[VERY IMP NOTE pg24] Mature OS: Just One Last Kiss - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow that was amazing!

Both of them having sexy time and the Raizada cousins being mean!

Damn they got stopped the second time!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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A biig applause to u for not only writing such hot scenes but also for even imagining that akaash has some brains
The whole betting part was so awesome that i was laughing like mad. Poor akaash, he has messed with the wrong person.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was nice 👍🏼, I felt like punching the person who knocked for second time 😡 ,but just one observation first he was removing Khushi's salwar- kameez and the second time he was taking off her sari and blouse 😕 😕 , did khushi change before going out ??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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how dare the person who knocked the door!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!,his family is disturbing them too much
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sini1234

It was nice 👍🏼, I felt like punching the person who knocked for second time 😡 ,but just one observation first he was removing Khushi's salwar- kameez and the second time he was taking off her sari and blouse 😕 😕 , did khushi change before going out ??

nice obs. lol! I was writing this with a break in between son i guess i forgot what i wrote lol!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved the second knock part...muhahahaha...WICKED :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was funny... poor lovebirds got no time to sate their passion
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh it was so hawt. Akash understood that they were doing important work. You have to continue this.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was soo good.i mean i loved it...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Funtastic!!
It was hilarious towards the end poor souls..can't even have sex in peace!! LOL!!


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