PAYBACK - RTMC (Three Shot) Last part pg 8 - Page 9

Originally posted by: sparksfly

FINALLY unresng !! 😆 Yup,finally my wait ends!😆

i just luvd it !! ⭐️

it was hillarious !! 😃

moral - tit 4 tat n God works in mysterious ways !!

perfectly shown by a humurous way by u !! 😆

put a hUge smile on ma face !! 😃 i'm sooo glad to hear that!

Veer is soo...sweet n naughty !!

kya punishmnt hai !!! 😳

awww...he calld her 2 dry his hair n carried her ...😳

luvd dis -

When he tried to clear his eyes with his hands more soap got in them as his hands were also soapy. He was helpless'somehow he cleaned his eyes with the towel. And then he waited'with stinging eyes, soapy body and shivering in the cold as he was wet from the rain. He made silent pleas to Water god to rain through the bathroom shower, singing various bhajans and replacing the respective god's name with water god. And this is how poor Veer waited for the water to come soon. 🤣 🤣 🤣 mujhe yeh likhne mein bhi bada mazaa aaya

bechare Veer ko aadhe ghante tak wait karna pada...n bhajan gane pade !! 😉

in husband n wife ke jhagade mein bechare rats maare gaye !! 🤢 woh kehte hain na...no pain no gain...bas maine pain aur gain alag alag logon ko de diya 😆

likd d names u usd 4 rats !! 👍🏼

n unka funeral bhi maast tha !!! 😆

ab anu ka khana khaya hai to ...😆

u r a gr8 writer !! 👏 👏 ⭐️ thank u

ur story has romance...😳... humor...😆...traged (rats )......n perfect discrption !!!⭐️

luvd it !! thx a lot!!

do write more...

n sorry 4 d really really l8 reply !! 😭 😭 no worries😃 thx for ur luvly comment😊

best wishes 4 xams...🤗...n loads of luv...🤗

thx & wish u da same

hugs & kisses😃

Originally posted by: aysha1989

First I would say that... I love your writing...
Thank you so much for adding me to your buddy list and thanks for the pm too...😊

Originally posted by: tejjo

sorry 4 late comment dear
really sorry
arre plz don't say sorry...i knw u had xams
im little sad to know that the story is finished aww, sorry but i don't think i had anything else to write in this story

but the last update is mindblowing,loved the ananya n veer's scenes,they both r so cute

omggg anu ka khana...agar veer kha leta to uska kya hota... band baj jati!!!😆

Hmmm...veer was so naughty...bt loved them yr
loved ur story n concept
loved ur writing...u r fabulous writer... THank u sooo much dear!!😃

Thanks 4 this beautiful story dear,pls come with new story like this
i'm thinking abt it but xams are the bane of my existence!!!😡
thanks 4 pm
sorry 4 late comment

thx for ur luvly comment😊

luv u

Originally posted by: Rapunzzel

awesome ss..

loved the way u write...

waitng to read more ff's from u

thanxs for the pm...

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

very sweet story dear 👏 👏 thanx di!

loved it so much😛

Veer n Anu is so cute couple 😳

loved their scenes alot ⭐️

hmm Anu left all on her fate n nate is also supported her 😊

wow , Veer got his promotion 😛

thank god he didn't eat sp. food made by his lovely wife Anu 😊 warna band baj jati!😆

and Anu stars are very good that day ⭐️

n Veer's bad bec when went to bath unfortunately no water supply 😆 😆

Anu u forget to tell this

poor veer 😕

anyways u told ur prank to him that's good Anu just like loyel housewife😛

but what abt bitter coffe he did drink it 😲

so Punishment must be there for u from Veer 😉

I also like his punishment ☺️ glad u liked it😳

really I like this but what it ended 😭 Ab three shot tha...end toh hona hi tha

lov u ⭐️

thx so much for ur comment...luv u😃

Originally posted by: aroojm

heyy firsy of all u did an amazing job i loved it soo please do update soon nd thanks for the PM 👏