Her complete submission-#6 EPILOGUE PG 46/MAY 11- Page 30

hey anu di I just read your whole ff in 18 hrs , can u belive it , its just awesome, mind blowing , out of world... so much love and passion between maaneet and the way you have written is so brilliantly. hats off 👏👏👏

Awesome FF!! Loved reading it!!

and i finally caught up...
sitting the whole evening and dying to read what happened next
needless to say...extremely romantic..
it was started with maan being a jerk and i mentally called him a kutta for torturing my poor soul
and sumwhr in the middle i was like..yes geet he deserves ur coldness...
and then i was maaf bhi kar do yaar..
and then haieyeee their romance..
its been long since i have read a ff and this is definitely one of them...her complete submission in every sense!!
there were so many naughty and romantic scenes but my most most most fav is their first kiss...precisely her first kiss
it was so sweet... romantic and heart touching..like the first brushes of your love after years of longing.
loved their roothna mana and of course the song acha tho mein haari chalo maan jao na..
she changed him..and he changed her
both completed each other in true sense!
loved the whole thing...
thank u for writing such a beautiful story.