ArSha FF~Start Of Something Beautiful~Thread2~5/30 - Page 3

aww...!!! every part makes me say dat is was d best of all..! lol..now what should i say..a mejical part once again from ur side Pria..!

u r a rily gud writer..! i loved dis part a lot..and hated Charlie like anything she is so chipku! arrgh! i hope she doesn't create any differences b/w ArSha! i loved ArSha so much..dey r like so cute..though we couldn't c much of dem together but ur ff has rily brought out...hw it would have been if d 2 of dem would have been together...Shakti is drunk she behaves so cutely when she isn't in her senses and how Amar was so protective for her..truly adorable! :) n i actually got rily scared to find Ronit eyeing Shakti! huh! dat evil monster..! and kunwar takes her home..aww..rily cute...waiting to c what happens next!

short..but a complete hilarious package! i was laughing through d entire part..lol..Shakti was acting so weird..jumping off here and there n just singing n dancing around..lol..i wish i could actually c her once lyk dis in rily life..true who thought d shy n simple Shakti could actually be so hyper..and i rily loved when Dharmesh and Kunwar were running after her but let her have her own way till she loses all her energy.. :)

gr8 part!

shakti had put on kunwar's clothes..true d feeling is sumthing rily diff when a gf wears her bf's clothes...so cute!

"What's wrong sweetheart? Is the headache bothering you too much?" he questioned franticly. (so damn cute!)

"Just stay with me forever okay?" he said. A huge smile automatically spread across her face. "Forever" she promised.

(dis was truly amazing! so adorable! )

Dharmesh chuckled "Yup. You both are definitly made for each other" he remarked before leaving. (lol! i loved his remark!)

nice update, not one of ur finest works though..coz i have great expectations from u now..but well penned! a romance b/w ArSha is at its peak! mind blowing! d passion is so aww..! can't find any gud word to fit in here..kunwar will be i Goa to shoot fr d3 and Shakti will join him soon..nice..i hope u r writing dis ff not on d basis of d fact dat now Shakti has left d3 n will be off to NY, after all its a ff, a reflection of our imagination n what we desire to c..

wow! another fascinating update! i rily loved it when Kunwar actually felt he was dreaming when Shakti came in the vanity van..aww..he is too cute when sounding so crazy..! A cute lil part..worth reading..gud job Pria and there is sum or the other special dialogue i point to so fr dis part...i rily adore dis one--

"I'm not sharing guys. She's all mine"

plz post d next chap asap..waiting eagrly..

👏 😊 On success and New Thread of 🥳

and continue soon