Fatal Attraction: Thread 4 {Chapters 16-18}

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#741

ooohhh so arnav is gettin jealous...wow dis part was amazing n dear as for sum1 bashin u...dnt take it seriously...u r very good writer n we love ur writings...so dnt wory n thnx 4da p0m dear

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gauranitai

@gauranitai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#742

to hell was d person saying ur ff is slow paced... i hate wen people make the couple fall in love in no time... its unrealistic!! in my opnion u need 2 get 2 kno someone n along d way somting mite happen..dat love at first sight ting doesnt convince me...

wonderful update...i jus wanna read more n more.. an end end of evry update i feel its 2 short n want more..lol..gr8 job n keep it up!

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TrueMuskaan

@TrueMuskaan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#743

Originally posted by: reyabear

Hahah I should! What a great idea you just gave me! Thank you :D
And there is a picture of the dress on page 1 of this thread 😊

No probs :)

And wow, that dress is so elegant and sexy at the same time! I love the gold chain as the straps! Theres so much fabric below the waist! Love it, perfect choice for Khushi!

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Sanjana

@sanjanaprincess

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Posted: 13 years ago

#744

Just read it and it was fantastic! Jealous Arnav😍 At least Arnav got to know about Aditya sending messages to Khushi! I loved this update and thanks for the PM dear! Sorry to hear about someone bashing your FF's!🤗 Don't worry your FF is not slow -paced, whoever is writing that is just jealous of your talented writing!😉

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purplekid

@purplekid

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Posted: 13 years ago

#745

Even your fillers are beautifully written! Loved the update, and hope you feel better!

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Shamima

@-shamima-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#746

Ooh arnaav and khushi sharing an intense teasing session well one sided teasing session lol but alas adityas text broke the spell and hmm aman getting all touchy touchy making our poor arnaav fume to a next level and yay I knew eventually she will wear the dress and woop arnaav said she looked beautiful all credit to sids probing lool anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

Ps whoever is bashing don't understand the essence of your writing and the pace is going just right on this ff the building up of the plot and the emotions so yeah your doing great and don't let these people bring you down ok 🤗

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Electric_BuBBle

@Electric_BuBBle

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Posted: 13 years ago

#747

Awesome update, Shreya! :D

I can totally understand the whole bashing thing, it happened with me too, lol.

the update was excellently written, I'm glad it didn't fit her again, serves her right.

Thanks for the PM and continue soon :D

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zafi

@zafi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#748

Superb update.👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I am glad Arnav knows now that Aditya is texting and in a way stalking Khushi.

I don't know who is bad mouthing this story but I think they are idiots cause I love this story.

Besides it's your story and you can write it any way you like. I will still read it and enjoy it.

Well done.

Can't wait to read more.

Continue soon. Thanks.😃

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Avni Raju

@JennyAvni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#749

Wow loved ur update... It's so addictive yar... Hope she is not dreaming n u stopped at a cliff hanger.. Can't wait for the next update...
Thanx for the pm