OS : Desert Roses : VM ...Completed Pg 6 - Page 7

And I don't want the world to see me, coz I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken, I just want you to know who I am..

awesome lyrics!!! love love love this song!! and the VM too!!! great scene selection Debu to suit the lyrics!! especially that part, you bleed just to know that you are alive!!

this update, a great continuation this is indeed!!! loved how his memory got replaced with this new one!!! .. today she was standing alone.. embracing his present.. ahh.. wow!! 😍

now will you laugh at me if i said, i had tears in my eyes imagining the scene when khushi says what if she becomes one of the stars, would arnav come looking for her!! oh dear god!!! what would arnav do then!!! he wont be able to survive Debu if something happens to khushi!!! 😭 my eyes are welling up again!!! why are we so attached to this ya!!!

A very emotional one this is Debu!! and it can be left without continuation!! this sounds perfect for a short story!!! 😳

superb,fantastic awesome..one of my fav songs..bombastic vm di!

poor khushi. i hope this happens. awww

I always say that you know the EQ level of ARSHI😳 The disappointment part is it was really short, I know you are going to control your addiction towards dis show in IF.. its okey, even I have to control my visit rate coz right now I am skipping my research work and spending time over here
Di.. you got the talent to write at its top level quality.. so do write more make more VM make more OS..
and plz dont make any control over starting threads... bcoz they all are pretty good.
But be with yourself and your life is important.

Originally posted by: shwetachauhan

And I don't want the world to see me, coz I don't think that they'd understand
When everything's made to be broken, I just want you to know who I am..

awesome lyrics!!! love love love this song!! and the VM too!!! great scene selection Debu to suit the lyrics!! especially that part, you bleed just to know that you are alive!!

this update, a great continuation this is indeed!!! loved how his memory got replaced with this new one!!! .. today she was standing alone.. embracing his present.. ahh.. wow!! 😍

now will you laugh at me if i said, i had tears in my eyes imagining the scene when khushi says what if she becomes one of the stars, would arnav come looking for her!! oh dear god!!! what would arnav do then!!! he wont be able to survive Debu if something happens to khushi!!! 😭 my eyes are welling up again!!! why are we so attached to this ya!!!

A very emotional one this is Debu!! and it can be left without continuation!! this sounds perfect for a short story!!! 😳

Originally posted by: The-kiddo

I always say that you know the EQ level of ARSHI😳 The disappointment part is it was really short, I know you are going to control your addiction towards dis show in IF.. its okey, even I have to control my visit rate coz right now I am skipping my research work and spending time over here
Di.. you got the talent to write at its top level quality.. so do write more make more VM make more OS..
and plz dont make any control over starting threads... bcoz they all are pretty good.
But be with yourself and your life is important.

Originally posted by: spoorthi

awesome update priya di👏👏
loved the os and the vm
os was really emotional
do continue,impatiently waiting for ur next part of ur os ,update soon

thanks for the pm

superb vm and awesome update👏