VirMaan FF:Finding Mr. Destiny|Finale updtd PG 22 - Page 5

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Priya, I'm speechless gal... Love it wouldn't justify it, I was totally swept off with your FF. Virat established himself in Malaysia... can't help wishing it will be true coz that is where I m from😉

Can't wait for the next update, hopefully his yearning for his gal will be fulfilled soon.

Btw so sorry for reading this update so late

luved it a lottt

i loved it

Okay i know this update may be you all will find lame and corny. but it couldn't come out the way i actually wanted it to be. but anyways... Njoy the crap. Next part will be really interesting. i assure u all...

Chapter 2

Betrayed, battered and broken; she stood in a huge house. An empty house!

Why it happened with her? Why of all people? It wasn't that she wanted her curse to be transferred to anyone else. Why would she? She always was a girl who thought good of others. Who would do anything to help. Then why god didn't have mercy on her?

A sole tear escaped from her eyes.

She was lost in deep thought and her eyes were fixed somewhere very far. She didn't seem to realize when day came and went and night arrived. Arrived to never leave her.

She didn't remember anything but the night when she returned home after meeting the boy named Viraat. She just couldn't forget that fateful night and what happened after she returned. And how could she? It was the night which had ability to shake her being, her soul and completely changed her beautiful and carefree life to a living nightmare!

Flashback!

Biji, chachu, chachi, dabbu and her Jeevika di all were outside the big haveli, the Chaudhary haveli. Crying, requesting on their knees and joining hands before selfish Thakur to let them live there. That they will return the money. But Bachhu Thakur was no where listening to them. He was standing an twisting his big mustache and smiling at their pleadings. Like he had no effect of there tears.

Maanvi couldn't hold back and hugged her Biji tightly sitting beside her, "what happened? Why are you all out? What happened Jeevika di? She asked in fright.

"Why are you asking them? Who are they to answer? I'll tell you." Intervened Thakur

"You stay out this beta. Got to Sarita's house and rest. You are still weak." Biji said trying to avoid her questions.

"What are you saying Biji? Why you want me to go?" she asked Biji astonished by her absurd request.

"Arre behanji, why are you hiding Maanvi all these things? She should know." Thakur said with a cheeky smile.

"What are you hiding from me Biji? And why?" she again asked with fear stricken voice.

"They had taken money from me- 2 lakhs and mortgaged this house on condition that if they would not be able to return my money with interest in six months, then this haveli will be mine. And they would get out of the house on the same day I'll step in." he again twisted his big mustache and smiled again and said, "And they couldn't return the money so according to the bond, this haveli belongs to me!"

Saying this Thakur went inside the haveli with his four sons and other goons.

The Chaudhary's still stared at him going in- while sitting on the pavement of haveli.

"Why did you took loan from this Thakur? Why did you take loan at all? You know he doesn't leave any borrower. Why did you mortgage our house? Why Biji?" Maanvi asked in between he hiccups.

"It was for you, just for you that she took the loan" escaped from dabbu's sinful mouth.

"Dabbu" exclaimed Biji in anger. While others got tensed for Maanvi.

Maanvi's eyes widened in fear.

"What?" Was what she could utter.

"Why?" escaped from her shivering mouth. "Why for me?" she asked in hushed tone.

"Biji let me tell her. She should know." Dabbu insisted looking at the secret expression on Biji's face which clearly stated him to 'shut up'

"what dabbu? Tell me." She again asked looking from dabbu to Biji and then again to dabbu.

"Remember – seven months ago you had fever and all those allergies and you couldn't be cured, so we took you to Delhi. Well the bill of the treatment that came as a shock was of 4.5 lakhs. We just had 2.5 lakhs in cash and so they took loan as we needed to pay cash as soon as possible. And only Bachhu Thakur agreed to give us the loan at that critical time." Dabbu concluded.

"What?" she stood shell shocked. 4.5 lakhs wasted on me?" she lost the power to think. She still remembered that Biji and everyone ignored buying new cloths for Diwali but only for children the new clothes were bought.

She felt guilty. They all were in tension and she didn't even once could notice that.

"Please forgive me Biji… its just because of me that you all are seeing this day. I am cause of it. I am sorry for ruining everything." She cried. The guiltiness took over and she ran from there only to collide with a man of her utter hatred, Pranav.

Pranav- the son of MLA Ramnath. He was well known for his illegitimate relations with several girls. He was a complete nerd of Rishikesh. And now he was behind his new toy Maanvi. He was troubling her from many days regarding the same. Maanvi was much pissed with him. She would have killed him if only she could.

"What happened Biji? Why are you all are out of the house?" Pranav asked in honey quoted voice.

Biji didn't once look at him. His character and doings were not hidden from anyone and he was a thing of utter hatredness in everyone's eyes. Nobody except his own gang liked him.

Biji, Maanvi and everyone moved out towards the road, when she heard Pranav saying, "perhaps I can help.", but ignoring which she continued to follow her family.

Guilt continued overpowering her senses.

They came to Sarita's house, which she willingly offered to them. Sarita was Biji's childhood friend. She made all the arrangements for there stay.

But there house was gone and this fact couldn't reduce Maanvi's tension. She had to some how bring back the lost prestige of her family.

She could bear anything on her but couldn't see her family and especially her Biji and her di in this position. And after knowing that it was she who was behind this condition.

The night arrived, she needed help. But who could help her. 'Perhaps I can help." The words ringing in her mind. "Pranav." Escaped from her lips. He was the son of MLA. He could do anything. But then hatred took over. How could she ask for help from that person she actually hated from whole of her heart. But then her eyes got fixed on her Biji and hr whole family. She has to do something. For her family she could die. She was determined. Had made her mind.

She quickly got up from her bed. Threw a last glance over her family.

"Everything will be alright, I'll bring everything in line." She promised wiping her tears.

She then ran, only to stop before Ramnath haveli. She knocked, and was taken in. Pranav was informed. He came running down, couldn't believe hi dream coming true so soon.

"Maanvi", he asked in astonishment.

"P..Pranav", she said panting. "mera ghar… mera ghar…" she just couldn't say anything. Her throat got sore due to constant crying.

"Calm down Maanvi." He said and offered her glass of water and seat.

She took two sips hurriedly.

"I want my house back. Please help me. You said you can help. Please… I want my house ….." She cried.

"I'll help you." He said assuring. "But what I am going to get in return." He asked point blank.

"Anything!" Maanvi looked determined.

Yes she could do anything for her family. ANYTHING.

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Morning.

Biji and other family members were tensed; they didn't know where to go. After all they could not stay all the time at Sarita's house. She was too kind to give them shelter for once. They could not just remain like a burden to her. They had their other relatives far at other cities.

Biji called for Maanvi, but she was no where to be found. Dabbu had already went to Ganga ghat where she used to go to find solace. While they were sitting and discussing the Problem in the lawn which was connected with the main door, they saw a familiar figure approaching them. Their eyes widened to see their Mannu married and that two with that cheap man! Pranav. They got up astonished.

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Flashback ends.

What has become of her life? She is not she actually was. Bubbly, carefree girl. That Maanvi has already vanished and mingled in the thin air. The harsh reality killed her. She is just a bed mate of a ruthless man, who comes drunk and assaults her every night. Would she ever become what she was? Will she ever get her share of happiness? The answer she could calculate was a NO.

Her thoughts were disturbed by the noise made by the door, which told her- he had returned. Her husband. One more night of struggle ahead, she thought. Five years passed, and not a single night she could sleep. It wouldn't be wrong to say she was wide awake from the day her family abandoned her. Except her sorrow sharer, friend, sister- Jeevika.

If only Jeevika wouldn't be there, she would have left this world long ago. People called her a fighter, but now she had broken within. But only for Jeevika she had attained courage to live.

Her thoughts were disturbed when her husband entered the room.

He was not drunk today, and thus in a good mood. His habit of involving with other girls had immensely increased with years passed.

His being drunk was bad, he would beat her- but his being non- drunk was dangerous. Again she had to go through the same.

He again forced himself on her.

She hated being touched by him. It was not that she didn't love him but it was because she hated him.

She sat up seeing him fast asleep and slowly dressed herself and sneaked out of the house.

She again came to the cliff- the nth time. It was place where she found solace from past five years. She would fee secure here. Like no harm could touch her. She didn't know what was with this place that she got so much intimidated with it. She could remain here all her life. She would forget all her sorrows once she was there.

It was not that it was in anyway related to the small meeting with a stranger. But there was certain connection that she still beholds her past memories. Some thread still bound her with him.

She always had some slight hope to see him at the same spot. She wanted to meet him, didn't know why. She knew that she could only share her problems with him. Like He had the power to console her.

She looked at her bruises. A sob escaped from her lips. And trail of tears went down her swelled cheek to down her neck which had deep teeth marks. He called them love bites but she- animality.

Love and Pranav didn't go in same line.

She wiped her tears, but tears didn't stop. And sobs could clearly be herd. It was 2:00 A.M. when she heard a voice to which she stiffened.

"Ma'am, are you alight?"

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