ArHi FF:1: The BEASTS and the BLEEDING ROSES - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
Ok, so the man in the first part of the story was Anjali's husband right? I don't know whether to call him Shyam, is his name Shyam here???😆
For now, he seems fine. But then looks can be deceptive. I hope he is Anjali's husband and I'm not mistaken. Ha ha! the maid was trying to flirt with him, but he ignored her?😆
Oooh! Khushi and Payal are really excited to watch the play. But your last sentence is worrying me. I know the next chapter will hold some surprises for us.😛

As usual, awesome update!⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
being a huge fan of fantasy i cannot help but admire ur wrk!! it vry intriguing n makes u want 4 more!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey,

So we have a handsome stranger off to meet a lady who waited too long for him...hmmm...maybe its shyam off to meet anjali.

Nest chapter...why didnt khushi and payal know about the plays?? they have lived in this village for long right???...
What is going to happen that their smiles dissapear???
Maybe Arnav is on a prowl 😆
Or that stranger (assuming shyam) hits on khushi or payal... (next obviuosly being arnav to the rescue)

I seem to remmeber that anjali's pati was off to fight battles...means hes in the army...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Aqua...Gr8 work...good old days...when world was detached but hearts attached...:))
So she finally found her Laad Gov lol...N Ouch!! he dropped her...how they first drop n then fall...have read till chap7..will read more soon...thanks for the pm...n conti...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG this is amazing...i love it!!! please make sure you continue it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aqualine...short reply coz I'm on vacation...anyways...loved the update...I believe the guy on the horse is Anji's husband...she can wait ...that shows his arrogance...or may be I'm wrong...what's gonna happen in the dark...i'm curious...
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Posted: 13 years ago
before i read the tenth chapter i really appreciate the poem

the lordy lord poem

i really enjoyed it a lot

awesome updates


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Posted: 13 years ago

My oh my...Aquiiiyyy...

I go offline for a couple of weeks becoz of my damned exams and here u are with ur back to back updates...

NOT FAIR that I didn't get to read the updates firsthand...atleast soonish I mean...

Okies…enough of my ramblings and self pity...

Wat do we have here now...

The first day of the harvest festival... I was holding my breath on wat Arnav was gonna do because of khushi's ever sooo zealous courage on going and confronting him with THE key...

Reminded me so much of the mannat ki chaavi incident on the show...

But the description of the temple and its magical tree with the wishing ceremony has left me spell bound...I sooo want to experience it myself u know... It was wonderful and felt real...

THE MAP of ARHASIA... Gr8 work... loving ur efforts on bringing this tale as real as possible and magical too... Was it a little waterfall on the right side of ARHASIA hidden between the mountains and meadows... are u thinking wat Im thinking hon….a hidden mystical waterfall where Im expecting a romantic encounter...I guess im being my cheesy best self...Cant help myself from expecting this as I see that waterfall...he hee...LOLZ

Hope Anjali's wish comes true as much as she does... wanna see OUR Arnav... u know wat I mean...

The caring Arnav ... he sounds sooo...ummm...scary !!!! wishing to see him loosen up a bit with missing him on the show too...

Anywayzzz... the visitor...

He striked the curiosity in me... Anjali's husband... isnt he?!?!

And he doesn't care much abt his wife... uncanny... but I can see why u know...

She's sooo caught up with her brother and he thinks she doesn't love him much... so he gives her the same treatment... I sound typical... i know... but this was the only thing I could come up with as his potential reasons for excusing him on being not so loving husband...

And the final part... a cliffy... not bad aqui...

But I think this is were Arnav's plan for revenge comes into the story... doesn't it...

He had told OP to do something that would be his payback for khushi's recklessness... and in her broken state she might meet shyam...the supposed visitor... am I indulging too much into the plot of the mind catching tale now... Guess not...

Ooohfffooo...!!!!! I feel sooo sorry for khushi now... dumb Arnav... I hate him for putting her thru all this and finally he would be the one begging foe redumption...that guy... he always makes me lose my sanity by him losing his sanity because of his not so right anger in the most obvious right places...

Cant wait to know...actually read... on wat he had done now for revenge... fingers crossed on ur promised looonnnggg update this Saturday... will be waiting hon...


~~~ sam xoxo

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Posted: 13 years ago
hmm thanks for the map.
and in chapter 16. the visitor. military guy. so he''s lady anjali's husband.
and definitely not in love with her from what i see.
a man who loves his wife will be in a hurry to meet her after the long seperation.
he'll not make her wait for few more hours.
interesting.
update soon.
and thanks for the pm.
p.s. sorry for the late comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG! YOUR FF IS JUST GREAT👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
how did you manage to write this so amazingly gothic.
no words to decribe how much i loved this ff. please continue & pm me as well.

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