VirMaan FF:Finding Mr. Destiny|Finale updtd PG 22 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start😊
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Finding Mr. Destiny


Chapter 1

"Maanvi" he mumbled as he twisted and turned a bit in his chair in the luxurious business class of plane. His eyes opened automatically and stared on the person seated next to him, staring at him as if confused.

"sir" he exclaimed the person next to him, "are you all right?" he then asked him gently with utmost friendliness.

"am perfectly alright Steve." He answered with a slight smile and then excused himself for loo.

He checked him self thoroughly; 'why was he getting unusual response and staring' he thought, inspecting him self. 'What has changed? These people have suddenly started liking me' my family started taking interest of my needs, Swamini bua's temperament changed drastically for me. Everyone started respecting me.' It was too much for him. Al these facts actually looked like a dream come true. He had completely come over the part of his life related to Maya. Now he never remembered it. It was mere stupidest part of his life. Though Maya wanted to come to him again but he rejected it. 'What has changed? What is it? Or have I CHANGED!'

He let go the thought. It disturbed him. It reminded him of his gratitude towards her which he never showed.

That little cliff meeting suddenly changed his outlook. He was happy but surprised. What if she hadn't come at the right time? He would surely have been in heaven or on bed with whole plaster thing on him!

He didn't even said a 'Thank-you' to her, did she even needed it?' he thought.

After all it was just a help in disguise, he covered his gratitude.

But the main question is 'after so many years why was he suddenly thinking about her? He didn't even know anything about her except her musical name. Who was she? An angel indeed. From where had she come? From his dreams may be. What if she didn't even remember him? Yes that was a possibility but it was usual. Who would remember just a meeting that too after so many years?' Yet the thought irked him somewhere.

He splashed water on his eyes and dried face with a puffy towel then exited the bathroom.

It was already time for plane to land.

'Rishikesh!' After full five years he was again here, to finalize a land for constructing his dream office. But was this only reason? He again thought. 'Why of all beautiful places he wanted to have his office here?

"Sir, this way" Prakash kulkarni his manager guided him and Steve towards the car.

As they moved out of the airport a fresh breeze surrounded him, it seemed the gush of wind recognized him. Everything looked the same. Just as before. Nothing ,much changed, but just the palm tree was now big and had become the full tree. The Dada's tea shop was now a restaurant with same name and the road was reconstructed. Nothing much really changed. Everything was recognizable. The old man still sat on the bench of the tea shop counting notes, only then he was little lean but now had a big belly. A smile curved his lips. He looked ravishingly handsome and hot as fire.

Steve suddenly looked at him in astonishment and then suddenly remarked with a smile, "You should smile often VV. It suits you."

Viraat stiffened a bit at his remark but then loosened, 'this was not a place for carrying angry looks and making atmosphere gloomy' he thought. 'This was place of Maanvi' he smiled at the thought silently, without anyone noticing it.

He stood near the car when a bunch of journalists encircled him and bombarded him with lots of questions.

"sir why you decided to open the main office here when you don't have any branch here?"

"What are your next plans after reconstructing your self in Malaysia?"

"We hear about the sparks of your marriage. Who is the lucky girl?"

"When are you getting married?"

"Being most eligible bachelor- what do you think of your dream girl would be like?"

He ignored. Just IGNORED. And silently sat into the car which zoomed in to the peaceful Rishikesh.

'Where she would be?' would she be here? Had she married?' he didn't know why he was pondering over these not so important questions.

He had decided a long ago that he would not again indulge himself in any girl's thoughts after that awful episode with Maya. But this girl Maanvi wasn't just ready to leave his mind.

But the idea of her getting married sent horror vibes down his spinal cord. A pang of jealousy and anger of her being touched by someone hit his heart fiercely.

Why? The reason he did not know. While he was thinking about her the whole time when the car came to sudden halt making him come out of his fantasy world.

Unknowingly his eyes wandered around the place. It was due to traffic signal that they had to stp the car. The traffic was much and he got irritated by the noise of the content blowing horns.

"It would take sometime sir" Prakash kulkarni said apologetically.

"No it's ok", he said and looked out. Suddenly his eyes caught something. He jumped out of the car and asked Steve and Prakash to move on, that he was acquainted with the place and would be their t the site in sometime.

He came to the same place where he met that strange girl named Maanvi. The same cliff. But it is no more isolated now. Five years have changed everything. Probably she would also have changed. She would be 24 now. And he was then 24. Five years ago. What an adventurous day it was and what a silly mistake he was going to commit, suicide! If only she would not have been there to stop him.


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okay guys that's it for now.

will update next part soon.

pls comment and press like button.

Love.Priya

Edited by Fantasies - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I loved it! the words the everything! it's magical!
truly I loved it! Its got me glued it. & PM me.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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priya its great dear. eagerly waiting for next part and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome
waiting for virmaan's second meeting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow priya your writing is amazing i always read ur posts and i am left with my mouth open lol plz update soon n pm me cant wait for virman to meet again...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey priya vry excitng story yaar jst loved it...
Cntinue soon my swetty...
Egerly waitng... Thanx fr d pm n yes pm me wen u do nxt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely paert dear loved it eawaiting for nrxt part.
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M ur fan... How wonderfully u r expressing thngs... Love dat...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it...plz continue soon...and pm me...

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