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Posted: 12 years ago
Reserved post edited on page 17.
Sorry for the delay.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey... If its possible can u plzzz update soon... Really wanna read the next part :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woww AWESOME ff:-):-):-) I jus loved this ff:-):-) Please pm me next time, and update the next part soon...
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plz update..miss this ff zoo so so much
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Hi guys how u r all preeti here thanks for lovely comments sorry am late again.now am going to write next part hope u all like it

Part-14

RECAP=three of them started masti after that juhi left

Now…………………………………….

One week past ridhima n atul come to armaan office n they only talk about sanjeevani problem nothing more

Mallik empire in armaan cabin

Today ridhima and atul will come in evening at 5;00 pm

Armaan is talking with his employee when there is knock on the door

A-come in

Ridhima open the door

A-dr-ridhima where is dr atul

R-actually unki ek surgery thi toh vo nahi aa sake

Armaan nodded

A-come n sit [to employee]-now u can go

Em-ok sir saying this he left

A-so dr ridhima app ne vo file ready ker li

R-nervously-yes

She give armaan that file

Armaan read this file n

A-file toh theek hai per tum ne ishe mian sanjeevani ke funds ke bare main information nahi dali

R-i think vo paper ghar reh gaya main kal le aayu gi

A-about to say something to her but there is knock on the door

A-come in

Its armaan pa roshni

Roshni-she is vert hot n she like armaan very much

Ro-may I come in sir

A-yeah

Ridhima looked at roshni dress up

She is wearing mini skirt n short top n she don't like what she wear

Ro-sir ye file app plz check ker lo

Armaan nodded

A-to ridhima-excuse me plz

Ridhima nodded

When armaan reading file roshni cont. looking at armaan n smiling

Ridhima anger rise up she is fuming

A-ok roshni theek hai

Ro-bit her lower lip-ok sir n left

Armaan looking at ridhima

A-shall we start

R-ok

After lot of discussion

R-muhje ab chalna chahye 8;30 ho gaye hai

A-armaan look outside the window its started raining-ridhima per bahar bahot bearish ho rahi hai

R-nahi main chali jau gi

A-ridhima bahar weather bahot karaab hai plz main tume ghar chod deta hoon

R-hmmm

A-chalo

Both reach office car garage

A-sit

Both sit on car n armaan start car n driving

Armaan phone ring n he pick up the phone

A-yeah bolo roshni

Ridhima started fuming she don't like roshni bcos she know roshni like armaan n she is afraid if armaan also like her then what will she do

A-ok bye good night

Armaan see ridhima, see her eyes r wet n sense some thing is wrong

A-ridhima what happen

R-plz stop car

A-confuse-what what r u saying

R-armaan maine kaha gadi rook

A-but ridhima hua kya n y r u crying plz tell me

R-shouted-I say stop the car

Armaan stop the car n ridhima come from car n getting wet bcoz of rain n started walking armaan is very angry he did not know what happened to her n also come out fron car n shouted ridhima ridhima but she did not stop armaan go towards ridhima n stop her

A-ridhima ye sab kya hai

Ridhima look at armaan eyes n see only anger for her

A-ridhima 4 god sake am talking to u

What happen to u or tum ro kyun rahi thi

R-tume kon sa fark padta hai

A-confuse-see ridhima mujhe kuch samag nahi aa raha hai

R-ab tume main kyun samaj aaye ga

A-ridhima tum ye kya keh rahi ho plz chodo ye sab ghar chalo mauje tume tumhare ghar chod ker kehi jana hai

R-shouted-roshni ke pass haina

A-without any hasitation-hain plz chalo

Ridhima started crying

A-ridhima tum he is about to say something when he realize what is going in ridhima mind-ridhima tume lagta hai ki mere or roshni ke beach kuch chal raha hai haina

Ridhima did not say any thing

A-tum mere bare main aisa soch sakti ho maine kabhi nahi soch tha per main tum se or umeed bhi nahi ker sakta

R-crying-nahi nahi armaan tum jaisa soch raheee ho aisa kuch nahi hai main toh bes

A-kya ridhima kya soch rahi thi tum. Tum kabhi nahi badal sakti kabhi nahi just go away from me

R-sobbing-nahi armaan main aisa kuch nahi soch rahi thi plz meri baat suno plz

A-ab sunne ko kya baki reh gaya hai ridhima tum ne seb kuch toh keh diya

R-crying louder-armaan main aisa kuch nahi soch rahi thi plz armaan main bes thodi upset ho gayi thi

A-kyun

R-vo vo armaan kyun ki main tumse ajj bhi

A-i wanted to tell u ridhima I hate u main tum se bahut nafret kerta hoon

Both look at each other eyes n both r completely wet

A-ridhima chalo mujhe tume ghar chodna hai

Ridhima quietly sit in car n reach idhima house .armaan stop car n wait ridhima to go out ridhima look at armaan but armaan does not look at her she come out from car n armaan start his car n drove away

Ridhima just standing there lifeless

In gupta house

All r very upset

An-pata nahi ridz abhi kyun nahi aaye

P-worried-beta armaan ke office main phone karo

Sha-maine ker liya hai ridhima vaha nahi hai

Then anjali see ridhima n hugs her

An-ridz tu kaha thi or geeli kaise ho gaye tu

Ridhima does not respond

P-beta tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahi

Ridhima does not say anything n go to her room n locked her room

She fell on the bed n started crying

R-crying louder-am sorry armaan ajj maine phir se tumhara dil dukha diya per main kya kerti vo roshni jaise tume dekh rahi thi mujh se nahi raha gaya main tum se bahot pyar kerti hoon nahi dekh sakti tume kaise aur ke saath mera dill rota hai am sorry

Outside ridhima room.all r upset

Sha-ye ridhima ko kya ho gaya hai

An-I think its related to armaan

All look at her

P-crying-ye seb keb tak chale ga shashank mere beti ki zindegi kya se kya ben gaye hai main nahi dekh sakti ouse aise

Sh-plz padma samballo apne app ko

An-yeah mom

IN MALIK MENSION

Juhi is reading some magazine when she armaan is coming she notice armaan is completely wet n lost in his thought

j-armaan kya hua beta

A-look at juhi with hurtful eyes-mom vo

j-armaan beta kya hua ye kaise hallat bana rakhi hai tune armaan bata na beta

armaan hugs her tightly.juhi is very worried

J-still hugging him-baby kya hua

A-apart from juhi-mom vo ridhima

J-ridhima…….

A-mom vo mujhe kabhi nahi samaj sakti maine apni life main sabse badi galti ki ous se pyar ker ke

J-beta meri ……

Then he left

j-worried-ye armaan ko kya hua vo sundenly ridhima ke bare main baat ker raha tha kahi ridhima se ous ki fight toh nahi hue ofo

next morning

malik mension

Juhi is sitting on sofa thinking about armaan and ridhima then she see armaan coming

A-good morning mom

J-armaan tum theek toh ho

A-yeah mom main theek hoon

J-per beta vo kal raat

A-mom mujhe is bare main koi baat nahi kerni plz

J-per armaan

A-mom plz

J-ok per u r f9 na

Armaan nodded

A-mom mujhe office janna hai

Juhi nodded

Armaan reach his office n started doing his work

Gupta house

Ridhima wake up.remember last night.her eyes filled with tears.she hears aahana is calling her she cleared her tears n go to aahana room n see aahana is sitting on the bed

Aahana see his mama

Aa-cute smile-gud morning mama

R-gud morning

Ridhima sit on aahana bed aahana hugs her

R-chalo ready ho jao school jana hai na

Aahana nodded

One week passed ridhima and atul go to armaan office they only discuss sanjeevani matter nothing more.but one day atul is not come.ridhima said sorry to armaan but armaan said he does not care ridhima is hurt after heard his reply but she think she deserve this

Ajj ke liye itna he

Plz comments

Take care love u all

From

preeti

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey im 1st to comment...
Oh my God finalllyyy u updated...
It was jst an awesome one...
I hope everything goes well btw armaan and ridhima...
Fab one...loved it...
Waiting eagerly for ur nxt update...
Cont soon...
Nd thnks for the PM...😊

Edited by ojaswi_kajen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...poor AR...sooo sad...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just read all the parts. plzzz update soon. and PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
yar inki galat fehmiyan kb kum hongiii. Pyar inke liye saza hi bana hua hai... Armaan uski baaat sunta hi nahi. Kch krooo
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part.
I just loved it
Preeti darling why didn't u pm me for this update?
I want AR to come closer now
plz mila do unhein

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