FF Arhi: Himalayan Magic - Part 8 Updated Page 21

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charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: mallug007
Char,This is the first time I have commented on this forum. I have to say you are an amazing writer! I loved your story! The way you describe every detail is amazing. I would really appreciate it if you continue with this story. Again, you are a gifted writer, you should really think about publishing if you haven't already!

Thanks for you wonderful comment. This means a lot as this is my first attempt at writing. To tell the truth, from planning the honeymoon, to the build up to the final climax, though enjoyable to write has drained a lot of energy from me. I had to put in a lot of thought because I wanted to keep this story as close to what could potentially happen in the show. To continue with this seems tricky to me at this point of time but I will definitely sleep on you suggestion :-)

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priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

really amazing
and ending was simply awesum
👏👏👏
thank u sooo much for the pm

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charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: sanjeewi15
pls pls... dnt stop it frm here... poor Khushi... she doesn't knw abt Arnav's feelings...
u have to have to continue... it is a humble request... :)

Thanks for you comment sanjeewi! I really appreciate it . You think Khushi should also understand Arnav's feeling for her... hmmm we will have to see if can be depicted in a simple manner or will that be as complicated as Arnav himself?

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charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: pkr100
What a magical story u have given to us. Really loved the way u wrote it. Pls don't stop dear. Arnav should also open his heart to her . He should tell her how much he love her...pls pls continue dear😊

Thanks pkr for your comment. I know Arnav should also open his heart to her. But will it as simple for him as it is for Khushi? She if full of love and he is full of pain. I will have to give it some thought :-)

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charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: peepli
Really really great dear.. felt sad for khushi at the ending.. stupid girl doesnt know arnav is mad abt her...

He has bound her to himself permanently because he loves her. But she cannot assume that he does unless he actually tells her. So the fight continues ... Thanks Peepli...

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Nira khan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

That was sooo beautiful ...😍

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Nupur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

heyy its awesomrrr plzzz pm me 2 :))

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jenshad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Arnav Is Way Too Possessive About Khushi . Awww, They Became One & They Will Stay Together For Eternity :) Hope Khushi Understands That He Loves Her Too 😳