MG ff:HASEEN ZINDAGI

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys, this is not my idea of starting a ff... but since some of my friends pestered me i thought of writing it for dedicating them .. if u find any mistakes or suggestion i am ready to accept it as i am not a great writer as such ... fine let me stop with all my chatter box stuff... lets move on to my story... this is dedicated specially to all who pestered me dearies...


here it goes,

PART 1


IN HOSIYARPUR:

It was a lovely day . The day everyone was longing for and that day started with the crying sound of a girl child. Everyone was happy with her crying sound and they thought that their princess has entered the beautiful world. The ultimate fact behind this is very pathetic and they never understood that they are going to cry because of their princess. May be thats their princess last cry ( my thinking!!!!!)


There started the hell for them who is around her. She is a girl child and probably the first girl child in her entire family who are from this generation and so she gained not only love, care but also they respected her even the elders who are the dominating factors of the family. she is a real model of how every one dreams their life to be ( me 2 thinking so). Not everyone gets this chance like her but she got it to live her life just the way she like it to be... so cute right

The day she came into this world she promised in her heart that she will never cry... The "TROUBLE MAKER" as favouritely called by everyone ( name kept by me ha ha ha ) will never allow others to sleep during nights... sleepless nights for everyone surrounding her. After all the yelling dramas in which she played a major role will get tired and would start her sleep peacefully during the day time... Everyone understood her intentions and took turns to look after her ... After several name that was discussed she was named "GEET" because even her yelling sound was as sweet as that of a nightingale...


This is our princess here...




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Posted: 13 years ago
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INDEX
PART 1,2,3,4/pg1
PART 5/ pg 3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2


yes, that was our princess there in hosiyarpur..


Fine if there is a princess there will be a prince like some standard fixed norms. yes, a prince was there for this princess too... a one month old baby was there in DELHI with his parents who had the perfect dignity even now . A month old baby with dignity interesting. yes, he didnt even care about anything around him. Even if there were pranks played on him or anyone started playing with him he never showed any reactions . Quite strange thing but it was usual to MAAN as dignity suited him . well it is strange that a one month baby doesnt react will roll around your minds ( even i am thinking so but believe me i think he is thinking of starting a construction company). our price here for you all...





Geet our princess has two great pals. Luckily and by fate she got close with her aunt's son Abhay (the pyek Vivi) and the other one was shaan who is Abhay's friend. will it be lucky or not god knows it ?... Abhay is two years elder to Geet but he took utmost care on Geet like she is a treasue to be preserved. yes, they shared a beautiful bond of affection like sibblings. yes, right from her birth she was with abhay that helped them share a lovely bond of affection ... Abhay will never allow anyone to come near Geet... yes, Geet was always with Abhay untill she was 3 years old ... Abhay came home directly soon after his school gets over to hang over with Geet with his friend Shaan and loved every bit of their games that is played with his beloved sister as he thinks ...endless playing between Geet, Abhay and Shaan.



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Edited by abhiya92 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks to all my friends who delighted my heart today. Thanks for your support I didn't think I will get support from many people ... First, I thank you all for that... I promise you all that I will do my best to make this ss as interesting as possible... enough of my promises and stuff lets get into our haseen zindagi's dream land

PART 3

Here we have our little princess Geet, Abhay and Shaan's endless playing which was continuing ... fine, Geet will usually gets accustomed to any situation she faced... but we have our prince who is exactly opposite to our princess. Well, opposite poles always attract each other fine lets leave our physics here. Maan on the other side, played on his own way all alone ...

Life went on with the daily routine stuff of Geet and Maan as usual and during Geet's first birthday she had a suprise waiting for her ... yes Abhay had made the day special for her by getting her the teddy bear which was so cute and it was so big when compared to our princess .. lets see the gift which our princess got from him

Fine maan had his birthday as usual like all other days. When he was two years old, he got a sister and he cared her so much that's the time we realise that even our prince has some emotions deep within him ... yes, his sister was none other than Pia (pyek sukriti)

Maan cared for her a lot and played with her there after... he played video games and had a hell lot of fun with her ... he was only happy with his sis... anything for Pia is his motto... fine, superb bonding was there between this sis and bro... after few months a really sad moment struck his life ... this was the saddest moment any child should not face in their life ...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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friends here is my next update for you all... thanks for the support you are giving me..


PART 4


A sad moment struck his life ... this is the saddest moment a child should not face in his life... his dad got a mild heart attack and his mother decided to take him to US so that they can have a better treatment and it can be cured after a surgery ... but what can be done with Maan and Pia ... Maan couldn't understand the situations and thought that his mother is leaving him all alone thats what he can know... his parents decided to take Maan and Pia to Hosiyapur and leave them there for their education with Daadima. Yes, Maan and Pia thought that it was a picnic but soon that became their routine life without their parents... yes, soon both felt that they are all alone and during the times they felt low Daadima made them alright and win over hurdles and achieve success.

The morning of everyday in Maan's house will be in this state.Maan and Pia over eachother showering a love and care so delicate and sweet.

As days passed by Geet's naughtiness grew along. She called everyone and started playing always and she will have a big crowd running around her for games... everyone is her friend... even though she is from a rich family she doesn't bring in her status in friendship... Geet played everything with everyone and runs to the core playing pranks at times ... no one can predict her... she is a unique piece with no substitute...

On the other hand, our prince Maan played video games all alone and at times with his sis Pia... and sometimes he will stay quite and Maan has an attitude where he always goes along the people of his so called high class society...

Yes, the heavenly days the day of attending schools started for both Maan and Geet. They were admitted in the same school which is the number one school in Hosiyarpur. But though they were in same standard, they were in different sections... as it is a very big school no one can know the other person who is not their class mate...

Geet on her first day went happily to school in the dream of having new friends ... yes, there she met her souls same like her Armaan and Ridz. Yes, they became so close in a few hours as they sat together during classes in the last bench... always last benchers rocks ( i knw the fun of being the last bencher). Geet plays sitting in last bench and gained the attraction of all the people in the class. Soon, she became a popular person in her class due to her chatter box activities.

Maan had a different attitude in his first day of school he felt sad to leave his sis all alone at home and go... yet, its his life he had to go ... in class, he met a boy who sat in first row (omg the studious rows). He went and sat near the guy named Raj and soon they became close gradually and became good friends ...



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Posted: 13 years ago
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woww i loved the conceptt ... continue writingg n loved the picss which u added ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it... thank you so much for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful update..i m loving it...👏
waiting already for next part update soon...😊
thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I REALLY LIKED IT
PM ME DEAR
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you all for your support...

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