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monsi08

@monsi08

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Loved it... I looovvveee happy endings 😃

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asrksr

@asrksr

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Beautiful!loved it!! Thank you for not stopping after 1st part.i know arnav was wrong,but khushi deserves a happy life and only he can give her true love. Thanks for the pm and sorry for the late reply.i had a really bad head ache. Waiting for next work...

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IF_Rocks

@IF_Rocks

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

beautiful.. very well written... loved the emotions of arnav and kushi... :)

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DarkDove

@DarkDove

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Hey dear!!

Im speechless!!! This OS and all these parts were sooo touching and emotional...

love how ASR transformed into a vulnerable arnav... it was beautiful to read, really.. I admire your writing style!!!

i love how he apologized to her the way she did... and of course she would forgive him eventually ... .

this was a masterpiece, i enjoyed reading it!!!

xxHaffie!

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appy

@appy_12

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Sweet! Really nice! Loved the way Khushi reacted! And I was pleasantly surprised when I saw your PM.. I almost thought you'd gone off into hibernation!

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flutterby

@flutterby

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

what can i say... 😆 more than what i havent said already???? 😳 ur depiction of their pain, angst, sadness, fear... is too marvelous... 👏 i had a big smile on my face when u made arnav do the uthak- baithak.. 🤣 it would be lovely if he did it in the serial as well.. 😆 and the way u ended was... so unexpected... 😊 but nevertheless it would have been the way the cvs would have shown in the serial... i am sure this os would have drained u as well... take care and keep PMing me.. 🤗

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: KaShGurTiLuverr
OMG Rae awesome OS x
Just loved it
Loved da way u made Arnie say sorry just like da way K did :D

Thank You sooo much, Sanzy!

I am so glad you enjoyed it! :)

Originally posted by: ashred12
brilliant piece..!!!

Awww! Thank You! :)

Originally posted by: Harshitha
i loved both the parts

Thank You! :)

Glad you liked my work.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Psychedelic
It was a very moving OS. I can actually see it happening too :) Very nicely done with the Sindoor ka Dabba and also bringing in the two other occasions that there was Sorry said between the two of them.

Ego holding back Arnav until the last moment. And then his confession. Disjointed Sentences, His emotions. His breakdown. I felt as if I was reading all the thoughts that was going on in his mind after he ran away in his car and broke down in the middle of the road. Add regret to that and this is what you would get! :)

Khushi would eventually forgive him. Even Sanaya said that. She would understand him. Loved the story as a whole! :)

That my friend is the best thing you could have said to me, so Thank You! :)

As a writer, I strive to achieve a state in my reader's mind where they are swayed by the words...although that is what I aim at, not something I necessarily achieve. Lol. But it feels great when you say that you did feel connected to the story and to the emotions! :)

Thank You so much...and his car break down scene served as an inspiration to many, myself included and the both the sorry scenes just affected me so much as a viewer. :)

Originally posted by: -Mayuri-
Loved it! Awesome job!

Thank You! :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: mjht4everr
hey dear it was really nice os
i loved it very emotional and heart wrenching
loved the conversion of an egoistic ASR to a child like arnav

Thank You sooo much!

And if you liked the change, you make me very satisfied! :D

Originally posted by: fatprincess
Oh my God ! Dat was beautiful . . . 😭 Goes so perfectly wid da actual personalities of da characters, like u kno if such situation arise dis might exactly be how da 2 of dem react. Hope this gets to da script writers coz i wanna see dis 4 real. Da part where ASR is cryin in front of his SUV was playin in my mind. Too good !👏👏👏

Awww! Dont cry! Happy end diya na...smile karo chalo! :D

And the personalities part...I am so glad you felt that way cos as a fanfic writer writing their take on the current track, I keep it as a strict rule to myself to keep as true to the characters as possible and I am glad you got that...means I am not doing too bad at it! ;) :D

Awww! You are too kind! Thank You so much! :)

And really...it was?! *Humbled*

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Firebolt
That was... I am trying to think of something to say... Well wow... Brilliant really. You captured their emotions extremely well...like spot on hon... I can actually see something like this happening on the show... And the way you went back and forth between A&K was very well done.. I loved it!!! The Arhi magic was full on...

Cheers

Thank You sooo much! You are too kind but well, I'll take it! ;) :D

I am so glad you enjoyed it and felt that it was true to the show! Thats a big compliment! :)

Originally posted by: zaniax
WOW!!! Tht was FAB!!!. Choo sweet, cute and Really touching . Loveddd everythin abt it specially those dialouges...they were very thoughtful . How I Wish we cud see somethin like this in d show..it wud be a such beautiful scene. 😍Brilliant piece of writing!!! 👏👏

Thank You sooo much, Zania! :) *Blush Blush*

I am so glad you enjoyed the plot and my style of writing! Means a lot. :)

Originally posted by: shobrakapooor
oh i juz lovd it.
u've shown arnav nd khushi's feelings perfectly!!
i juz lovd arnav. this tym he's nt d khadoos LG!! he feels guilty nd wants khushi to punish him.
nd khushi was so sweet as she doesnt want her arnavji to lower his heads infrnt of anyone! she didnt punish him but said dat next tym plz give chances. so lovely 👏
i lovd d concept of ur story.
superb lovd it.

Thank You sooo much! :)

You are right...that was the idea...Khushi cant see her Laad Governor being this weak even if it is in front of her or his own fault. :)

I am so glad you enjoyed my work. :)

Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago