PAYBACK - RTMC (Three Shot) Last part pg 8 - Page 10

i just read d first part..it was awsm...esp the the coffee🤣

Awesome story

Originally posted by: sweetshera

Awesome story

luvd it so much

so hilarious

These 2 r truely couple made n mad fr each other

write more

luv u.

Originally posted by: --Ruchi--

OMG I am ROFLing after reading the epilogue and your last line🤣🤣 poor mick and jerry...I mean they died ...sorry but I could'nt control my laughter..if veer would had eaten this lunch then God knows his condition😳😆

Okay..now coming to the story..its very naughty and sweet...they way anu planned a payback is really hilarious...I love water supply problem😛

OMG that bitter coffee,veer's mood went off..poor he😆

and at last I love love their sweet romantic kiss.😳

About your writing,you wrote it wonderfully,I loved your writing style❤️

Phewww!!!I think I have written such a long comment for the first time on any FF/SS/OS😳

Thanks so much for PM.

now i hv completed 2nd nd 3rd part too..i lvd the 3rd part..attitude of veer..yes yes i hv done..kitna mast bolega rajat...

Originally posted by: pranita1202

part 1

nice start

it was gr8 2 see VeeNYA TO EJOY THE MARRIED LIFE

LOVED ANNAYA 'S ATITUDE 2 SETTLE THE SCORES

PART2

annaya is arming up face her hubby

gr8 idea 2 handle ur hubby by getting his mom on ur side

ruby ruby ruby

don't build castles in air

he is not into u not coz something is wrong wid u

but he is head over heels in love wid HIS MISCHEVIOUS ANANYA

LOVED UR DV TOUCH in ur ff man! i really loved that ff

loved anu n nivi convo

part 3

glad veer got the deal

anu finally decided 2 leave everything to fate

part4

SAVE BEST FOR THE LAST

u r last part suits this saying

wat superb part

finally scores r settled

""When you want something, all the universe conspires in helping you to achieve it.""

agar tum kisi cheez ko sacchay dill se chaaho toh saari kaainaat tumhein usse milaane ke liye jutt jaati hai...

see anu finally everything fell in place

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RIP TO mickey n jerry

hope u in better place

my condolences r with MINNIE N TOM

TOM now u realise jerry's importance . huh!

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MR Ratatouille hows the trip 2 india

hope u try our indian delicacies

visit TAJMAHAL its as stunning as effel tower

it not possible visit chaupatii n try the paani puri

i m sure in paris it u will make paani puri in u r restaurant