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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

agree with you maansee

Hain... Me lost reading t updates
Kalse my niend udying
Reading t updates😛l
Can't wait to read on
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Posted: 13 years ago

part 25

they r so cute fighting with each other
inka fight bhi kitna sweet sweet hain
loving this teasey maan
she did leave!!!


part 26

now i need to call him a majnoo here..lolz
both r missing each other
cant wait for them to be face to face..

part 27

oh that was breath taking.. closeness
uff why dud that stupid nandini came in that time..GRRR

part 28

no complains abt geets behaviour.. she never understood him.. except that she knew he was in pain


part 29

maan sweet heart plz dont lose it.. not now
u really need to be there for her & make her realize all ur feelings.. not just now.. from day one
how her mere presnece effected u


part 30

oh god he really took everything out on himself
but got caught
even geet gave in to t pain
twist!!!

part 31

wow that exactly wat geet had been facing all this while humilation
maan needs to have taste of it now
but precap sounds promising


part 32


that was just perfect
everyone..everything was apt
loved geets gesture.. running st to him


part 33

loved how they stood for each other
he infront of t family & she infront of t family


part 34

maan handled media so well
geets complete submission coming to picture now
warna tho it had become his complete submission


part 35

geet is so bholi...
maan also sweet here .. loved t way he slowly held her hand

part 36

oh that was yet another dreamy moment
how long can they deny each other...

thanku



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Posted: 13 years ago

part 37

aloo parata!!!
i rolled laughing!!
woh bhi bland
becahri geet


part 38

beautiful shopping!!! like a dream.. actually not even a dream.. she could dare to
that was so sweet of maan
but as usual she never understood!!!


part 39

beautiful poem ayu!!!
uff ho.. abhi to nandini bhi nahi ayeen..why did maan have to get distracted.. wink wink
that was really romantic the drive & the whole cute ottage thingy

part 40

that was so romantic first kiss
thanks to anni!!
muskan shaking her head.. uff geet tu anniversary bhool gayen!!!

part 41

the horse ride ..so different
i liked the whole day out they had
touching maan reminded her abt the roses & cards
precap is so exciting!!!
blush blush


part 42

awesome.. she was so direct in her words
loved how maan finally said why he was stopping himself.. & still held back
brilliant..he said he would know it!!!
just simply awesome


part 43

nice to see them opening to each other..
especially see the teasy side of geet
umm no the gift
muskan scratching her head!!!


part 44

that was so sweet
ring!!! hain me dreaming the moment
thats really special
u made it all so magical
thanks again


part 45


sizzling hot update
finally they r together..one!! in true sense


part 46

finally she did know he loved her so madly from day one!!!
i liked how cutely he said that
now how will he stay away from her..

part 47

now geet can't even go out!!
woh tho hona hi tha
yeh anni ko bhi aabhi maan ka mood kharab karna tha
bechari geet will have to face maans gussa


part 48

oh ho.. she really stuck between maan & family
aab kya hoga!!
knowing maan he will not spare her.. wink wink

part 49

aab bhuktoo!!!
that was typical MSK gussa.. just that humari geet is so used to it
so maan babu was busy spying on arjun.. aur humari geet bechari...hi hi


part 50

maan still not talking to anni
that was really sweet of geet to have made him realize his mistake
loved how anni just hugged him ..at his one call
oops daadi did catch the love birds nain mataka.. loz

part 51

maan is getting naugthier every day
kanhi bhi shuru hojata hain
but I love it !!!
daadi too shoo cute...'
uff maan gussa again


part 52

GRRR
those relatives were so mean... good maan replied to them
oh ho.. geet took out her frustration on Maan
aab kya hoga..

part 53

that was really a hot punishment!!!
next part last part.. nahi ...


last part

simply beautiful
brij words were so true!!!
awesome Ff sweetheart
thanks for giving us her .. or should I say their complete surrender!!!

epilogue

so drreamy.. their little one!!
they just lived for each other then...
the whole journey was dreamy!!!
magical
just perfect
thanku thanku thanku so much!!!
love

muskan

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

part 37

aloo parata!!!
i rolled laughing!!
woh bhi bland
becahri geet


part 38

beautiful shopping!!! like a dream.. actually not even a dream.. she could dare to
that was so sweet of maan
but as usual she never understood!!!


part 39

beautiful poem ayu!!!
uff ho.. abhi to nandini bhi nahi ayeen..why did maan have to get distracted.. wink wink
that was really romantic the drive & the whole cute ottage thingy

part 40

that was so romantic first kiss
thanks to anni!!
muskan shaking her head.. uff geet tu anniversary bhool gayen!!!

part 41

the horse ride ..so different
i liked the whole day out they had
touching maan reminded her abt the roses & cards
precap is so exciting!!!
blush blush


part 42

awesome.. she was so direct in her words
loved how maan finally said why he was stopping himself.. & still held back
brilliant..he said he would know it!!!
just simply awesome


part 43

nice to see them opening to each other..
especially see the teasy side of geet
umm no the gift
muskan scratching her head!!!


part 44

that was so sweet
ring!!! hain me dreaming the moment
thats really special
u made it all so magical
thanks again


part 45


sizzling hot update
finally they r together..one!! in true sense


part 46

finally she did know he loved her so madly from day one!!!
i liked how cutely he said that
now how will he stay away from her..

part 47

now geet can't even go out!!
woh tho hona hi tha
yeh anni ko bhi aabhi maan ka mood kharab karna tha
bechari geet will have to face maans gussa


part 48

oh ho.. she really stuck between maan & family
aab kya hoga!!
knowing maan he will not spare her.. wink wink

part 49

aab bhuktoo!!!
that was typical MSK gussa.. just that humari geet is so used to it
so maan babu was busy spying on arjun.. aur humari geet bechari...hi hi


part 50

maan still not talking to anni
that was really sweet of geet to have made him realize his mistake
loved how anni just hugged him ..at his one call
oops daadi did catch the love birds nain mataka.. loz

part 51

maan is getting naugthier every day
kanhi bhi shuru hojata hain
but I love it !!!
daadi too shoo cute...'
uff maan gussa again


part 52

GRRR
those relatives were so mean... good maan replied to them
oh ho.. geet took out her frustration on Maan
aab kya hoga..

part 53

that was really a hot punishment!!!
next part last part.. nahi ...


last part

simply beautiful
brij words were so true!!!
awesome Ff sweetheart
thanks for giving us her .. or should I say their complete surrender!!!

epilogue

so drreamy.. their little one!!
they just lived for each other then...
the whole journey was dreamy!!!
magical
just perfect
thanku thanku thanku so much!!!
love

muskan


Thanks dear for such an awesome comments ..

Really part by part comments ... Thank you so much for this...means a lot

A very very big hug from me... To both mumma and angel...

-- Anu
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi muski ...

on line this time ...dono kaise ho ... itna der tak mat jaga karo . not good for health...

so enjoying your days while reading ffs.. good...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Different concept !!! Loved the ff !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really awesome story! Loved it totally.
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Posted: 12 years ago
@tellyme: Awesum, superb n fantastic!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
since yesterday iwas reading from the start
at that iwas not even a member , i could not comment but
now i want to tell how much iloved this story and concept that was really nice updates dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
aye haye such a beautifull story:)
Edited by xoanyaxo - 12 years ago

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