[VERY IMP NOTE pg24] Mature OS: Just One Last Kiss

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello Peoples of IF!! What up?? Well I was bored and thought to write an OS... It's kind of Mature so beware 18+.

This is for Sarah (Desi-), no one writes sensous better then her and I gave it an attempt here but I had to add the funniness as I just had the keyboard itch for comedy!! Love you Sarah!!!

Lol! Enough of my Bak-Bak!! Here it is!!

***This is still a tribute to Sarah, just removed that part from the title as it was not letting me write that I had updated part 2! Still love you lots Sarah!

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Just One Last Kiss

"I thought you'd never make it!" Arnav said pressing his lips to hers and hard as he could while helping her take her salwar off.
"Sorry actually there was..." she lifts her hands to get the salwar off and momentarily broke from the kiss. As soon as it came off, Arnav's mouth found it's way back to where it belonged. She spoke while kissing him, her lips brushing his mouth. "...a lot of people..." her hands found their way under his shirt and she felt his strong muscular body.
She pushed him closer to her and felt his lean body tightly pressed against hers. She loved that feeling, the closeness she felt when their bodies were pressed to gether.
Arnav snaked his hands around her waist and pulled her closer. He leaned on her to the point where they both fell on the bed. "...and there were a lot of chores and..."
"Shh... Khushi! You talk too much, normally I would've listened but you know how I must be feeling right now. I haven't properly even kissed you since like a week ago. I need you right now before I burst from excitement."
He nibbled down her neck causing her to moan involuntarily. Khushi started to unbutton his shirt and Arnav began to unclasp her bra. He shifted so now he was on top of her.
Khushi whimpered at this sudden change in position and her one cry clicked Arnav back to the real world in seconds.
"Khushi, are you okay? Am I hurting you."
Khushi was too intoxicated in his touch to say anything. "Arrrnav... I'm f-f-fineee..." She moaned... "Just... don't... stop..." was all she could manage. Arnav had completely made her lose control of everything, she couldn't think. All she knew was that she wanted him and she wont be able to think until she had him.
Arnav smirked noticing his wife's craving for his touch. "Don't worry baby, by the end of tonight I will have made love to you so well that you will not even remember your name..." he placed open mouthed kisses down her neck and was onto her cleavage when...
*Knock Knock*
Arnav was distracted but Khushi pulled him back. "Let them knock, eventually they will notice that no one is going to answer." She said pulling him back to her face pleading him to stop the torture and perform the act already.
"Arrnavvv... Aahhh..." She moaned.
"Arrnavvv please end this torture here..." she said as she begged him to stop teasing her.
"Khushi my darling, the games have just begun. You yet have to be punished for staying busy all week." He continued onto her breast.
He sucked on one breast and massaged the other as he felt the nipple under harden with desire...
His member was starting to feel extrememly aroused and couldn't hold it any longer. He decided he would enter her when again...
*Knock Knock* "Arnav Bhaiya? Bhabhi? Aap andar hai? Akash bhai behosh ho gaye hai!" said a sweet 7 year old voice that belonged to Sonali, Arnav's youngest cousin.
"Uggh..." Arnav whined.
Khushi got up realizing that she had to.
"Akash bhi na!" Arnav said helping Khushi with her bra clasp
"Arnav... What kind of a brother are you? What if something really has happened to him? Hai Devi Maiya! Meri behen shaadi se pehle widwa ho jayegi!" she said as she helped Arnav button his shirt.
"What kind of brother am I? The question should be what kind of brother is he? This whole week you've been busy in his wedding preps not having a single moment for me and now he's taking over our nights too? I swear he probably just fainted out of shame after figuring out what goes on in the Suhaag Raat." He chuckled.
"Arnav, even at a time like this you're in a mood for jokes?"
"Oh I'm in the mood alright, but not so much for jokes..." he leaned in as she pushed him away.
"Not now."
They finally got dressed and scurried out.
They didn't find Sonali so they decided to go to Akash's room themselves.
It was dark and Khushi immediately grabbed Arnav's hand to which he gave a reassuring squeze to assure her that he was there.
And then the lights suddenly went on.
"Sab nikalo 5000 Rs." Demanded a victorious Akash.
What the heck was going on. Our ArHi were very confused.
"Kya chote, sab ke samne humari naak katwa di." said an pouty-faced Anjali sitting on the bed with the rest of the Raizada cousins.
"What the hell is going on ? Akash tum teek ho?"
"Hai woh actually we had a bet on how long it would take you to get here."
Arnav was beyond annoyed. I mean he had left such important work incomplete because of them.
"I said 1 minute assuming that you are a caring and protective brother." Anjali said handing Akash the money.
"I said 2 minutes assuming you two were asleep." said Rahul handing him 5000 Rs.
"I said 3 assuming you two were lazy to get up." said Jothika handing Akash her 5000 Rs reluctantly.
"And I said a full 10 minutes knowing that my brother must have been engaged in some pretty "important work" that just absorbed him and his senses."
Khushi looked away and blushed furiously. Arnav saw this and then glared at Akash.
"Is this why you called us here? I was in the middle of something..."
"Very important right?" finished Anjali pointing to the lipstick marks visible on Arnav's neck.
Khushi cheeks turned an EVEN darked shade of red. If that was even possible anymore.
"And you too Khushi. I mean you two seem like you were VERY busy, we wouldn't DARE bother you..." Anjali said observing how messed up their hair was. After everyone started laughing until Arnav and Khushi noticed the subject of the laughter.
Khushi's eyeballs popped out of their sockets realizing what she had done to Arnav's hair. She quickly attempted to fix it and then fixed her own hair but it didn't prove to be much helpful since they still looked like Return Of The Mummy Part 2.
Arnav was annoyed. "Agar aapki laughter party khatamb ho toh main aur Khushi jaye?"
"Arre bhai, kya jaldi hai?" Akash said pulling him back.
Bete, tera number bhi ayega na, Payal se baat bhi karne diya to mera naam ASR nahi.
After mentally planning his revenge, Arnav pulled out of Akash's grip and walked out.
"Teek hai bye, have a good night!" Khushi said walking out with Arnav.
"Sleep well!" Anjali yelled out while laughing.
*Back to the privacy of thier room*
As soon as Arnav fully entered the room, he closed the door shut, locked
it and pushed his lady love up to the door and began to feast on her neck.
"Arrnavv..." Khushi moaned. No. She was not going to let this happen, she had already faced a lot of embarrassement due to him. Not anymore.
She pushed him away.
"Arnav, because of you I get teased WAY too much, I hate you for that." Khushi pulled back.
"But I love you jaan." He pulled her closer to him ensuring no distance between their desire driven bodies. He claimed her lips yet again and again.
He continued to repeat his previous actions as he ripped her salwar off of her and next was her bra.
His hands roamed all over her body. He loved feeling her. Oh dear how he hoped that this would never end.
He slid his fingers down to her feminity.
"Khushi, you're so wet." He chuckled.
"Well you can't expect a woman to stay un-aroused when you're around. You're too hot to handle my Sexyzaida." She bit his ear.
He pleasured her feminity with his hands until they knew it was time. Just as he was about to start...
*Knock Knock*
They both looked at each other in confusion.
I guess this night wasn't meant to be. Khushi got up and Arnav pulled her down, "Khushi, before you go just one last kiss?"
Khushi didn't respond using words but instead lay a delicious cold kiss on Arnav's lips. She winked,
"We shall continue this soon." Khushi smiled as she got up to unlock the door.
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Lol I hope it wasn't THAT bakwaas, I hope you didn't hate it THAT much.
Like and leave comments, even comments like "Kya Bakwaas Hai?" work lol! 😆
This is a OS and most likely will not continue unless special requests by countless people.
Dear Sarah: I hope this was OK, I tried lol! I just want to let you know who are amazing and no one can write like you!!! Wuv you lots!!
Love all of you,
Ashu <3
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With so many heartfelt requests I just couldn't say no, so I continued this!
Part 2: Page 11
(It's on my blog so the link is on pg 11)
Edited by london_doll - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i am actually in d mood to kill d person who knocked second time. pls continue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mouramen

i am actually in d mood to kill d person who knocked second time. pls continue.

😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it...I wonder who knocked the second time
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Posted: 13 years ago
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HECK GIRL!!! That was ABSOLUTELY DELICIOUS!!!

*maybe i SHOULDN'T write hot scenes anymore...YOU can write them for me!*

*APPLAUSE*
*LOUDER APPLAUSE!*


Your talent is sensational! what a story! and yes, i loooved the knocks on the door! it's just 'sadistic writers nature' to make the readers mad 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very clever of Aakash...I must say there are some BRAINS behind that GEEKY look!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Desi-

HECK GIRL!!! That was ABSOLUTELY DELICIOUS!!!


*maybe i SHOULDN'T write hot scenes anymore...YOU can write them for me!*

*APPLAUSE*
*LOUDER APPLAUSE!*


Your talent is sensational! what a story! and yes, i loooved the knocks on the door! it's just 'sadistic writers nature' to make the readers mad 😆

*Faints*
Seriously Sarah, You're too kind! But we all know that Sarah is the Queen of Sensous stuff, I was actually going to ask YOU to guest star (well I guess guest-write 😆) an update for something of mine that I'd figure out later but your probably very busy so it's a HUGE compliement to see that you actually took the time out to read it and I promise you that this will not be the only Sarah-Apprecialtion thread out there, there is more to come!! Love you girlie!!! <3
As for writing better sensous then you, are you kidding me Sarah? That is too funny to even think about, wer all know that you ROCK at what you do =)
And ikr, we sadistic writers just can't fully give in it's like against are secret code or something lol! 😆
Edited by london_doll - 13 years ago
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next time they need to put a sign do not disturb :p seriously would bash d hell out who knocked on d door for d second time... Lovely os...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😡 me too
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this was...I could not control my laughter!!! and then..there were moments when i swung between bursting from laughter to bursting from over-heating...😳

brilliantly written!

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