FF Arhi: Himalayan Magic - Part 8 Updated Page 21 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
that was super duper amazing ending dear!
loveD the ouTburSt of khusi, atleast that madE arnav realize!
anjali is a darling!
I LOVED IT !!
i was thnking maybe u could write a sequel to ths? abouT their process of falLing in love? :)
i loOk for forward to reading more of ur work :D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: charlotte74


Devi,

Thanks, first for the Geeta Ma wali compliment and then thanks for your honest feed back. I really appreciate it. I think I will explain a little bit here.
When I started this, in the show Khushi was going through a hard time with Arnav and his family. We were all feeling a little sad for her. So I decided to give her a honeymoon like any new bride would want. Of course since her husband is Arnav, it would not be easy. So everything would have to be circumstantial and not planned. So Nainital comes up as a business trip for Akash. Arnav is forced to tag along. Anjali Di the romantic comes in handy to makes things easy. The events that follow is completely circumstantial as well. The walk on Tandi sadak, the bike ride to binsar, sunset at zero point, being stuck in a romantic cottage on a mountainside, visit to kasar devi mandi etc.

Another point I wanted to bring up was that Khushi proves to Arnav that she can be and look classy if she wanted to - this was born after the water fight episode. Hence the gown.

The whole honeymoon series was meant for Arnav and Khushi to acknowledge their growing attraction toward each other culminating into their final act of love - in spite of the MU. And this could happen only in the magical himalayas. (My own honeymoon was in Manali :-))

Believe me, I thought a lot if I should have made them confess before this. But I think I was selfish. Maybe I wanted to write more about them. Sorry for giving you a long drawn explanation. But I think I needed to get this out of my system. And thanks to you for helping me with this :-)



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
pls pls... dnt stop it frm here... poor Khushi... she doesn't knw abt Arnav's feelings...
u have to have to continue... it is a humble request... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
What a magical story u have given to us. Really loved the way u wrote it. Pls don't stop dear. Arnav should also open his heart to her . He should tell her how much he love her...pls pls continue dear😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

great update! Please continue and write the next parts 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Really really great dear.. felt sad for khushi at the ending.. stupid girl doesnt know arnav is mad abt her...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Char,This is the first time I have commented on this forum. I have to say you are an amazing writer! I loved your story! The way you describe every detail is amazing. I would really appreciate it if you continue with this story. Again, you are a gifted writer, you should really think about publishing if you haven't already!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rarepearl83

beautifully written👏 but this the last part..hmm. luved every bit of it. will wait for more from you


Thanks rarepearl. I would like to continue as well. Lets see :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy44

that was super duper amazing ending dear!
loveD the ouTburSt of khusi, atleast that madE arnav realize!
anjali is a darling!
I LOVED IT !!
i was thnking maybe u could write a sequel to ths? abouT their process of falLing in love? :)
i loOk for forward to reading more of ur work :D


I would definitely want to write more about them... they have already fallen in love with each other... Arnav doesnt want to reveal it and he wont let Khushi reveal it either. So how do we convince Arnav?

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