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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
I will disappear for a while...so until then, something to mull on for you girls!

Hmm! don't you guys think its too much of a coincidence if Leher is related to the dead actress and ends up at Kunal's chacha's place?

Besides that detail, the part that needs to be covered is how will you relate to a stranger who shares their appearance with the very thing of your past that you want to run away from?



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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Ah! Heer aur Ranjha...

This is the first thing that came to my mind.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d9p32sk1L-g[/YOUTUBE]

How about Chachaji and Naina scheming to have Dhruv and Leher play these roles for the town drama to get them together after the forced wedding?😊

Actually even this song, fits the scene...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vl8zpQZ5Jc8[/YOUTUBE]


Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: 6th.Element

Ah! Heer aur Ranjha...

This is the first thing that came to my mind.

How about Chachaji and Naina scheming to have Dhruv and Leher play these roles for the town drama to get them together after the forced wedding?😊

Actually even this song, fits the scene...


Love the concept and songs so far. Looking forward to the Lucknow flavor in the story. That will be different, I haven't been there so a new experience. Naina needs a friend in her saazish beside the Chachaji, someone in the neighborhood, a naughty boy perhaps who is set on annoying Dhruv on a daily basis. Let the kid not be nice to Naina to begin with then become best friends with her. Dhruv's protective daddy instincts can come into play. Who is Yami by the way? Never saw her except your pic.
Edited by ucompleteme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
This is what I had posted in the earlier discussion thread. I think you might have missed it.

"She came out wet and wandering, the house was a maze to her, hallways coming out of nowhere leading up to dark corners that always led her to skip a beat. Her blouse began absorbing the water drops that clung to her skin and she pulled the hair that swayed in the back, over to the front to make up for the sari that still hadn't made past her waist.
...

"Hold on...don't move now...you are going to trip and fall" And she did just as he asked, clumping his shirt in her fisted hands, while her eyes scrunched into slits and she moved in closer in his hold.

He heard her screech into his chest once again - perhaps from sensing the mouse scattering close to her feet - and now he was helpless, but to tighten his arm that rounded her hip, the thin sheen of wetness there making them slide down until it rested against the curve of her waist.
...

Yeah...I was going along the same lines for the marriage plot. That Leher would be proposing to Dhruv to marry her, more of a conditional marriage, until she can gain leverage in a custody battle that she is fighting for Naina - who being her step-sister is now being claimed by her step-mom's family, owing to the property that Leher's father is left behind in Naina's name after their father's recent death.

Now there can be a misunderstanding between Dhruv and Leher that she has her eyes on Naina's wealth as well. A question could be raised on why Leher doesn't have a major share in the property. I was thinking of reasoning that with the narration that Leher had left home upon his second wedding to a much younger woman.

How does that sound? See you all tomorrow...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Hasini...awesome songs and ideas...they are perfect for Leher and Dhruv 😍...waiting to see how all the suggestions are added to the story 😊


Avi...Yami was the heroine in the serial Yeh Pyar Na Hoga Kam withGaurav Khanna...,she acted in other serials and movies too...her name was Leher in YPNHK ...my siggies will tell u how crazy i am about Yami and Gaurav 😳


Jake...loved all your ideas...plz continue...i am a die-hard romantic too 😊





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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: --Ratna--


Avi...Yami was the heroine in the serial Yeh Pyar Na Hoga Kam withGaurav Khanna...,she acted in other serials and movies too...her name was Leher in YPNHK ...my siggies will tell u how crazy i am about Yami and Gaurav 😳

I did check it out on Youtube. They are so cute together. I think I remember seeing him in some ad on starone. Now this changes the Leher character in the story for me. She is too soft hearted to be a villain or mean in anyway.
Hasini, please give a teaser at least so we can add to it.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
H,
The story is getting great. The concept between Leher and Naina sounds good.
So that means, Leher will be telling Dhruv the truth of Naina right. Does Naina knows that Leher is actually her step sister and not her mommy.

You could make Leher be the strict mommy towards Naina as she is very much scared of people harm Naina. Where else Dhruv be the more of cool type. Would be a great combo.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
Blaming this on Ratna😆 but after seeing her a little bit in the serial, I want another suitor(wow, that's such an old term) or secret admirer for Leher who knows all her facts. She should not be aware of his feelings but think him a friend or acquaintance. Should add some masala to this khichdi, what say?
Edited by ucompleteme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
i agree with Avi...

even i want another suitor...

how abt chacha's son?? Dhruv's cousin...who knows very much abt leher...as he is smitten by her...

dhruv notices this n tries to find out more abt her through him...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Hasini...weekend is over...hope the the show was a huge hit...plz update soon...waiting for part 2 😍

Avi...so u saw a little bit of the serial...glad u agree that Leher should be a positive character...loved your idea of another suitor ❤️


Jyoti...perfect idea...chacha's son sounds good...let us see what Hasini thinks 😊


What do u all think of my new creation...just made it...these are pics from Yami's new film promotion...maybe Leher looked like this before all the troubles started brewing...


Edited by --Ratna-- - 13 years ago

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