[VERY IMP NOTE pg24] Mature OS: Just One Last Kiss - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
i may just kill that person right now! 😡 how dare that person to knock at this time!! grhh!! 😡😡😡
anyways that was too hot ☺️☺️ LOVED it ❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
it was too hot yaar..loved it...plz continue...loved loved...it...
plz pm me wen u update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
u have to have to continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
If I got hold of the second person, I swear his/her death is in my hands!!

Hope you will continue this!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Wow! This was SO hot! I mean usually the hot stuff develops after the first few lines of the story, but yahan toh pehli line se hi...! 😉
Loved it!
I was going to bang my laptop shut had it been Anjali going "Chhotey darwaza kholo" the first time the cousin knocked!😡 Thank God, tht ws not the case! Akash winning the bet and Arnav vouching revenge was hilarious! Need I say this:Plz continue..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
ashu loved it
it was so sensuous and hot
perfect timing of knocks😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
u need to continue it u cant leave it like that
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
loved it!!!! i want to know who knocked the 2nd time!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
oh that was good!!!! please continue... gah i want to know who knocked the second time... :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
u write beautifully

plzzz continue 😊 ...to tell us who knocked on the 2nd tym ..so we all may kill him/her 😆

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