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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Sadie101
Priya Priya Priya...
oh what shud i say... this what i am doing currently so that i can give a really good comment...i have one window opened with part two of ur OS, my phone has part 1 on the screen...
For the first part ❤️ it as always...
Yes Arnav "ji" it will take u a while to get over the bhang effect...we all are still lighted head...
oh terrence again...omg my heart is beating what is he going to see this time???

As for part two...
Love the way u write...
i could feel arnav's hesitation, and he closed his eye for a moment 👏
LOL at her duppatta flying (remembering yesterday's article 😆 thats how we like it!)
From the point Arnav said "Khushi" man i was sucked into the scene...
u brought me to tears!!
the ending was sad!! but was too good yaar!

👏👏👏👏

u r a ⭐️
🤗

i am not looking forward to tomorrow's episode...after such intense scenes who wants to see snakewa creating havoc...but to be honest you can't live with snakewa n u can't live without him, i am kinda happy he knows the truth now the story will move on full force (fingers crossed)
but will be waiting for ur crooner as always 😊

thnxxx swthrt...thanxx for loving it 😊😊😊

yup I knw after such a charming last week...its difficult to go bck to the normal drama...even am lil sad for tht...but ya that snake wa is nw going to get them in the same room...so thanx to the Cupid we might get sm more love scenes...fingers crossed for the MU to get clear soon...

luv again for liking the OS 🤗

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: molten_lava
you know when Khushi said "Always is for six months" even I had this strange lumpy feeling in my throat.
It was so beautiful. I loved it!😃

thnxxx sooo much dear...😊😊😊

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: bablio09
good one.. and liked it all the more because it was not shyam up there ( i thought my request is taken care of)

i would suggest you continue this line of story, where they talk to each other again and the MU gets cleared not all of it just Arnav trying to put 2 and 2 together that Khushi is innocent.

thnxx darlingg...😊 no way was I going to get that creep on the Terrace...he better stays wid his wife...

I have already done one OS on MU clearing...😊

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Vampire.wingz
Woah !! What a coincidence ,even I was listening to Desert Rose By Sting !! don't know who's the artist in Your Case !! 😆 Anyway Coming to The OS !! Lovely One Dear !! nicely penned down !! The Suspense is too Much to Handle !! Don't know What made his heart skip a Beat !! My 6th sense Tells me somewhere its not Shyam this Time !! Correct me if I am wrong ! 😉

😆P.s - Still murmuring ...I dream of rain
I lift my gaze to empty skies above
I close my eyes
This rare perfume is the sweet intoxication of her love...

Serious co-incidence...lol 😆😆

thanxx dear...hope u love the 2nd part too...well ur 6th sense was correct 😉😉😉

and I love those words - This rare perfume is the sweet intoxication of her love

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ipkknd_vino

@ipkknd_vino

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

I had tears in my eyes reading your os 😭 realy touching i was hoping for more 😔 but no u decided otherwise .. sometime i thing u r evil when you do this lol ...
But thank u for this treat dear 😃

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amisuv

@amisuv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Priya, thanks fr giving a whole new dimension to the terrace sequence. The dialogues brought a lump to my throat, specially

Khushi : Arnav ji...what if I get lost like those stars above...I go to amma-babuji...will it matter then...will you come searching for me...

I wish the moment never ended. The perfect convo after the uninhibited flow of emotions btwn the two on Holi day. The way u higlighted the complexties that still exist btwn the two, it surely creates havoc with my senses☺️

Thanks fr the wonderful VM, perfect Sunday dose 😊 Such beautiful lyrics, and the perfect parting shot.

And fr this match...Frankly I hv no hopes though they r playing well. Dekhte hain 😕

So the countdown to Monday continues. The coming week is crucial as it leads to the eventual clearing of the MU. Just hv to bear with more of Shyam in the coming days 😡

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

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OH SHITTT PRIYAAA!!!!!! The Iris song!!! Ive been listening to it for a couple of days nowww!!!!!!!

LOVED THE OS!!!! I read it today morning, and I was like...whaaa, you can't stop there like that!! You HAVE to continue! The end was heartbreaking, but I did enjoy reading it... do continue if possible!!

Edited by HopelessCase - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

want it unfair 🤔 of course it was 😡😆
pls continue na di 🤗 make him speak.. seems like LM is going to take ages to make Arnav speak everything he has in his heart so you should do this 😳😆
it was amazing..i loved the VM too 🤗
but yes i feel ki your heart will melt and you will give another part 😳😛