FF Arhi: Himalayan Magic - Part 8 Updated Page 21

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

aww she finally told him that she did all this for him, and he realised his mistake!

She saw the happy Arnav!

Finally they're one and this update was damn good

absolutely loved it

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mrin0709

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Loved it!!!

THanks for the PM

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charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: ndevi
hi, I read all your parts in a go & this FF was stupendo fantabulousy fantastic (like Geeta Ma says in DID)

But y u end it & the MU is still not cleared. I thought they will return 2 RM as love birds. I would have prefer if they both had confess their feelings and all the misunderstanding clears and Khushi had 4give him.

Mayb u can have a epiloque 2 conclude the story.

Sorry this is just my random thought no heart feelings.

Devi,

Thanks, first for the Geeta Ma wali compliment and then thanks for your honest feed back. I really appreciate it. I think I will explain a little bit here.

When I started this, in the show Khushi was going through a hard time with Arnav and his family. We were all feeling a little sad for her. So I decided to give her a honeymoon like any new bride would want. Of course since her husband is Arnav, it would not be easy. So everything would have to be circumstantial and not planned. So Nainital comes up as a business trip for Akash. Arnav is forced to tag along. Anjali Di the romantic comes in handy to makes things easy. The events that follow is completely circumstantial as well. The walk on Tandi sadak, the bike ride to binsar, sunset at zero point, being stuck in a romantic cottage on a mountainside, visit to kasar devi mandi etc.

Another point I wanted to bring up was that Khushi proves to Arnav that she can be and look classy if she wanted to - this was born after the water fight episode. Hence the gown.

The whole honeymoon series was meant for Arnav and Khushi to acknowledge their growing attraction toward each other culminating into their final act of love - in spite of the MU. And this could happen only in the magical himalayas. (My own honeymoon was in Manali :-))

Believe me, I thought a lot if I should have made them confess before this. But I think I was selfish. Maybe I wanted to write more about them. Sorry for giving you a long drawn explanation. But I think I needed to get this out of my system. And thanks to you for helping me with this :-)

Edited by charlotte74 - 13 years ago

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charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: gunjan.ria
Ohhh..dis z soo nyc!! Incredible!! Perfect picture words,clear descriptions,heart touching details..brilliant job! Superlike👍🏼!! send me a pm wen u update nxt!

Thanks Gunjan! But I did PM you.

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charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: shena07
loved every part..do u do pm?can u add me pls...😊

Thanks I will PM you.

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Ms. Fernandes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

beautifully written👏 but this the last part..hmm. luved every bit of it. will wait for more from you

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thechaigirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Mindblowing update...loved it ...u write beautifully

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srmirji

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

hey dear...thanks for the lovely FF. Very well written ...the last part was really good. And the last line by Arnav was typical him...
it feels nice to read a happy ending. Khushi surely deserves it...