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newmoon2011

@newmoon2011

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

awesome...very interesting start!
please continue soon

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

wow dat was very intense...pliiiz continue n thnx 4da pm

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Eleanor

@ElenaElenor

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

😍When you said gangster, I was already hooked

Especially a character like Arnav in the story

I really liked it and can't wait for the next update

Thanks for the pm 😊

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sval000

@sval000

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

loved it... thanks for the pm.. 😊

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Pr1yanka

@Pr1yanka

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

fresh story..pl pm me when u update..thx

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hilly

@hilly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

:o this is certainly mind blowing ! :D

I'm actually just speechless, the update was so intense, you got me hooked as if I was watching an action packed- suspence/romance !

Loved it ! I'm really eager now, simply can't wait for Ch 2 , but pleeasee try to update as soon as possible.. give up on your OS's for a bit, tehehee. Great job !<3

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

awesome start loved it i hooked can't wait for more loved it

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priyah_reddy

@priyah_reddy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Loved it is an understatement ... The story is damn gripping 😊 Waiting for more 😊 Plzzz update soon ...

Khushi and Arnav already have a memorabilia of each other (bullet and dupatta) ... And the story is full of suspense ... Y was Arnav shot and how is Shyam related to Arnav ... I knw i will have to wait for the other parts for these details to be revealed 😊

Loved it to bits 👏👏👏

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anumber1

@anumber1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Love it! I got a gangs of NY vibe from it! <3

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Harshitha Shankar

@-_-harsh42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Intense much??!! :D LOL

I say, Bring it on!!!
I'm alll for intense, baby!!! :D

Amazing storyline!!!!

Thanks for the PM. . . .

Waiting for the next update, which I hope will come soon enough??!! :D ;)