VirMaan FF:Finding Mr. Destiny|Finale updtd PG 22

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FF



(Prologue)




She- always indulged in her dear fantasies of her Prince charming, failed to see what was happening in and out the house and her family.

A fantasy which she deep in her heart knew would surely come true. Not because any fortune teller ever told her but it was her intuition and her dream as well. She wanted something good from her life and if it meant to live in dreams, she was, well, ready for it. As she always got defeat in love-sphere of life so she built one of her.

She always was different from other girls, though like other girls she also had a dream of being loved but she was way too different to see things in her own way.



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He never got what he desired. Be it his dream to become a musician, his love-life or his position in family- everything was in confusion. His passion, his desire and his love everything betrayed him, not falling in place. He had nothing left of his life and probably wanted to die as desperately as a die man wants a gush of air to live. He had no one to share his feelings his thoughts his anxiety. There was no one to console him. Not a single sole.




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Leaning towards the railing of the cliff, he at-last decided that he should die. Nothing left. His So-called family not ready to accept him as he was. Always trying to show him down in front of everyone- be it his dear brother Viren or his friends. He was not ashamed as he had done nothing wrong. Music was his passion, Maya his love and making position in his family and world his desire but none happened and his only hope, the support of his family was also negligent.



A drop of tear escaped from his eye while looking down at his forthcoming death. After all there was not one reason for him to live.



He took his last breath and silently prayed for his family and especially his sole support his mother. And just inclined him self , when...



"what are you doing? committing suicide!!!" she said fearfully astonished.



He turned abruptly to see the intruder in confusion. he looked at her up and down and then turned away from her. Then started looking for something which made her confused. She looked at him as if he were a mad man.



Then looked at where he got his eyes fixed. A big board which read : Suicide Point.



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Okay so that's it for now.
do tell me how you found it!
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INDEX

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Priya u r an amazing writer yaar .u wrote it beautifully.
I loved the concept . Nice start.
Waiting to see what happeens next so update soon.

Yippi me first!!!! * dhinka chika dhinka chika*
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wow its fantabulous. really good dear continue soon

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wow...the start was just perfect
pl pm me when u update
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fantastic dear pm me when you continue
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hmmm i love to read it

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ooo priya u n ur clifhangers loool but a really good start and do pm me the next update i wonder what will happen...
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Wow gr8 concept... Cntinue soon...!!
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ohh guys cn u all leave few wrds fr me lols
bt u know wat my swety all wrds r small infrnt yr stry...
it was jst ful2 fantasticl beby...
loved yr start n vry swet n wish 2 read soon pm me wen u do nxt part hmmm excitedly waitng dear...
cntinue soon...

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