Her complete submission-#6 EPILOGUE PG 46/MAY 11 - Page 28

👏Wow, Just Finished the Story! AMAZING ⭐️

awsum didi
loved her complete submission
u r an awsum writer didi but u finished it :(
chalo all gud tings cum to end and dis ff is outstanding give us a beautiful epilogue 🤗

the way u showed everything become alright between geet and maan, step by step in their relation is amazing.

completed reading it now...
it is really amazing awesome superb wonderful...
loved their journey...
how maan changed sooo much...

Wow Amazing superb FF
Beautiful journey of maaneet 😊 😳
Loved it 👏 👏 👏

read ur whole story at one go

Originally posted by: muskanp

thanks for the sweet pmi am just glued on to the ff ever since

thought of commenting.. so far..

prologue

very interesting just loved it.. so much of innocent love

part 1
beautiful.. the way u portrayed their unknown love..
or should i say known yet kept silent!!!

oh the encounter to his anger at that tender age...:(

part 2
poor baby geet!! kitna gussa
uff.. but then he was truly effected by her.. guess was innocent himself didn't know why she bothered him so much
thats so cute actually!!!
lovely poem that u included

part 3
so much happened
loved how u showed the time pass by
best part was u not showing geet sulk
loved how positivily she took everything & her feeling for maan became more than she could put in words
loved this matured Maan!!! taking care of Handa family.. indrectly..rajji's wedding etc
awesome

part 4
how sweet the way she tried not coming infront of him... just not to bother him
this really adorable
phir bhi Mr gussa khurana.. got a good reason to burst out!!
uff ho.. aab bhicari geet karen tho kya karen

part 5
no no me like this gussa wala maan.. wink wink
oh so much happened..:(
angry maan still realize his restlessness is his love!!!
geet is stuck!!!
but mohinder very sensible dad!!! really grt he didn't ask maan to marry her
good going sweet heart

part6

lovely poem by piya!!
dono taraf aag hain barbar lagi
loved brij here.. he knew excatly wat was happening between them all this years
umm so they selected yash...
precap.. offcourse maan!!!

part 7
reason why geet loved him so much.. simple... ishq pe kisi ka zor nahi !!!
another beautiful poem from piya!!
ahh!!! shaadhi ho bhi gayee!!!
ok.. me doing a yeppy dance now!!
but i guess.. mr gussa singh khurana is just been woken up
wonder how will he torture her.. :(.. me so scared

part 8
umm.. so he married her to calm his restlessness
but his ego surfacing at the thought he had to propose to her...AAGGRRR
pagal.. u love her so much.. u will do anything for her...
yeh tho kuch bhi nahi...
aab dehko.. kya kya hota hain

part 9
maan is torturing himself..more than her
geet is so confused... seeing maan calm..lolz
poor girl is so used to his shouting

part 10
that was so mean of him
but I guess.. it is the peak of his arrogance!!!
can see geet breaking!!! feel sad for her
i guess things will change..when he doesnt get wat he wants
he is not realizing..its her presence that gives him this imense peace

part 11

loved the pizza party
she felt so elated.. thinking maan loved her
this guy is ruining everything with his stupid ego
wonder how she react!!!
me scared of the precap

part 12

yah true.. even i know people...who have terrible situation at home but manage a strong personality outside
as u rightly put.. it is there escape zone
she didn't even know how to put frwd her thoughts
maan who was just obessessed with her physically now.. got the exact ego boost he wanted
but still dont see the love from his side.. :(
london project.. will geet go away??

part 13

awesome poem by rachna
loved the poster too!!

this is so natural the way geet reacted to his humilation
yes she still loves him.. but she is more matured & knows better way to keep herslef happy
wonder how will maan react when he realizes she is not there

part 14

finally MSK's heart overpowered his ego
he definitely needed this separation to realize his feeling
poor geet still misses him so much

part 15
lovely
bechara maan!!!
he better realizes all his deeds..
there is so much he needs to undo.. :(

part 16

awesome poem rachana!!! babes u rock
finally he did find her number
oops she cut the call.. aab kya hoga
well maan beta u created that mess

part 17

lovely song sugested by arzo
geet is misunderstanding him
sadly now too
bechari always did!!!
glad atleat maan knows how long he will have to wait!!
or should i say punishment period!!!

part 18

wonder how geet managed those words on the phone
his humilation really changed her

part 19

geet really had to be strong to say all that to maan
she some how managed all these days
now when he tries to get close .. how she will react or understand that

part 20

that would have been a blow to maan
geet still not understanding any of his moves.. :(
but cant blame her either

part 21

that was well deserved shouting & stopping
especially with all that no spark talk in past!!
bechari geet is more hurt in the whole process.. :(
but she never understood him at the first place
he atleast knew her.. but his ego stopped him.. :(
feel bad for both

part 22

geet really pushing her luck with maans temper
mr gussa singh khurana.. ko bechari kaisen hamdle karengi.. jab yeh sweety cuty handle nahi hota
mam going to parents place.. lolz.. she herself can't stay away from him

part 23

that was an emotional part
i could clearly their innocent love like earlier here
& her feeling is totally logical.. trust me thus can happen in real life.. especially if ur feeling for that person is true

part 24

oh geet why can't she understand anything abt his feeling..then & now!!!
he always did.. glad now his ego not coming in between
wat was the gift.. ?? muskan wondering!!

shall continue😛

Originally posted by: muskanp

thanks for the sweet pm i am just glued on to the ff ever since

thought of commenting.. so far..

prologue

very interesting just loved it.. so much of innocent love

part 1
beautiful.. the way u portrayed their unknown love..
or should i say known yet kept silent!!!

oh the encounter to his anger at that tender age...:(

part 2
poor baby geet!! kitna gussa
uff.. but then he was truly effected by her.. guess was innocent himself didn't know why she bothered him so much
thats so cute actually!!!
lovely poem that u included

part 3
so much happened
loved how u showed the time pass by
best part was u not showing geet sulk
loved how positivily she took everything & her feeling for maan became more than she could put in words
loved this matured Maan!!! taking care of Handa family.. indrectly..rajji's wedding etc
awesome

part 4
how sweet the way she tried not coming infront of him... just not to bother him
this really adorable
phir bhi Mr gussa khurana.. got a good reason to burst out!!
uff ho.. aab bhicari geet karen tho kya karen

part 5
no no me like this gussa wala maan.. wink wink
oh so much happened..:(
angry maan still realize his restlessness is his love!!!
geet is stuck!!!
but mohinder very sensible dad!!! really grt he didn't ask maan to marry her
good going sweet heart

part6

lovely poem by piya!!
dono taraf aag hain barbar lagi
loved brij here.. he knew excatly wat was happening between them all this years
umm so they selected yash...
precap.. offcourse maan!!!

part 7
reason why geet loved him so much.. simple... ishq pe kisi ka zor nahi !!!
another beautiful poem from piya!!
ahh!!! shaadhi ho bhi gayee!!!
ok.. me doing a yeppy dance now!!
but i guess.. mr gussa singh khurana is just been woken up
wonder how will he torture her.. :(.. me so scared

part 8
umm.. so he married her to calm his restlessness
but his ego surfacing at the thought he had to propose to her...AAGGRRR
pagal.. u love her so much.. u will do anything for her...
yeh tho kuch bhi nahi...
aab dehko.. kya kya hota hain

part 9
maan is torturing himself..more than her
geet is so confused... seeing maan calm..lolz
poor girl is so used to his shouting

part 10
that was so mean of him
but I guess.. it is the peak of his arrogance!!!
can see geet breaking!!! feel sad for her
i guess things will change..when he doesnt get wat he wants
he is not realizing..its her presence that gives him this imense peace

part 11

loved the pizza party
she felt so elated.. thinking maan loved her
this guy is ruining everything with his stupid ego
wonder how she react!!!
me scared of the precap

part 12

yah true.. even i know people...who have terrible situation at home but manage a strong personality outside
as u rightly put.. it is there escape zone
she didn't even know how to put frwd her thoughts
maan who was just obessessed with her physically now.. got the exact ego boost he wanted
but still dont see the love from his side.. :(
london project.. will geet go away??

part 13

awesome poem by rachna
loved the poster too!!

this is so natural the way geet reacted to his humilation
yes she still loves him.. but she is more matured & knows better way to keep herslef happy
wonder how will maan react when he realizes she is not there

part 14

finally MSK's heart overpowered his ego
he definitely needed this separation to realize his feeling
poor geet still misses him so much

part 15
lovely
bechara maan!!!
he better realizes all his deeds..
there is so much he needs to undo.. :(

part 16

awesome poem rachana!!! babes u rock
finally he did find her number
oops she cut the call.. aab kya hoga
well maan beta u created that mess

part 17

lovely song sugested by arzo
geet is misunderstanding him
sadly now too
bechari always did!!!
glad atleat maan knows how long he will have to wait!!
or should i say punishment period!!!

part 18

wonder how geet managed those words on the phone
his humilation really changed her

part 19

geet really had to be strong to say all that to maan
she some how managed all these days
now when he tries to get close .. how she will react or understand that

part 20

that would have been a blow to maan
geet still not understanding any of his moves.. :(
but cant blame her either

part 21

that was well deserved shouting & stopping
especially with all that no spark talk in past!!
bechari geet is more hurt in the whole process.. :(
but she never understood him at the first place
he atleast knew her.. but his ego stopped him.. :(
feel bad for both

part 22

geet really pushing her luck with maans temper
mr gussa singh khurana.. ko bechari kaisen hamdle karengi.. jab yeh sweety cuty handle nahi hota
mam going to parents place.. lolz.. she herself can't stay away from him

part 23

that was an emotional part
i could clearly their innocent love like earlier here
& her feeling is totally logical.. trust me thus can happen in real life.. especially if ur feeling for that person is true

part 24

oh geet why can't she understand anything abt his feeling..then & now!!!
he always did.. glad now his ego not coming in between
wat was the gift.. ?? muskan wondering!!

shall continue😛