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Pooja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

superbbb FF..simply enjoyed it😛pls accept my buddy request

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Simran

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Just read all the parts in one go...and all of them were fab and epic:)...I just loved how Arnav picked up and walked with her in his arms all the way to the little house , while they were stuck in the rainstorm:)...beautiful and OMG part 8 was just...*blushing*...wow amazing...please please continue soon and when u do update, please please pm me the updates...I added you as a buddy...

Thanks again:D

-Simran-

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: ArhiAbhiya
Just read all the parts in one go...and all of them were fab and epic:)...I just loved how Arnav picked up and walked with her in his arms all the way to the little house , while they were stuck in the rainstorm:)...beautiful and OMG part 8 was just...*blushing*...wow amazing...please please continue soon and when u do update, please please pm me the updates...I added you as a buddy...
Thanks again:D

-Simran-

Thanks Simran! My updates are part of a new series called Dark night dawning. Hope you got a chance to see it :-)

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sur91

@sur91

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Hey there!!
I just read all the chapters and now I'm off to read its sequel.
Ur story is just amazing. Simply beautiful. Though I have been to nainital a couple of times before but the way u have described it, I feel like going again and reliving its beauty.

The emations and transitions in the the story between ArHi were magnificent.

I just loved it.

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Sharmini Segari

@Chimpsy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

I feel like a really, really bad child for not reading the chapters on time and commenting... Very sorry... 😔

My take on the overall FF- awesome story, the story flow was fantastic, the arguments and MU were very like Arshi, the romantic parts were beautiful, and loved how you ended the story! 😃

Khushi is more dignified here than in the serial, if I may say so. Thanks for 'making' her like that. 😉And loved the part where Arnav rectifies his mistakes immediately upon realization.

And thanks for mentioning 'maggi'- it's extra special since Nestle celebrates its 100th year anniversary this year!

I do hope to read another FF soon, as you write extremely well... 😉

Please PM me with details of your work- would love to read them! 😊

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: Chimpsy
I feel like a really, really bad child for not reading the chapters on time and commenting... Very sorry... 😔

My take on the overall FF- awesome story, the story flow was fantastic, the arguments and MU were very like Arshi, the romantic parts were beautiful, and loved how you ended the story! 😃

Khushi is more dignified here than in the serial, if I may say so. Thanks for 'making' her like that. 😉And loved the part where Arnav rectifies his mistakes immediately upon realization.

And thanks for mentioning 'maggi'- it's extra special since Nestle celebrates its 100th year anniversary this year!
I do hope to read another FF soon, as you write extremely well... 😉

Please PM me with details of your work- would love to read them! 😊

Thanks a ton for your lovely comments Chimpsy :-) I think Khushi is still impulsive but not downright silly ...her impulsiveness creates some romantic situations for the duo and I wanted there to be romance between Arhi in the beautiful Himalayas...

I have PMed you about my new FF ... its called Dark night dawning ... I will send you another PM in any case

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mashal

@crazy_mishee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

read ur ff sm days back...

since dn waiting 4 u 2 update.

plx update soon

really intersting ff

cn u plx pm me ur updates

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: crazy_mishee
read ur ff sm days back...
since dn waiting 4 u 2 update.
plx update soon
really intersting ff
cn u plx pm me ur updates

Thanks ! I have continued this series with a new FF called Dark night dawning ..

Dark night dawning – Part 1

I will send you a buddy request so that I can PM you on further updates.

Edited by charlotte74 - 13 years ago