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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 15
Recap-One week passed ridhima and atul go to armaan office they only discuss sanjeevani matter nothing more.but one day atul is not come.ridhima said sorry to armaan but armaan said he does not care ridhima is hurt after heard his reply but she think she deserve this
Now…………………………………………..

Next morning in malik mansion
Juhi is sitting on sofa n thinking about armaan
Juhi-ye armaan ous raat itna tense kyun tha ous ki aankhe bhi red thi oh god pata nahi kya hua hoga mujhe bata bhi nahi raha hai duffer
Then juhi see armaan is coming out from his room armaan see juhi
A-good morning mom
j-good morning armaan tum theek toh ho na
A-thinking about night incident-main theek ho mom mujhe kya hona hai main theek hoon
j-per armaan main vo tum se ous raat ke bare main
A-cut her-mom mujhe office janna hai or hain mom plz ajj app sanjeevani main inform ker dena ki ajj dr.ridhima or dr.atul office main na aaye
j-but y armaan
A-actually mom ajj mujhe office main bahot kaam hai or mere pass time nahi hai plz mom its urgent
j-ok beta
a-bye mom take care
j-u to
armaan left n juhi call ridhima
R-hello
J-hello ridhima beta main juhi bol rahi hoon
R-kaise hai app aunty
j-main toh theek hoon tum kaise hoo or meri pyaari se princess kaise hai
R-smiling-main bhi theek hoon or aahana bhi
j-per ridhima tum ajj hospital nahi gayye
R-nahi aunty ajj mera off hai
J-oh acha beta ajj tum or atul office main met jana
R-tense-kyun aunty
J-kyunki ajj armaan ko office main bahot kaam hai
R-sadly-ohhh koi baat nahi aunty main atul ko bhi inform ker du gi
J-ok beta thank u acha ridhima ajj tum free ho or aahana
R-hain aunty ab office jana toh main free hi hoon or aahana ka bhi off hai
J-ok kyun na hum seb kahi bahar chale
R-per kaha chale
j-yaha per pass main hi mela [fair] laga hai kyun na hum seb vaha chale
R-happily-ok aunty kyun na main seb ko keh du hum seb sath main chale ge
j-ye theek hai seb sath main bahot mazaaaye ga acha tum seb ko bata do main 1 hour ke baad aati hoon tum seb tyaar rehna
R-ok aunty bye
J-bye beta
After 1 hour
Juhi reach gupta house all r ready [interns,gupta family,kirti n shubanker]
All reach fair place
Aahana is very happy to see fair there r many rides n many more
Aa-mama dekho kitne sare julle
R-hain beta ab chalo
All r enjoyiny
Malik enpire
Armaan is talking with anged [his friend who help armaan is innocent about sanjeevani matter]
A-anged am so happy yaar tu yaha india main hai or kirpa or soham kaise hai
[kirpa is anged wife n soham is his son]
An-vo dono theek hai
A-acha bata kya ker raha hai
An-main,kirpa or soham ghumne ja rahe hai
A-ok that's gr8
An-armaan tu bhi chal na hamare sath
A-angad per main vaha kya karu ga or agar main aa bhi gaya toh tum or kirpa disturb ho jayo ge
An-confusely-kyun
A-main tum dono ke beach kabab main haddi nahi banna chahta
He teased him
An-salle sudher ja mujhe nahi pata bus tu hamare sath chal raha hai
A-per yaar main bahot busy hoon
An-armaan plz yaar maan ja na or kirpa or soham bhi tume mil ker bahot kush hoge
A-ok I will come per tum sab ja kaha rahe hoon
An-yaha pass main hi mela laga hua hai vaha per
A-ok aa raha hoon
They reach fair place
Soham-happily-wow kitne acha hai naa main bhi julle per jau ga –started clapping
All smile at her cuteness
A-pick him in his strong arms-app ko pata hai app na bahot cute ho
So-sach chachu
Armaan nodded
Kirpa-chalo na ander chalet hai
An-hai yaar chalo na
Soham is sitting in rides with kirpa .armaan and anged r talking then soham come to anged
So-papa ice-cream khane hai
An-chalo ice-cearm leker aate hai
Then anged phone ring
An-soham ruko
So-nahi chalo na
An-beta bes ek min
A-anged tum baat karo main soham ke sath jaata hoon ok
Anged nodded
A-kirpa tume kuch lene hai
K-nahi armaan
A-ok
A-ok soham
Soham nodded
Both go towards ice-cream stall.armaan buy ice cream
A-lo beta app ki ice-cream
So-happily-thanks chachu
Armaan smile.suddenly armaan see juhi is playing with little girl
A-mom yaha kya ker rahi hai or ye bachi kon hai
Ja ker dekh ta hoon.chalo soham
Sohom nodded n enjoying his ice-cream
Armaan n soham go towards juhi n that little girl.armaan see juhi pick that girl in her arms
J-aahana beta app ko bhuk toh nahi lagi hai
Aa-nahi
J-ok chalo mama ke pass chal te hai
Aahana nodded
Armaan-mom
Juhi is froze.shocked to see armaan here
J-scared-aa armaan beta tum yaha
Armaan see juhi scared
A-vo mom main yaha anged or kirpa ke sath aaya tha per app yaha kya ker rahi hai or ye bachi kon hai mom
Juhi –armaan vo ye
Armaan see aahana n fell attraction towards her. Aahan is also seeing armaan without blinking her eyes
A-mom boleye na
An-armaan yaar kaha chale gaye the
A-vo angad main
Angad see juhi
An-hi aunty
K-hi aunty kaise hai app
J-beta main toh theek ho tum dono kaise hi ue soham hai na kitna bada ho gaya gai or kitna pyaara bhi
A-mom per ye kon hai
An-hain aunty ye kon hai wow she is soo cute look armaan her eyes r blue just like u
Aahana started smiling showing her dimples
K-eyes he nahi smile bhi armaan jaise hai na
All see her dimple
K-per aunty ye hai kon
j-very scared-voo vooo ye
then aahana see her family her mama
she shouted mama mama mama
armaan n all see gupta family is coming
A-mom ye seb klya ho raha hai or ye kon hai
Gupta family and ridhima see armaan.all r very shocked
Aahana-mama
Armaan notice that little girl said mama.he see that direction n see all gupta family.armaan see ridhima.but ridhima look away
A-very hyper-mom ye kon hai app kuch bol kyun nahi rahi hai
J-armaan vo
Aahana –daddi see mama aa gaye
All r shocked
Anged-daddi
A-mom ye app ko daddi kyun bol rahe hai.or is ki mom kon hai
All r very scared
Muskaan-nahi armaan yaha per ais ki mama nahi hai
Aahana-muskaan chachi app jouth kyun bol rahi ho vo toh hai meri mama
Aahana point her finger at ridhima
Armaan is very very very very shocked
A-to aahana-u mean ridhima
Aahana nodded
Aahana-per app kon ho
A-shouted-ye seb kya ho raha hai koi mujhe bateye ga ye kon hai or mom ye app ko daddi or ridhima ko mama kyun keh rahi
R-very scared-armaan vo ye
j-main batati hoon tume ye kon hai
R-scared-aunty ye app
J-nahi ridhima beta ajj nahi ajj met rook beta bahot she liya tum ne be sab or nahi beta. armaan tum janna chahte ho na ki ye kon hai
Armaan nodded
J-toh suno is ka naan aahana hai ye ridhima ki beti hai
Armaan is shocked
A-mom ye kaise ho sakta hai
J-abhi meri baat puri nahi hue hai armaan aahana ke pita tum ho
Armaan is froze
Ajj ki liye itna he. my hand is paining
Plz comments
Take care
Love u all
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preeti
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally armaan get to know abt ahaana...
I hope everything goes well btw AR...
I jst loved it...awesome one...
Cont soon...waiting eagerly for the nxt update...
Update ASAP...nd thnks for the PM...:)
Edited by ojaswi_kajen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally the truth is out.
I'm so happy.
I hope Armaan may start thinking about accepting Aahana and Riddhima.
Awesome part Preeti.
Plz update the next part super soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
missed this ff so so much!
lovely update :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally arman ko ahana ke bare mein pata chal gaya good
hope everything goes well between AR. Great partitane dino
se update kyu nahi kiya yar missed ur ff in case if u didnt notice
i changed my username from hotarsh to sacredlove pls pm me from
next update i adore ur ff i read it on dmgblog also but there too i read
upto dis part only pls do cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayeee... He got to knowww. Ab kya hogaaa?@???? Cant wait
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...finally da truth is out.., how will armaan react...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME...
PLZZZ CONTINUE SOON WITH THE NEXT PART AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
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Posted: 12 years ago
Preeti plzzz update karona plzz...:(:(:(
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Posted: 12 years ago


Part 16

Recap- J-abhi meri baat puri nahi hue hai armaan aahana ke pita tum ho
Armaan is froze

Now…………………………….

j-with moist eyes-hain armaan aahana tunhari bati hai

A-shocked-per mom ye kaise hi sakta hai aahana meri beti

Ridhima is crying now she thought armaan dont accept aahana as his daughter

J-armaan mujh se zada tume pata hona chahye tumhara or ridhima ka rishta kaisa tha ki tum dono kitne kareeb the

Then armaan remember that night he spend with ridhima in lonavla

J-shaking him with his shoulder-bolo armaan

A-per mom phir ridhima ne muhje kyun nahi bataya or app ko bhi pata than a phir app ne bhi mujhe nahi bataya

J-vo is liye kyunki jeb tum india chod ker new York chale gaye the the teb ridhima ko pata chala ridhima pregnant hai or yaha tek mujhe pata lagne ki baat hai toh mujhe bhi ye baat yaha aaker hi pata chali hai beta

Armaan is deeply shocked he is unable to move for some time

All r very tense

Shashank-armaan main janta hoon ki hum seb se bahut badi galti hue hai per hamari galti ki saza is choti si bachi ko met do beta

Then aahana speak-nanu ye kon hai

Sh-beta ye app ke papa hai

Aahana looked at armaan who is already looking at her

Aa-happily-mere papa

J-hain beta app ke papa

Aa-happily-papa

Anged put his hand on armaan shoulder

An-ur daughter is waiting 4 his father love

Armaan sit down on his knees n come to aahana level n look at her

Aa-app ko pata hai maine app ka bahot wait kiya

Armaan put his hand on her cheek . kiss her forehead n aahana do same.then hugs her aahana hug him back very tightly

All r very happy.juhi look at ridhima who is smiling with tear

R-thought to herself-mujhe nahi toh meri beti ko ajj ous ke papa mil gaye ajj meri life ka seb se khushi bara din hai

Juhi come to ridhima . hugs her

J-ab toh khush ho naa

Ridhima look at armaan n aahana hugging n nodded

Aa-cutly-bataye na app kaha the or mujhe chod ker kyun chale gaye

A-voo main

Armaan look at juhi n juhi smile.juhi pick aahana in her arms

J-aahana ab toh app ke papa aa gaye hau na beta toh inseb baato se lena hai tume

Aa-theek hai [to armaan] papa app mujhe sorry kaho

All r confused

A-huh

Aa-kya huh kaho na sorry

A-happily-pehle app mujhe batao ki main app ko sorry kyun kahoon

Aa-app itne din mujh se door the pata hai maine app ko kitna miss kiya

Armaan n all smile

A-pick aahana in his arms-ok sorry my angel

An-confuse-angel per mera naam toh aahana hai

A-per main app ko angel kahu ga toh batayo kaisa laga app ko naam

Aa-bahot acha papa

Padma-mujhe lagta hai hume ab ghar chalna chahye

Ar-aunty main angel ko apne ghar leker jaana chahta hoon sirf ek din ke liye kel subah main ouse khud chod duga

Padma look at ridhima who is nodded

Pa-theek hai beta

Aa-cutely-main papa ke ghar main ja rahi hoon

j-hain beta

Aa-yeee

Anjali-per aunty app ko pehle gupta house jana hoga aahana ke kapde lene ke liye

J-toh chalo

All reach gupta house.all go inside expept armaan n ridhima.ridhima is about to go

A-ridhima

Ridhima stop n look at armaan

A-mujh tum se kuch puchna hai

R-nervous-bolo

A-tun ne muhje aahana ke barre main kyun nahi bataya

R-armaan vo

A-kya tume aisa laga ki main aahana ko accept nahi karu ga

R-hurriedly-nahi armaan aise koi baat nahi hai or jeb mujhe pata chala ki main pregnant hoon toh tum yaha se chale gaye the.mujhe pata tha agar maine tume bata diya ki main ma banne wali hoon toh tum vapis aa jate per dil se nahi aaye

Armaan give her a look

R-i mean is liye nahi aate ki tum ne mujhe maaf ker diya hai is liye aate ki vo bacha tumhara hai.per ajj main bahot khush hoon aahana ki ous ke pita ka pyaar mile raha hai ab vo mujh se bahot baar pouch thi ki tum kaha ho

A-aahana mere beti hai ridhima ab ouse v0 sara pyaar mile ga jis ki vo kabil hai

R-thanks

A-is main thanks ki koi zururet nahi hai ridhima

Then aahana is come with juhi

J-ridhima beta tum fiker met kerna hum dono aahana ka purra dhyaan rake ge ok

R-mujhe pata hai aunty or aahana beta zada shatanni met kerna

Aa-theek hai mama zada nahi thoodi se karu gi

All started laughing

A-mom hume chalna chahye

J-hai beta aahana mama ko bye bolo

Aa-bye mama good night

R-hugs her-bye mera bacha good night

They left n reach malik mansion n enter home aahana is in armaan s arms

Aa-amazed to see such a big home-dadda

A-hain angel

Aa-ye itna bhra ghar kis ka hai

Juhi n armaan started laughing

A-angel ye hamara ghar hai

Aa-confuse- hamara

J-hain beta

Aa-smiling-bahot acha hai

A-mom am hungry angel app ko bhook lagi hai

Aahana nodded

J-acha toh kya kao ge

Aa-main pizza khau gi

J-ok baby

All started eating and after dinner

A-angel chalo sone

Aa-hai per mai kis ke sath so gi [confuse]

Armaan n juhi smile at her innocence

J-app apne dada ke sath so ge

Aa-happily look at armaan-okkk

Armaan n aahana both left n enter armaans room

Aa-looking at room-ye app ka room hai dadaa

Ar-yea angel its my room kyun app ko acha laga

Aa-acha hai per yaha per toh kitni books hai

A-confuse-books

Aa-hain-pointed towards all armaan office file

A-smiling-angel ye books nahi hai ye meri office ki files hai

Aa-ohh jaise meri school books hoti hai toh ye app ki office books hai na

A-smile at her cuteness-yeah angel chalo ab so jao

Aa-per kaise

A-angel jaise app her roz sote ho

Aa-per dada mera phoo nahi hai

A-confuse-phoo ye kon hai

Aa-mera toy mujhe ous ke bina nennni [sleep] nahi aati

A-per angel vo toh app ke nanu ke ghar per hai

Aa-phir main sougi kaise dada

A-kyun

Aa-mujhe ous ke bina nenni nahi aati

A-app try toh karo beta

Aa-nahi aati maine kaha na chalo na mama se leker aate hai

A-nahi angel look at time its 11 pm bahot raat ho gaye hai or app ki mama so raho hogi

J-kya hua

Armaan n aahana see juhi standing at door

Aa-daddi mere pass phoo nahi hai mujhe pus ke bina nenni nahi aati ab main kaise so gi daddi

J-u mean app ka toy phoo

Aahana nodded

A-mom bahot raat ho gaye hai ab main gupta house bhi nahi jaa sakta aahana ka toy lene

Aa-dadda vo toy nahi hai mera phoo hai

A-amazed-okk

J-ab kya

A-aisa kerte hai shop se naya le aate hai kyun angel

Aa-happily=yesss

J-armaan time dekha hai 11 ab kon se shop open hogi

A-i know mom mere ek frnd ki toy shop hai main ouse call kerta hoon

j-ok

armaan call his frnd n ask him to open his shop n he agree he said to him he will come

J-kya kaha

A-mom ous ne apne kaise servent ko keh diya hai vo shop open ker dega main or angel ja rahe hai or plz app so jaye hum aa jaye ge ok

J-ok beta

Both left n reach toy shop

A-hi

Servent-hi app ko kya lene hai

Ar-angel baby dekho kya lena hai app ko

Angel is surprised to see all toys

Aa-dadda see kitne toys hai or kitne big big

Armaan smile

A-app ko job hi acha lagta hai bes mujhe kaho ok

Aa-sachi

A-muchi

Aa-yupieee

Aahana buy lot of toys n their car is full with toys n they reach malik mansion n slept peacefully

MORNING TIME IN MAILK MANSION

Juhi get up

J-oh god 9 vej gaye armaan ka nashta banana hai oh god main late hog aye ab mujh pe chillaye ga

Suddenly her cell phone ring n see its ridhima no.

J-gud morning beta

R-god morning aunty

j-kaise yaad kiya subah subah

R-aunty vo ajj mujhe aahana ko hospital jeker janna hai

J-worried-hospital per kyun beta

R-smiling at her concern-actually aunty main aahana ka monthly check up kervati hon

J-thank god main toh der hi gaye thi theek hai ridhima toh yaha aa ja main bhi tere saath chalu gi ok

R-theek hai aunty main tyaar ho ker aati hon

j-ok beta rakhti hhon

she hang up n go towards kitchen.started making breakfast

J-shayad armaan ready ho raha hoga abhi jaldi se khaana bana deti hoon

Then door bell ring juhi come out from kitchen kaka open the door n see ridhima

Juhi hugs her

R-aunty aahana kaha hai

J-aao ridhima aahana shayad so rahi hai or mr tycoon zaruur koi file read ker rahe hoge

Ridhima smile

Both reach armaas room n juhi knock the door but not response.she again knock but again not response

J-shayad balcane main kaise se bath ker raha hoga main khud hi door khol deti ho

She open the door n shocked

……………………………………………………………….

Done

Tell me hows it if u like this part plz comments

Take care

Love u all


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