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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
after like ages u update
nice part dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
Finally u update...nice one... Now they r going 2 work together...m sooo excited...I hope everything goes well btw them...awesome part...waiting eagerly for ur update...cont soon...thanks for d PM... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Hiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved juhi
She is sweet
Kinda feel bad 4 Armaan
Can't wait 4 AR n atul 2 work 2gether
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Part-13

Next day in sanjeevani 9:30 am

All r standing at nurse station.

Sha-so dr.ridhima and dr.atul app dono ko ab niklena chahye

Both nodded n left.they reach there destination.both come out from the car n see beautiful n maximum storey 25 building

At-wow ridz bahar se kitni acha building hai to ander se kitni achi hogi haina

R-theek kaha atul per ab ander chale

Both enter n amazed to see office

R-atul chalo reception se armaan ke cabin ke bare main pouch te hai

At-theek hai chalo

Both go towards reception counter

Rep-hello how can I help you

At-actually we r here to meet armaan

Rep-u mean armaan sir

Atul nodded

Rep-who are u both

At-we r drs from sanjeevani

Rep-ohh now I understand u r dr atul n you dr ridhima right

Both nodded

Rep-ok u can go

At-where is armaan cabin

Rep-8th floor left side

Ri-thanks

Both go towards lift n reach 8th floor

At-ridz kitna acha office hai na

Ri-looking here n there-yes its really nice

Ridhima see armaan cabin

Ri-atul vo raha armaan ka cabin

At-per tume kaise pata

Ri-stupid door per likha hua hai armaan malik

At-ok ok n sorry

Both knock the door

Like always Ridhima heartbeat racing fast fast

Vo-come in

Both enter n see armaan sit on rocking chair reading file wearing light blue jeane and slik grey shirt with loose tie n looking dashing

At-nervous-vo hum actually

Ar-plz sit

Both sit opposite to armaan

Atul look at the cabin .armaan look at ridhima she also look at atmaan

Ar-shall we start

At-ofcouse

Ar-pehle app dono ko sanjeevani ke complete record ki imformation deni hoga phir hum aage dekhe ge ki kya kerna hai

Both nodded

They discussed about it half an hour

Ridhima was about to say some thing then someone knock door

Ar-come in

Person open the door person is juhi

Ar-surprized-mom app yaha

Atul n ridhima also look at her n smile n juhi smile back

J-kyun main yaha nahi aa sekti

Ar-mom maine aisa keb kaha

Get up n hugs her n juhi hugs him back

J-smile-maine app seb ko disturb toh nahi kiya na

R-nahi nahi aunty

J-toh beta kaisa chal raha hai kam

At-gud

J-ok so chalo ab thoda khaana chaana ho jaye

Ar-mom abhi hum kam ker rahe hai hai

j-toh phir kya hua baad main ker lene apna kam

Ar-but mom

J-glared-armaan

Ar-ok ok

J-good boy

Ridhima and atul smile

j-ridhima atul chalo

Ri-per aunty hum

J-oh god armaan mana or ab tum dono muhje kuch nahi sun-na

At-ok aunty

All of them sit on sofa and start their lunch

After lunch

At-thanx aunty food is very tasty

R-ha very tasty

Juhi smile

A-mom mujhe ek meeting main jaana hai

J-ok beta

A-to ridhima and atul-app dono kal is time pe hi aa jana

Both nodded and armaan left

J-smiling-ridhima aahana kaha kaha hai

R-aunty vo ghar per hai

J-beta kya main aahana se mil sakte hoon

R-aunty app mujh se pouch kyun rahe ho aahana ke sath app ka bhi rishta hai app ous ki daadi hai

J-thank you beta

R-app ko pata hai aahana bhi app se milna chahti thi

J-chalo theek hai toh phir chalo

R-nahi aunty meri abhi duty hai

J-toh theek hai main akeli [alone] hi chali jaate hoon

Ridhima n atul left for sanjeevani n juhi left to meet aahana

Juhi reach gupta house n meet padma

J-bhabhi aahana kaha hai

P-vo apne room main hai apna homework ker rahi hai

J-homework aare waah itni choti hai phir bhi apna homework kudh kerti hai

P-pehle toh ridhima kervati hai per ajj keh rahi thi ki kudh kare gi or ridhima ko surprise dege

J-main jau

P-k

Juhi go to aahana room n see aahana tried to do sum maths sums

A-with very cute face-1+2=5

Juhi smile remembering in his childhood armaan also say 1+2=5

J-aahana

Aahana is very excite to see juhi

Aah-daddi daddi

J-hi meri princess

Juhi hug aahana

J-kya ker rahe hoo app

Aah-main na homework ker rahi hoo

J-oh toh main app ki help karu

A-k daddi 1+2=5 hote hai na

J-smiling-nahi baby 1+2=3 hote hai

A-nahi 5 hote hai

J-nahi baby

A-app ko bhi nahi aata mera homework

J-laughing-aahana bacha tum apni fingers count karo

Aahana count her lil fingers

J-ok now tell me app ki fingers kitni hai

A-5

J-very good dekho 1 tumhari finger no. one and 2 your next 2 fingers n total kitne hue

A-smiling-3

J-that's like my good girl

Then juhi phone ring its armaan

J-ek min beta

She pick up the phone

J-hai beta armaan bolo

A-Mom vo meri hotel vali file kaha hai

J-draw main

A-ok mom thanks n bye

J-bye beta

A-daadi ye almaan kon hai

Juhi did not know what to say

J-vo beta

Then ridhima come

R-kya ho raha hai yaha per

A-mama main homework ker rahi hoo

Or mama daddi ne meri help nahi ki

R-smiling-maine app se ye kaha ki aunty app ki help ker rahi hai

juhi started laughing then aahana show her dimples

three of them started masti after that juhi left

plz comment

with love

Preeti

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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
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Thanks a lot for the pm.
I just loved this part.
Finally AR have started working together.
I really want to see them as a couple once again.
I feel very sad for AR.
Ridz's daughter is soo cute.
I loved her naughtiness a lot.
Maths - a really difficult subject.
Juhi and Aahan's scene was really cute.
I wonder when Armaan would come to know about his daughter.
Why is Ridz not telling Armaan about Aahana.He would get more mad at her after knowing that Riddhima hid such a big truth of his life from him since so many years.
Plz update the next part soonest.
Take care!
love ya
Edited by crazy4KASH_AR - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96
hey wow awesome update... nice one..loved it... i hope now onwards we will get reg upd... fab one...m waiting for armaan 2 get 2 know the truth... cont soon...waiting eagerly for ur nxt update... nd thnks for d PM...😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...loved atul...sweet...loved da granma n grandaughter bond...adorable...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
awww... Nyc part. Plz armaan ko pata chala do k aahana uski beti hai.. Aur sb theeek kr do...plzzz..pyar ki saza ko hatam kr do ab
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99


sorry dear next time i will send you pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey ur ff is pretty cute :)

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