FF Arhi: Himalayan Magic - Part 8 Updated Page 21

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

your writing amused me big time.I have become your fan.You narrated the beauty of the surroundings of the nature and depict the love and passion of arnav and khusi aesthatically .plz cotinue.love to read more of your writing.

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Riima_Azraa

@Riima_Azraa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

wow ur FFs are amazing!! 👏

ur writing is amazing.. I could picture every moment of that!! will you be carrying on?? pm me wen yu do... dnt want to miss it

much love

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: sparklystarstud
u ended it already... nooo...
i loved this ff alot...
perhaps... u'll write another ff after they reach delhi i hope...
this final update... marvelous... beautiful...
and could perfectly understand that the permanent marriage is the way of arnav admitting to his feelings for khushi...
he just has to express it to make life with him heaven for khushi...
thanx for the pm luv... u kept their characters real... love it

~~~ sam

thanks a ton for your comment!! you got it absolutely right! poor Arnav is unable to express his love and ends up doing what he does best ...cuts a deal with her about binding her forever with him :-) and thanks again for telling me that I try to keep the characters real ...that has always been my intention...

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: sohara
your writing amused me big time.I have become your fan.You narrated the beauty of the surroundings of the nature and depict the love and passion of arnav and khusi aesthatically .plz cotinue.love to read more of your writing.

Thanks sohara! especially for mentioning the beauty of the surroundings... I did a tiny bit of research on it and I am happy that someone appreciated the effort :-)

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Arnavdewaani

@Arnavdewaani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

wow...u hv got to continue...looking forward to where this is going...thnx!

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sanjeewi15

@sanjeewi15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: charlotte74

Thanks for you comment sanjeewi! I really appreciate it . You think Khushi should also understand Arnav's feeling for her... hmmm we will have to see if can be depicted in a simple manner or will that be as complicated as Arnav himself?

Don't make it complicated, poor Khushi... she won't be able to handle... :) But what ever you write i'll read... Im addicted to this story... :)

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: sanjeewi15

Don't make it complicated, poor Khushi... she won't be able to handle... :) But what ever you write i'll read... Im addicted to this story... :)

You know Sanjeewi its not really in my hands... its Arnav...he is the one who creates complications :-)

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#178

That was a beautiful FF, really enjoyed reading it!!!! Was so happy for Khushi when I read the chapter initially, but was quite surprised at reading the last few lines!!!!

Thanks for PM

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: Honkytonk
That was a beautiful FF, really enjoyed reading it!!!! Was so happy for Khushi when I read the chapter initially, but was quite surprised at reading the last few lines!!!!

Thanks for PM

Well... it is the end of their honeymoon ...but it is not the end of their story... I am afraid, Khushi's happiness will have to wait some more...