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queenie11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

This story seems amazing - I liked how she kept the bullet

What an interesting foundation for what may happen

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neena

@shadesofme

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

interesting start...cant wait for more...

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littlemoi

@littlemoi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Woah... so intense and interesting.. im hooked!!

Please continue soon!!

Thank you so much for the pm!!

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Zaynah

@Zaya.Beintehaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

oh wow a different type of story i like it ut i felt like crying seeing arnav in pain so do continue soon love it pm me

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tsultana

@tsultana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Omg!!! What a concept!!! Am bowled over! Man u had me glued from the first few lines!!
Plz plz pm me when u update! Am soo looking forward to the next part!
Well done!

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Mahnoor

@AngelMcQueen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

oh wow thats an hntresting story i like it update soon and dont forget to pm me

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Ajita Spencer

@sini1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Ok.. I liked it 👍🏼, nicely written, but to form an opinion I need to read more , So please update ASAP and if you can please send me a PM too.👏

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SankaDevi20

@SankaDevi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Oh wow! This is maha- intruiging yaar! Me loves it! Is arnav part of some gang? A good gang or a bad gang! And I loved the bullet removing scene! Very intense! So its Arnav and Aman.. very nice! I liked the way he sent her away before she would get involved in anything.. and the way she reminded him of his mother.. Great first chapter! Youve definately captured my attention and I love the tiny tweeking youve done to the characters .. awesomeee!