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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
awesome update!!!!!
now juhi can help AR to come close to each other.
please continue soon and don't forget to pm me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi my friends preeti here I hope u all remember me now i am going to right next part thanks for commenting the previous part

Note from preeti: Okay, I know I am maha late'.And I am like really sorry for that. But I have been busy with my studies, assignments, presentations '.After all, they come first!my first semester exams are left but I miss u all very much that's y am writing these parts for all of u Hope you all will forgive me for this delay. This part's dedicated to all my dearest friends there. I am like really thankful to all of you be Sorry to all of you once again! Enjoy the part!~!~!~!~

Recap=no heheheheh

Now'''''''''.

All sit in hall n notice shashank is very upset

R-papa kya hua app ko

An-yes dad whats wrong

Sha-nahi beta kuch nahi hai

Juhi-ab app hum se chupayo ge bhaiya

Sha-very tensed-juhi vo

j-bolo na bhaiya

sha'vo sanjeevani main bahut badi problem aa gaye hai

R-kaise problem papa

[friends ab job hi main likhne jaa rahi hoon muhje kuch nahi pata hai ki aisa seb kuch hota hai nahi bes ye mere shatani demaag ki soch hai lol so plz if I write wrong so plz forgive me]

Sha-vo actually jis place per hamara sanjeevani hai vo tum sab ko pata hai ki vo place hamari nahi hai ye govt. ki place hai

An-hain toh

Sha-beta vo govt. ne ye place 20 saal ke liye hamare naam ker di thi aab vi 20 saal khatam ho gaye hai toh bahot sare company ab is place ko buy kerna chahti hai ki vo yaha per office ya kuch or bana sake

j-what per aisa kaise ho sakta hai I mean is problem ka koi yoh solution hoga

an-r-hain

sha- ek hai per

padma-per kya

sha-hume sanjeevani ko bacane ke liye kaise badi company ki help ki zururet hai maine kitne apne business friends se poucha ki vo sanjeevani main invest kere per sanjeevani ka account fund dekh ker vo seb nahi mane

j-per bhaiya sanjeevani ka fund itna kum kyun ho gaya

sha-actually juhi 2 month pehle yaha Mumbai main ek bus ka accident ho gaya that oh un main jitney log the un seb ke pass paise nahi the ki vo apna ilaaj[treatment] kerva sake toh senjeevani ne un seb ki help ki

j-ohh toh aab

sha-pata nahi

all r very tensed

suddenly juhi hought a idea

j-bhaita app ko ek badi company chahye na jo sanjeevani ki help ker sake

sa-hai

j-smile-toh mailk empiar kaisa rahega

all looked at shocked

an-per aunty ye company toh armaan ki hai or armaan hamari help kyun kare ga said sadly

r-hai aunty di theek kah rahi hai

j-aise kaise nahi kare ga bilkul kare ga

sha-per juhi tum itne vishvaas ke sath kaise keh sakti ho

j-bhaiya main manti hoon ki armaan app seb se naraaz hai per sanjeevani se nahi

pad-hain

all smile

sha-juhi agar aisa hua toh main armaan ka ehsaan kabhi nahi chukka pauga

j-bhaiya ye ehsaan nahi hai ye sirf ek behan apne bhai ke help ker rahi hai

all smile

After all this juhi went to her house n see armaan is already there she is very happy today

Armaan see juhi

A-hey mom app kaha thi

J-remembering aahana n smile-gupta house gaye thi

A-app ko nahi lagta her roz kaise ke ghar acha nahi lagta

J-armaan vo kaise ka ghar nahi hai mere bhaiya ka ghar hai

A-ok ok

J-acha bol kya khaye ga

A-kuch bhi per app ko ajj kya hua hai

J-kya

a-smile-bahot happy happy lag rahi hai

J-kyun tu apni maa ko happy happy nahi dekhna chahta

A-mom maine aisa keb kaha bes sirf poucha hai n I want my mom always happy

J-smile-I know baby

a-irretaitely-mommm

j-ok ok armaan bes theek hai

A-yeah that's better

Suddenly juhi think about sanjeevani n sad

Armaan notice it

A-mom kya hua app abhi toh itni khush thi or abb app sad kyun ho gaye

j-armaan tu apni mom ko khush dekhna chahta hai na

A-yeah per hua kya

J-toh meri ek baat mane ga

A-boloye

J-nervously-beta voo

A-mom plz tell me what happened

J-tu pehle meri kasam kha

A-mommm

j-kha armaan

A-ok main app ki kasam khata hoon ab toh bolo

J-armaan vo beta kya tum sanjeevani ko safe kerne ke liye bhaiya ki help kero ge

A-confused-mom sanjeevani main kya problem hai agar hai bhi toh main kyun help karu jo vaha docters hai ye un ka kaam hai mera hai mom

j-armaan beta ek bar sun toh lo problem hai kya

A-ok

Juhi tell everything to armaan

A-or app ye chahti hai ki main sanjeevani main invest karu

J-hain

A-nahi mom I cant do this plz

J-armaan beta main jaanti hoon ki help kerne se hume thodha sa loss hoga beta per phir bhi

A-mom baat loss ki nahi hai itne chote se loss se hamari company main koi loss nahi hoga

J-Toh phir ploblem hai kya beta

Armaan sit on sofa n juhi sit beside him

J-armaan beta plz maine seb ko keh diya hai malik empiar unki halp kare ga kya tum mere liye itna bhi nahi ker sakte maine tume apni kasam di hai na toh phir

A-tensed-mom mujhe help kerne main koi problem nahi per jin logo se main dur rehna chahta hoon is help ke chaaker main mujhe her roz unlogo ko face kerna paadhe ga

J-put her hand on his cheek-I understand baby per plz mere liye apni mom ke liye

Armaan nodded-ok mom

Juh-happily-thanz baby hug him

He hug back

A-mom main aaj ap ke lap pe so jau

J-ye bhi koi pouchne ki baat hai baby n smile

Armaan put his head in juhi lap n close his eyes n fell asleep.juhi see armaan sleeping n remember aahana

j-think to herself-armaan beta tumhari beti bhi bilkul tumhari tarah hai bes main ye pray kerti hoon ki tume bhi pata chale ki aahana tunhari beti hai beta ridhima ab bhi tum se bahut pyar kerti hau ous ki aankho main tumhare liye pyar dekh sakti hoon baby plz unseb ko maaf kerdo or apni life ridhima or aahana ke sath spend karo baby n kiss on his forehead

done

i hope u all like this

plz comments

from preeti

Edited by awesome - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
awww. I want them together plzzz. Make everythng ok plzzz.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
hey m d second 2 comment...😉
awesome update..👏.
srsly loved it...
finally armaan is helping sanjeevani...
i hope everything goes well btw AR...
i want them together...
nice one..srsly ur fab...
cont soon...
waiting eagerly for d nxt update...!!!!...😊
Edited by ojaswi96 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Hey wer ru...???plzzz update naa...plzzz cont soon...waiting eagerly for ur update...plzzz update...:(:(:(:(
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
UPDATE...UPDATE...😭😭😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

hi frnds preeti here.how r u all

i know am very late so plz forgive me

part-12😊

RECAP- j-think to herself-armaan beta tumhari beti bhi bilkul tumhari tarah hai bes main ye pray kerti hoon ki tume bhi pata chale ki aahana tunhari beti hai beta ridhima ab bhi tum se bahut pyar kerti hau ous ki aankho main tumhare liye pyar dekh sakti hoon baby plz unseb ko maaf kerdo or apni life ridhima or aahana ke sath spend karo baby n kiss on his forehead

Now ……………………………………

Next morning in malik house

Juhi prepare lunch with servents n armaan is ready for go to office n see juhi shook his head n go towards kitchen

A-mom app ye kya ker rahi hoo

J-busy doinh her work-baby kitchen main log kya kerte hai

A-i know mom kya kerte hai per app ye seb kyun ker rahi hai

J-kyun

A-kyunki app abhi plz rest kejeye

J-smiling-ok my sweet baby acha tume yaad hai na ajj tume sanjeevani aana hai

A-vo mom mujhe ajj bahut kaam hai kyun na main kal aa jau

J-glared at him-armaaan

A-ok ok I will come at 1:pm so plz tell them get ready

J-ok mr.tycoon

A-mom mera naam armaan malik

J-smile-I know maine hi rakha hai

A-smile-ok bye I have to go now

Kiss her cheek n left

J-app main bhaiya ko bata deti hoo ki armaan man gaya hai or ajj sanjeevani aa raha hai

She dial gupta landline no.ridhima pick the phone

R-hello

J-hello beta main juhi bol rahi hoo

R-smiling-good morning aunty how r u

J-am f9 n u

R-same here

J-ridhima beta bhaiya ko bata dena ki armaan sanjeevani ki help kare ga

R-she could not believe –aunty app sach keh rahi hai

J-hai beta tum plz beta dena seb ko ki ajj armaan 1:pm armaan hospital aa raha hai so plz be ready vo time pea a jae ga ok

R-she is very happy-ok aunty

J-acha beta meri pyare si princess kaha hai mujhe ous se baat kerni hai kaha hai vo

R-smile-vo toh school chali gaye hai

J-disapointed-oh

R-sensed her disapointness-aunty kyun na app bhi sanjeevani aa jana after meeting we will go to pick up aahana from her school

J-happily-hai ye theek hai ok beta bye

R-bye

Both hang up n after this ridhima tell everyone included gang first when gang know about that they all r very shock n tensed but then ridhima told them armaan will help them they are very happy especially our ridhima. Tell the He will reach sanjeevani at 1:pm today for discussion

In sanjeevani cafeteria

At-shocked-kya baat ker rahi hai tu ridz ki juhi aunty ko aahana ke bare main pata chal gaya hai

R-calmly-yes

Mu-or tu yaha aaram se bethi hai tujhe ye fiker nahi hai ke kahi aunty armaan ko bata na de

An-guys aunty armaan ko kuch nahi bateyege

All-kyun

R-bes maine kaha na aunty nahi bateyegi to bes baat khatam ok

All-ok

ANNOUSEMENT-all docters report to conference room

At-happily-conference room main?hey guys lagta hai armaan aa gaya hai chalo jaldi chalet hai

An-atul armaan 1 vajhe aaye ga abhi 10 min left hai

Mu-oh chalo koi baat nahi hai per guys hum ouse dekhne ke liye kitne excite ho rahe hai per vo toh hume dekhta bhi nahi hai

Ridhima felt pang in her heart hear muskaan comment

Ra-per guys atleast hum ouse ab milte toh rahe ge shayed vo hume maaf kerde

All nodded

At-per guys armaan kitna change ho gaya hai

Mu-or handsome ho gaya hai

Ridhima smile hear this

An-or jeb dekho kaam kaam kaam

Ra-ye baat toh hai

At-arre kaam toh kare ga hi itne bade empire ko akela hi manege kerta hai

All-hain

Saying this All left

[juhi is already there in conference room with shashankh,kirti,shubanker]

In outside sanjeevani

Armaan park his car in parking area n come out from his car looking hot

Armaan enter sanjeevani all look at him

Armaan ignore it.new nurses drool over him

Armaan reach conference room n knock the gate

Inside shashank said come in

Armaan open the gate n see all sit on seats included sanjeevani trustee When ridhima see armaan her heartbeats racing fast but she control them

Sha-smiling-aao armaan have a seat

Armaan sit on seat beside muskaan

Muskaan smile at muskaan but armaan is armaan ignore it muskaan felt bad. ridhima see all this n also very felt bad

Ar-professionely -so dr.gupta how can I help sanjeevani

All r surprised at his tune.juhi just shook her head

Sha-app ko juhi ne seb bata hi diya hoga

A-yeah mom told me about this

Sha-armaan kya tum loss utane ki liye ready ho I mean juhi ne tume bataya hi hoga ki sanjeevani ke pass ab koi paisa nahi hai

A-am ready for this I mean itne shote se loss ke karan malik empier ko koi fark nahi pade ga

All r amazed at his confident

Shashank n armaan talking about this n other carefully listen all this expect ridhima.she is just looking armaan.When all dr.started discussion suddenly armaan felt someone gaze on him then he see ridhima just looking at him.armaan also look at him for sometime.when he realize what he was doing then look away n also ridhima.juhi see all this

j-think to herself-tu job hi ker le armaan per mujhe bhi pata hai ki tera dil ajj bhi sirf ridhima ke liye hi dharkta hai n smile

A-so I need all detail of sanjeevani

Sha-theek hai toh hamare snjeevani main 2 docters app ki help kare ge

Armaan nodded

Trustee-so vo do docters hoge dr.atul joshi n dr.ridhima gupta saying this trustee left

Armaan is shocked but he control n just nodded

Atul is very happy n ridhima is very happy but sad armaan is not happy

All r keep quite juhi look at armaan he look lost n she broke the scilence

J-kya hua app seb aise chup kyun ho gaye

Or tujhe kya hua armaan

A-come out from his thought-nothing

Sha-so hamare do docter app ki help kare ge

Kirti-but sir hum ye report banaye ge I mean armaan toh office main hoga or dr hospital main

J-kyun na ridhima or atul office ja ker banale kyun armaan

All look at atmaan

A-ok I have no problem so kal 10:am

Sha-ok dr.armaan

When shashank say this all look at shashank

Armaan look at him n say

A-straightly-armaan malik not dr.armaan am not dr

All r looked at him with strange expressions

j-glared at him-armaan

A-mom maine sahi toh kaha ki am not dr

Saying this he left

All just looked at each other

J-bhaiya main armaan ki taraf se app se maafi mangti hoon

Sha-sadly-nahi juhi waise bhi armaan ne sach hi toh kaha ki vo dr nahi hai maine hi toh ous ki degree cancel kit hi

Saying this he left

Then pajer ring all of them them left expect ridhima

Ridhima see juhi is quite upset

R-kya hua aunty

J-kuch nahi beta bes is lerke net oh mera dimaag guma ker rakh diya hai dekha kaise baat ker raha tha bhaiya se

R-aunty plz app upset na ho or jaha tek armaan ki baat hai app to house jaanti ha hai abhi vo gussa hai

J-per beta

R-smiling-agar app ko yeha baate hi kerni hai toh mom ke sath kar lena main toh aahana ko lene ja rahi hoon

J-excited-tum bhi na ridhima main yehi kaam ke liye toh yaha aaye thi verna is boring si meeting main toh kabhi nahi aati

Both left .pick aahana from her school

Three of them spend good time n went home

When juhi reach home n see armaan n made a face armaan see this n asked what happened.she said she is angry with him bcoz she misbehave with shashank.armaan know juhi is very angry with him. look at the sutation he said sorry with cute face. Juhi melt n forgive him

done n tell me its gud or bad

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preeti😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey superawesome part
luvd it
thnx 4 d pm
cont super soonish pleashhh
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Hey Preeti
This was fabulous.
I loved it soo much.
I feel so bad for AR.
Armaan is tough like a coconut from outside but so soft from inside.
NowAR would be working together.
I hope their differences may sort out soon.
Plz update the next part soonest.
Take care!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww. I wish their dooori becomes lesss... I so want em together. Plzzz kch karooo. Plz

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