Core of My Existence#3(AR Story) DISCONTINUED NOTE PG 124 - Page 15

luvd it

thnx 4 d pm

cont soonish

Firstly, its so nice to be back here. 😳 I had been longing to read since forever but some thing or the other kept me occupied. Okay, so I read all the 3 parts I hadn't 25th, 26th and 27th and I loved it<3 Actually, in way I'm glad I didn't show up here when you originally updated 'cause I got to read so much together and I didn't even have to wait YAAY LOL. 😆 Honestly, I didn't expect the story would go this far, I thought Riddhima would get alright and then ta-daa happy ending! But I'm happy it didn't end there and so you're doing such a great job on the story.It doesn't seem exaggerated or forced and it has so much of DMG flavour.What I love about your writing Anku is that its very lucid.Its light and fluid like water, that takes you along with its flow.Writing should be about keeping the readers in the comfort zone, keeping them hooked and keeping their interest alive and not showing off your command on the language.You're doing all that so well. :D

Story-wise, I really loved all the developments throughout these parts, Riddhima being able to walk, their journey back home, getting back to their friends who are more than family, their happiness and joy coupled with the fears, anger and insecurities, everything.Everything's been written beautifully.<3 😳 I get your reasoning on why you bought up Armaan angle now admist the 'celebration'.And I couldn't agree more with you 'cause happiness truly comes when you're at peace from within.Otherwise the whole point of celebration is pointless when there's something nagging you inside. In any relationship, husband-wife, friendship or anything else its not only about being there for each other, living for each other.Their feelings, space and individuality is as much important.And you're only keeping it realistic and practical there.I loved the whole of Muskaan and Riddhima conversation and way it portrays how friends are with you through thick and thin.That goes for the whole gang too. :) I'm sure after the whole confrontation part, AR will get more closer (even if that's possible) and it will only strengthen their relationship.

Incredible work Anku! Makes me so proud of you. 🤗

And update whenever possible ..Dun stress...

PS: Your Arhi siggie is love... <3 <3

Love ya,

Vaish.. <3

I can't wait to read it..I'm sure it'll be awesome...but I'm still going to say this even though I haven't read the previous one...can you pleasee update soon so I can read both at once😆