SS Part 6 of My Avenging Angel (Arhi, A Kiss) - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
Woohooo! A North and South Fan!!!!!!!!!! Mary, darlin', they don't make 'em like Richard Armitage anymore, more's the pity 😆. I remember I saw all four episodes in one night. I was never the same. Margaret Hale and John Thornton (John...*swoons*) joined my List Of Legendary Characters Who Totally Should Have Been Real.😍 They were...Are... EPIC! Did you know BBC network didn't expect North & South to be a success at all (it was apparently supposed to be just a tax fluke to lower the tax bracket of the network), but when it launched such an overwhelming number of people watched and loved it that their network websites broke down because of the sheer number of phonecalls and North &South fans joining and commenting? 🤓 And Richard Armitage became a Legend (how many people can manage to look hot in sideburns and stiff collars?). ⭐️Sorry about the rant. Really, really sorry, but then again, you shouldn't have said the words 'John' and 'Thornton' 😆.
Are you still with me, Mary? Good. Because I have a LOT to tell you.
I haven't commented in a Looong While 'cause of my Finals, and let me tell you, they were a pain in the a**... ahem, neck. But I'm here now! Aaand...I LOVE IT. Seriously, I read all the parts in one go and I have this to say... THIS SS ROCKS!!!!!! "My Avenging Angel" is one of the best creative works I've read here. Your storyline is inspired. And honestly, I got choked up more than once. My eyes actually filled up! You are single-handedly responsible for making me a sentimental mess. And the best thing? All the characters and the plot-line falls perfectly in place with the actual story (in the future it'll be A/U, of course). Which is, in itself, a great accomplishment. Arnav (my Arnie boy) is heartbroken. And you portrayed that perfectly. I love the fact that you understood that his strict code of "Justice", which is so tough it sometimes borders on cruelty, applies to him too. I have a feeling he won't forgive himself easily, not by a long shot, for what he's done to Khushi. And your change in Khushi's Aukat? Honey, let me give you a hug. All of us have wanted that so badly, for ever so long. Finally, the Dukhi people are speaking up. Did I mention I love the Khushi-As-A-Princess idea? It fits like a glove. And Khushi's inability to watch him in pain yet her staying away from him in a childish (kinda) fit of indignation is so... Khushi. I can't wait for the next part. I'm loving the Nawab. His story is heart-breaking. I'm a sucker for love-stories with tragic ends, even though I don't read them 'cause they disturb my precarious emotional balance (needless to say, you've sent it sky-rocketing). "Love Conquers All"... I'll stick with you through thick and thin just because of this statement.
So Mary, did I mention I love "My Avenging Angel? Let me spell it out again... I LOVE IT. I'll be waiting for Khushi/Darya and Arnav's story. I've always loved them, but this SS has made me fall in love with them just that much more. Seriously... I fell off my chair when they kissed here, just like when they kissed a long time back (when the grass was greener, when the sky was bluer...you get my drift!) in the show. What more could you want? This truly is your best work yet. Love ya Mary.
-MC ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: CoffeeMoCha

Woohooo! A North and South Fan!!!!!!!!!! Mary, darlin', they don't make 'em like Richard Armitage anymore, more's the pity 😆. I remember I saw all four episodes in one night. I was never the same. Margaret Hale and John Thornton (John...*swoons*) joined my List Of Legendary Characters Who Totally Should Have Been Real.😍 They were...Are... EPIC! Did you know BBC network didn't expect North & South to be a success at all (it was apparently supposed to be just a tax fluke to lower the tax bracket of the network), but when it launched such an overwhelming number of people watched and loved it that their network websites broke down because of the sheer number of phonecalls and North &South fans joining and commenting? 🤓 And Richard Armitage became a Legend (how many people can manage to look hot in sideburns and stiff collars?). ⭐️Sorry about the rant. Really, really sorry, but then again, you shouldn't have said the words 'John' and 'Thornton' 😆.

Are you still with me, Mary? Good. Because I have a LOT to tell you.
I haven't commented in a Looong While 'cause of my Finals, and let me tell you, they were a pain in the a**... ahem, neck. But I'm here now! Aaand...I LOVE IT. Seriously, I read all the parts in one go and I have this to say... THIS SS ROCKS!!!!!! "My Avenging Angel" is one of the best creative works I've read here. Your storyline is inspired. And honestly, I got choked up more than once. My eyes actually filled up! You are single-handedly responsible for making me a sentimental mess. And the best thing? All the characters and the plot-line falls perfectly in place with the actual story (in the future it'll be A/U, of course). Which is, in itself, a great accomplishment. Arnav (my Arnie boy) is heartbroken. And you portrayed that perfectly. I love the fact that you understood that his strict code of "Justice", which is so tough it sometimes borders on cruelty, applies to him too. I have a feeling he won't forgive himself easily, not by a long shot, for what he's done to Khushi. And your change in Khushi's Aukat? Honey, let me give you a hug. All of us have wanted that so badly, for ever so long. Finally, the Dukhi people are speaking up. Did I mention I love the Khushi-As-A-Princess idea? It fits like a glove. And Khushi's inability to watch him in pain yet her staying away from him in a childish (kinda) fit of indignation is so... Khushi. I can't wait for the next part. I'm loving the Nawab. His story is heart-breaking. I'm a sucker for love-stories with tragic ends, even though I don't read them 'cause they disturb my precarious emotional balance (needless to say, you've sent it sky-rocketing). "Love Conquers All"... I'll stick with you through thick and thin just because of this statement.
So Mary, did I mention I love "My Avenging Angel? Let me spell it out again... I LOVE IT. I'll be waiting for Khushi/Darya and Arnav's story. I've always loved them, but this SS has made me fall in love with them just that much more. Seriously... I fell off my chair when they kissed here, just like when they kissed a long time back (when the grass was greener, when the sky was bluer...you get my drift!) in the show. What more could you want? This truly is your best work yet. Love ya Mary.
-MC ❤️




Thank you so much MC! No, you cannot talk about North and South and bore me. I know just about everything there is to know about that show. I am so obsessed lol. Richard really is a sweetie. In my opinion, he is the ultimate actor and such a humble man. Really amazing.

Thank you so much for your comment on my SS. I live for this really. I am so touched that you found that the kiss worked. I don't really write romantic details too often so hitting the note does not come easy. You will see that in my other writings too, I opt more for the suggestive. I was really looking forward to your opinion on the SS and now I have it. Thank you! Stay tuned!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww that was so emotional to hear bout chachu
loved it
tanks fr the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
come on mary dont be hard on arnav poor soul failing miserably everytime either of controlling emotions or regret relieve him and come on khushi act wisely and make him realise his love
loved chachu very sweet i too had doubt upon this
beautiful cont soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Poor Arnav 😭 Awesome update sweetie...hoping for Arnav and Khushi to be together in the next update. 🥳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part dear...moment Khushi and arnav shared was fab and so beautiful...nawab is so sweet and understanding!!!loved it dear!!!!pls update soon,thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing SS
loved part 6
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was a great chapter...great that they stil love each other so much, after all they are soulmates, now they just need to realise it!!!

Many thanks for PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww Her Chachu truly loved Arnav's mom..😔
da parking lot part was really intense...da way Arnav held back his emotions..totally loved it..❤️
Whoaaa cnt w8 4 Anji n Nawab's plan..😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh it was lovely...cnt believe their suffreing...feel sorry for arnav...thnx 4da pm dear

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