEASE CONTINUE SOON

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

LOVED IT!!!!

I loved how he watched her.

I loved how she felt secure with him.

And the kiss... GOD IT WAS AMAZING!!!

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Are you kidding me? You can write kissing scenes just as amazingly as your writing.

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Apples94

@Apples94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

I just read your ss I love it
Can't wait to read more :)

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-FarwiiDobaara-

@-FarwiiDobaara-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Aww.. Arnav&Khushi kissed 😳

Can't wait to read more (:

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arhiluv101

@arhiluv101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

res!

please update soon

and pm me too

keep up the FANTASTIC work!

thanx -arhiluv101

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

Omg... They kissed!!! I loved the update. I wonder how they will react once they come back to reality. I can't wait for the next part. Please continue soon.

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

They kissed!!!aaah!😳 yay!!!
u r saying dat its a vry crucial chapter for future updates..
dnt knw abt dat..bt i adored dis chapter..first liked hw they were feeling guilty abt hurting each othr n made up..
loved d whole amusement park thng..felt like i had to go immediately to Nicco Park!😛
i laughed reading d stomach grumbling thng😛 ur mention of so much food made my mouth water..n m craving so much for d KFC burger..
n d kiss was d icing on d cake(cnt gt my mind off food nw😛)..d firecrackers in d bakground..ah,lovely!!