ArSha FF~Start Of Something Beautiful~Thread2~5/30

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lovekriyaansh

@lovekriyaansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

yayyy at last tune update kar hi diya... Seriously Priya..teri bhoot se jyada achcha tu likhti hain... I really loved how you have turned this story... whatever you have written for him was brillaint.. you have beautifully written his point of view... and the song selection.. this is my fav song.. and was also thinking of using it in my ff but it didnt match for my situation.. bt here it was apt... I just loved the update... Teri bhoot ko bol dena ab woh wapas nahi bhi aaye tho bhi chalega.. you can write without your bhoot samajhi... Love you Priya...

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Palakh Aggarwal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

brilliant job awsum update agla part jadii update and pm me

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chetna

@crazysky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

worst no way its awesome...
i love all of them

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medha

@medha16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

nice...they r such a close knit group...love theiir frndship but i feel really bad at d situation arsha r stuck up in...continue soon

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Pria, finalyl u updated..like after so long..d part was so short..!

i mean u updated after such a long time so i think we deserved a longer one with sumthing rily being the highlight..d part was well penned..Amar as expected is hurt and rily upset..ArSha miss each other, can't stay away from each other..den y don't dey just confront..? ok, the party would bring them closer..dats what we hope, bt i would never want the party to lead to more misunderstandings..! plzz sort this out soon..and give a new twist to the story as u had committed before..update the next part asap!

thnx fr d pm..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: aria009hera
yaaayyy!! dhinka chika!! *dances around like crazy for being the first to comment*

okay.. so now coming onto the serious stuff!! i loved dis chapter.. i loved d song selection for *the one who shall not be named* 😉😉 it was perfect!! and i loved how u described all the anguish *the one who shall not be named* is feeling...

and den i loved how much the gang is worried about them both.. u know i have always admired d way u have written shaks and archie ka relationship in dis FF.. makes me go awww every tym.. and how shaks leaving affected even him.. awesome job wid dis one pria!! i cant wait for sam's birthday party now!!! yaaayyy!!!

and in d end.. as always.. I LOVE YOU!!!! 🤗🤗

lo anki apna thumka lagana shuru kardi 😉

OMG im in love with tht song...at first i didnt want to use it for "the one that shall not be named" because i didnt want to ruin the song but it was so apt for the situation!

and i always admired archie and shaks frendship in real life...in bts when they showed shaks with any 'dazzler' she seemed most at ease with sneha, archie and sam so i emphasized tht frendship in my writing cuz they all are sooo cute!

LOVE YOU TOO ANKS 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha
True Pria,, it was the shortest update u have ever written... but still, at least u updated🤗
Poor Amar... feeling so heart broken of thinking his situation...💔
poor Shaks... she's going through all this alone...😔
how more do u want to torture us... just tell us what happened in the night na...🤔
as u said, the next update should be faster😳

if i tell u guys so soon then it will ruin the suspence, na? and then u guys will geet bored with the FF 🥱

so let me keep u guys guessing for a while 😉

and thanks asha! will update soon!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: lovely7010
finally u updated...its awesome n i luved the song...sam's plan is amazing eagerly waiting for the next part update soon

thank you! 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: luv_arsha
it was awesome part pria ...brilliantly written
it was very toucj=hing and emotional part...the pain, emotions,love can be felt from the words you have written
it was awesome part...loved it very much
and continue soon waiting eagerly for the next part

thank you so much 😃 will update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha
Wow..atlast plan has come up for deir meet...
Pls show some kriyaansh scenes with love n anger mixed..
It will b really gud..

thank you 😊, btw its arsha! kriyansh hote toh frends ko thori na pata hota..!