*Miley Na Milein Hum* S-K fan fic - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
😆 😆 ..we dont like it at all...we loooourve it yaar 😆 ... 😆 ....kavya bajaj.....kahan yaar itna cute naam hai......hahaha.....par sujal garewal jaisa kahan 😛 😛 ..continue soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Wah wah...sara....kiya kamaal kar ditta tuussiii.... 😉 😳 👏 ...mamii bole toe...rockin...start 😆

arre pehle din hi do parts..wah wah....kiya quick service haiii 😆

waiting 4 da next part... 😆

Aur haan...hero ki entry bhi jaldi maaroo zara 😳 😳 😳

Saara-Don 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
THanks for liking it..Farah and Saara!! Thanks...Aur Saara tum Don bhi ban chukii hoo,..mujhe pehle hee pata tha k yeh din zaroor ayega..Hahaha 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
Hey Sara Great parts!!

mera hero to agaya (kavya) 😉 hehe... 😳 😳 😳 but still waiting for Sujal's entry 😳

Bohut acha likh rahin hain aap keep it up.
Cant wait for the next parts!!! 😃

-Areej
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
saara a very good second part.. 👏 chalo kavya bajaj ki tho entry ho gayi me waiting for sujal garewal's entry.. 😉
plz continue soon... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice parts but where is sujal. Jaldi se entry ho ab sujal ki
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
Bas bas....Intezaaar bas thoda hee haii yaaar...Sujal bhi ajayega....usne toh aana hee hai...Lol!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
Ok...so heres the recap...

Last part mein Kavya ki entry huyee...aur yeh pata chala k Kashish k hostel mein examz hone wale hain....


The next part:-

U all have met the Bajaj family..except..Bajaj himself..( he has gone to abroad for his business case)
Now..lets move on to the Garewal Family!

Chetan Garewal….he is the head of the family…..His Wife Veena Garewal…..she is very much loyal to him and loves her children…..Children…well U know them….LOL
Heres the scene….
The scene starts with showing a huge garden..and there…Rishi is playing Tennis with his friends in the tennis court…

Aman: Hey Rishi! Im tired yaar! Bas karein!
Rishi: ( puts off his sunglasses..Lol..Sunglasses pehan kar khelraha tha…) Kya yaar…itni jaldi thak gaya..Shame on U!
Aman: Arrey aisee baat nahi hai…Im tired waise hee…..
Rishi: Ok…wait….hey Ramsingh ( unka servant) come here
Ramsingh: Jee sarkar!
Rishi: Go get us two fresh fresh drinks!
Ramsingh: Jee abhi layaa!
Aman: ( surprised)
Rishi: Kya hua? Aise mun kyun kholey huye hai?
Aman: Yaar Rishi..tere toh nokron ko bhi English samajh mein aatii hai..
Rishi: Hahaha….haan yaar…ab aa hee jattii hai...( he puts his arm around his shoulder..and starts to walk) Mere saath reh reh kar becharey nokar bhi English seekh hee jaatey hain…cuz u know..Im the best…
Aman: Haan…main jaanta…hoon Rishi..is the best!
Rishi: Acha ab yeh chamchagiri bandh kar aur yeh bata k shaam ko kya plans hain...?
Aman: don't know..tu bata..
Rishi: hm…why don't we go to the "Night Move Club" ??
Aman: Haan..yeh theek rahegaa..chal phr shaam ko milte hain…
Rishi: array ..drink to pee kar jaa..bechara tere liye itne pyaar se lene gaya hai….(giggles)
Aman: abbey chup kar! Tu bhi bakwaas karta rehta hai…..theek hai….pee k hee jaoongaa…

Rishi and Aman are chilling together..while Veena is doin her pooja!
CG comes up to her and sees her doin pooja soo sincerely!
After finishing..she turns around and finds CG standin behind her…
Veena: array aap? Yaha kya karahe hain?
Cg: kuch nahi ..bas tumhein dekh raha thaa..
Veena: Mujhe kyun?
Cg: waise he.e..kyun nahi dekhsakta?
Veena: ( feels shy) pata nahi…
Cg: ( holds her) Veena…pata nahi kyun …Tum mein aaj bhi wohee masoomiat hai jo 25 saal pehle thii…Isi liye..I love u Veena ( hehehe..Boorhon ka romance)
Veena: aap bhi naa..is umar mein bhi baaz nahi ayenge…Bachey bade hogaye lekin aap waise k waise hee hain…
Cg: kya karoon ab…Bachey ab samajhdaar hogaye hain…Sab kuch sambhaal lete hain…ab dekhoo naa tumhara Beta Sujal…ab mujhe kuch samajhta hee nahi hai…Pora R n G usi ne sambhaal liya hai…Mujhe kuch karne ki zaroorat hee nahi…
Veena: aap ne use itni choti umar mein hee business mein bz kardiya hai..ussey apni parhayee mein puree nahi karne dee…
Cg: toh Is mein kaunsii badii baat hai..Rishi hai naa..woh karlega apnee studies puurii
Veena: Rishi ko apni masti aur doston se fursat mile toh parhayee karega naa…ab dekhiye naa subah se us Aman k saath tennis khelraha hai…
Cg: yehi toh umar hai Veena…Let him enjoy !
The phone bell rings….and Cg goes to pick it up…
Cg: Helloo?
A gurl: Sir..Main monika bolrahee hoon ..from the office..
Cg: haan bolo Monika..sab theek hai naa…?
Monika: nahi sir…kuch theek nahi hai….sab garbar hogayee hai…Plzz..aap jaldii se ajaiye…
Cg: array lekin….theek hai…Mai ata hoon…
Monika: Ok…Sir .Main aapka office k outhouse mein wait karahee hoon..
Cg: ok..im coming..( he hungs up)
Veena: Kya hua? Koi problem?
Cg: nahi..main bas abhi aata hoon..Bye..
Veena: ( to herself) Aakhir kya baat hosakti hai??

Ok..guys…wait for my next part….Akhir office mein aisa kya hua hoga? Kahin Kuch garbar toh nahi....So
wait...................................
Hope u liked it..and Plzz..do comment! Tata…
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
👏 ..aww what a sweet family.....i like ram singh..hahahaha......continue soon 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
Farah tum toh Ran Singh ki fan hogayee hoo..Hahaha..thanks for liking it...Akhir its a Family Drama...!! Family nahi hogii toh aur kya hoga.....Meri fan fic..Kisi Yash Chopra Productions se kum thodi na hai..Lol
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