Fatal Attraction: Thread 4 {Chapters 16-18}

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#751

i dont know why someone would bash ur work its way too good and honestly i like the slow pace it makes the story more realistic!

Anyways loved the uodate! LOL when Arnav says the real truth that she looks beautiful I was like haha finally you admit the truth and i agree with everyone- jealous arnav is an awesome arnav! LOL Funny and cute- i love it!

its a five star update- ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️!!! and thnx for PM!

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yusam

@yusam

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#752

OHH WOWW... I HAD SOO WANTD KHUSH KHUSH TO B THE SHOW STOPPER N THR IT IS... :) BICHAAARI ANARKALIII... LOL... LAST PARAAA... I SERIOUSLY DINT EXPECT ARNAV WUD SAY THT... BUT HE DIDD.. WWOOOHHOOO... THNX FOR WRITING IT SO WELL BABES.. THNX FOR THE PM... :)

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RASMI

@-carpediem-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#753

Shreya loved it...And for those anonymous persons,tell them to go to hell.we love ur work...I cant beleive ppl are bashing an ff,i thought bashing thing is for serials only...

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simi888

@simi888

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#754

thanks for the update!

with regards to the bashing, i dont understand how anyone could question your story telling abilities. You really make EVERY chapter so great and worthy of reading.

I for one am loving the pace so far, its no fun if the they fall head over heels in love in the first couple of chapters, the build up is the best part of any love story! Its the most interesting phase of any story so feel free to stretch it as long as you want, im positive you will make it an exciting and fun journey for us readers!

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ipkkndbestshow

@ipkkndbestshow

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#755

Hey...that was fab!! Cant wait for the nxt!!

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goguma

@goguma

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#756

what a spoil brat this anna is! serves her right for not fitting on that dress! ha!

and now kushi has the chance to rock the runaway! yayy!!
i think arnav meant every word when he said "she is beautiful"

there is flirt and there is jealousy coming from arnav's side..
that is GOOD! 😉

am getting more curious who this aditya is, but will wait patiently..

tks for the PM...awesome! 👏

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nims6

@nims6

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#757

wow...i loved it...loved it...i just love this ff...so its khushi's turn...and i love sid for making arnav say the truth...he just said she is beautiful infront of everyone!!!...im xcited...to read the next chapter...thank you sooo much for giving such a wonderful ff...love you...and im surprised to see that people criricised abt the pace...i just love this pace...thank you soo much for updating...you made my day...