*Miley Na Milein Hum* S-K fan fic - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 ..haha sahi hai sararaj productions 😉 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 bahut ache....interesting story....cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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THanks for liking it Ridhimma..bas aise hee parthe rehna aur enjoy karte rehna..I will post it very soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
sara a very good story.. rishi is always the cool dude.. cg & veena are sweet together... 👏 but please introduce our hero soon.. me waiting for the hero's entry.... 😃 plz continue soon... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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interesting sara. Par sujal kaha hai????????/
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Sara gr8 story 👏 & where is sujal plzz write soon abt him 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Haila...kiya likhti hai mammiiii....... 👏

Kasam se teri fanfic....yash-raj prod se kum nhai haii.......yash jee has a tough competitor 👏

Aur haan....Don ban gaayee hoon main....promotion ho gaayi hai meri.....kaafi deeeir see.... 😉

Mrs.Saara Eijaz Khan 😳 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Thanks for ur lovely comments yaaar!! And Saara...tu Don ban gayee...Great yaaaar...aur ab toh Eijo ki biwi bhi!! Kya bulaoon main tumhein?? Tumne mere Eijo se shaadi karlee...Lol....Rajeev bhi kisi aur ka hogayaa.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OK.....So Here I go!!
Ok…so heres the next part……or the next episode….As u saw..in the very last part , A call comes from the office…and CG rushes…
So lets see wht happened actually…


Cg was very worried…He drove the car..and was stuck in the heavy traffic…Ussey pohanchtey pohanchtey almost shaam hogayee thi…
Finally he reached the outhouse and went inside…
And wht he sees is tht darkness in everywhere…and theres no one in the outhouse..
He calls up….. "Monika..??..Are u here..? Monika?"
All of a sudden the light comes up and everyone wish him …"HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!"
Cg is surprised and felt overwhelmed!
All of the office and staff members wished him and presented him some bouquets..
Cg: Ohh…Thank U soo much…aap sab ko yaad tha mera bday?
Monika: Nahi Sir..Humein toh yaad nahi tha..lekin haan…Sujal Sir ko zaroor yaad tha…
Cg: ( feels happy) Acha..great..lekin woh hai kahan?
A voice spks up .. "Main yahan hoon Papa."
Cg turns around …and finds a person carrying a huge bouquet ( his face was hidden)
Cg: ohh…toh aap yaha hain?
Sujal: ( puts down the flowers …and hugs him)
Cg: hmm…toh yeh saaara tumhara plan tha? ( Sujal k kaan pakartey huye)
Sujal: sorry Papa…mujhe laga aap k liye ise acha surprise aur kya hosakta hai…Happy Bday! ( hugs him)
Veena: Aur Sujal k plan mein main bhi shaamil hoon…( smiles)
Cg: Ohh..to aap bhii…
Veena: Janam din bohat bohat mubarak ho aap ko…
Cg: ( hugs her) Thank U Veena!
Sujal: Papa..challein..ab cake kaat lete hain…come..
Cg: oh han..chaloo….haan lekin ek sec.
Sujal: ( looks at him suspiciously) Kya hua?
Cg: wohh… Rishi kahan hai? Woohh nahi aaya?
Sujal: Papa..wohh bhi ajayega…I'll call him…aap chaliye..Main usse phone kar k aata hoon..
Cg: Haan..theek hai..chalo Veena..( takes her with him)
Sujal goes on a side and calls Rishi…but he wasn't pickin up his cell..
Sujal: ( to himself) Rishi phone kyu nahi utha raha hai?

While Rishi knows nothing….He is enjoyin with Aman and the gurls in the Club.
Sujal calls at Aman's cell…….
Aman: ( picks it up)…Helloo? Who's there?
Sujal: Main bolraha hoon..Aman…Sujal here
Aman: ohh Sujal Bhaiyya aap..haan kahiye..? Koi kaam tha?
Sujal: Haan..kya Rishi tumharey saath hai?
Aman: Rishi?? Woohh…( looks at Rishi..who is enjoyin with the gals…) Jee haan..woh yaheen hai..Par who bz hai.. I guess….
Sujal: Hmm…acha… …Usse mera msg de dena k Main uska R n G k outhouse mein wait karaha hoon….ussey kaho k jaldi wahan ajaye..Ok…Main rakhta hoon…
Aman: Ok..bye….( goes to Rishi) Hey Rishi..!
Rishi: ( turns around) Kya hai? Kyun disturb karaha hai?
Aman: arrey baat toh sun…tere Big B ka fone tha!
Rishi: Kya? (Shocked) Big b ka?
Aman: haan…aur who tumhara outhouse mein wait karahe hain..
Rishi: arrey baap re..I have to move now..Chal Aman chaltey hain…
Aman: arrey nahi yaar…tu jaa..im here..
Rishi: nahi…Tu mere bina yahan kya karega..Obviously ..yeh larkiyan tere ko ghaas bhi nahi daalne walii…chal chalein…
Aman: Hmm…
Rishi: Abey chal naaa…..( he takes him viciously)


Here in the party…Sujal keeps on waiting for Rishi…His eyes were constantly on the main door..Still looking out for Rishi..when a gurl bumped into him!
Girl: Hiiiiiiii!!!!!!
Sujal: Oh hi…
Girl: Pehchaana?
Sujal: Nahi..sorry Maine..
Gurl: Koi baat nahii….tum mujhe bhuul saktey ho lekin Main tumhein kabhi nahi bhuul sakti…
Sujal: ( confused) Hmm…
Lalit: Sujal beta..yeh meri beti hai…Sanjana..Australia se last week hee ayee hai…
Sujal: Oh..Helloo
Sanjana: ab bhi nahi pehchaana? ( looks at him adoringly)
Sujal: ( smiles) Actually..Hum pehle kabhi miley nahi nahi..Isi liye main thora sa confuse hogaya tha…
Sanjana: koi baat nahi..lekin Main toh tumhein bachpan se jaantii hoon…
Sujal: Bachpan se? (amazed)
Sanjana: Tumhein yaad nahi hai..Hum bachpan mein ikhate khela karte the…
Sujal: Sorry..par mujhe yaad nahi…
Sanjana: Koi baat ( Sujal interrupts)
Sujal: excuse me…( he leaves…while Sanjana keeps on staring him)
Sanjana is left alone…her Dad comes up to her..
Lalit: ( sees her daughter who was constantly staring Sujal)…(Clears his throat)
Sanjana: Dad aap….
Lalit: Kya baat hai?
Sanjana: nothing Dad..Bas im too xcited too see Sujal!
Lalit: haan..kitna bara hogaya hai naa…
Sanjana: haan aur kitna handsome bhii ( says it dreamingly)
Lalit: Kya?
Sanjana: uhh…nothing…Dad…
Lalit: ( smiles and hugs her)


Rishi arrives the party along with Aman…
Aman: Hey Rishi..woh dekh..tere Dad!
Rishi: Dad kya karahe hain yahan par…Arrey Aman..Party chalrahee hai yaaar ( says it merrily)
Aman: Haan yaar….lekin kis khushi mein..?
Rishi: Mujhe kya maloom…andar ja kar chk kartey hain…
They both come inside….and everyone meets Rishi..
Rishi goes up to his Mom..
Rishi: Muma..yeh kya horaha hai? Party…kis liye?
Veena: Tum phir se bhuul gaye..Aaaj tumhare Papa ka bday hai!
Rishi: Dad ka bday..! Ohh I know ..i know..Mujhe yaad tha ..main toh bas aise hee ( Rishi aise ban raha tha jaise he knew it b4..lekin usse waqayee mein hee Dad ka bday yaad nahi rehta) Waise Mumma..Papa kahan hain? Main unhein wish toh kardoon…
Aman: Rishi..woh toh bahar heee kharey the naa…? Remember ..We saw him
Rishi: Ohh haan..chal chalein…
Everyone keeps on enjoying the party…Sujal sees a glimpse of Rishi..and heads towards him…
Aman: Rishi..tere Big b arahe hain..
Rishi: Kya ..kahan? kidher?? Kyun? Chal bhaag!
The both were goin to escape…K achanak Sujal agaya…
Sujal: Rishi….kahan jarahe ho?
Rishi: uhhh…kahin nahi Big B..bas aise hee…
Sujal: Hm..aise hee ya …?
Rishi: nahi big b…aap mujhe galat…
Sujal: acha choro…tumne Papa ko wish kiya?
Rishi: Haan kardiyaa..
Sujal: Good..Enjoy the party…( pats on Aman's shoulder)
Rishi: PHEWW…bach gaye..
Aman: Chal rishi,..Disco na sahee.,,hum yaheen enjoy karlete hain…
Rishi: Haan ab toh yehii karna padega…( moves around and sees Sanjana…) Ohh…aur… yaheen rehna padega…( winks )

So.....U saw Sujal...
Sujal Garewal...
He is a bussiness Tycoon...
Cg kum hee kaam karta hai...aur Sab Kuch Sujal karta hai...
He holds the whole business...
Sujal had not even completed his graduation k Cg ne usse business mein ddaaaal diyaa....

You will find Sujal sometimes Arrogant...but most of the times...he is sweeeeeeeeet! Lol...
chalo bohat hogaya introduction....wait for my next part!!

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To be continued..Waiting for ur comments!

Hope u liked this nonsense..hehehe

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Posted: 19 years ago
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😳 gud part.sujal as usual sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet 😉

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