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sukanya

@sukanyaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

pria...inna chotu sa update... par jo v ho jaisa v ho...awesome hai...

i guess this part was really needed to take the story ahead to the next stage...

and as alwaz like all ur updates...luvd dis one too a lot...nice way of writing and wonderful selection of song...luvd every bit of it...

nw come up wid the nxt update jaldi se...

n luv ya dher saara fr alwaz coming up wid such superb updates...

waise updates k bina v luv u dher saara...

Edited by sukanyaa - 13 years ago

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Jeeya_Angel

@Jeeya_Angel

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Though it was short update but it was so heart touching

In ur last update u described how shakti was sad and in this one u showed us how Amar is in deep pain. My heart is heavy right now. Can't see my ArSha like that.

Now i really wanna know what happened that night. What did Amar ask her to do which made them break away from each other? The Suspense is killing me..

I just hope that the D3 gang's plan works out and bring ArSha together.

Keep on writing dear.

Edited by Arsha-4-Ever - 13 years ago

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

its tooo short priya...u never wrote soo short...bt i cn understand so dis tym maaf kia 😃

bt dis tym to u made me cry 😭 😭 😭...y r u doing dis gurl????
i cn imagine kunwar infront of me while reading n can feel 4m which state kunwar n shakti going through 😭...i want ARSHA untied again...i cn't see dem lyk dis...it hurts 😔

bt priya its too awsummm...i jst love da update ❤️...feeling of kunwar beautifuly describe...n yeah plsss gang to sumthng...LOVE UUU PRIYA 4 such amazing update...bt nxt tym we want long update n wo b jaldi... 😊

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Luvd it...beautifully described amar's situation...n luvd 2 see d whole gang worried fr arsha...n wen will u reveal wat happend between arsha 3 mnths ago...
All n all a beautiful chpter...😊

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

i forgot to mention.

the way u described the feelings of amar esp. when he was remembering shakti was awesome. loved it.

it was so beautiful. plus every1 coming together to bring them together was touching

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21Neha21

@21Neha21

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

first of all congratulations for d second thread..

n now coming to d update..its amazing pria..

how can u say dat dis is d worst chapter...

i loved it..u have described kunwar's pain so wel..i had tears in my eyes..

but den i felt good at d way dere friends r planning to make dem meet again..

i m eagerly waiting for dem to be together again..

plz update soon..

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prrk86

@prrk86

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

wow so friends gonna unite them awesome

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Winz

@Winz

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Hey Pria...great to finally read ur update & as usual loved it...ur awesome dear

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binx-D3

@binx-D3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Anks is on a roll commenting first on every1's updates! Pria it was just too fab!! Can't wait to see what these guys do! Loved the archie shaki angle! Love how the anger the pain the betrayal all seems so real when u write!! Too awesome pria! Kudos!
Oh and congo on the second thread! Eeepp! *dancing with hands in the air* :P