KRIYANSH at [v] india fest...(ff)

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vaishali

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awesome concept.
pm me when u update

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Palakh Aggarwal

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gud concept update karo and pm me

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tina tartari

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Posted: 13 years ago

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awesome,superb,wonderful concept

plx plx plx continue n add me 2 ur pm list n pm me the updates////

lovely ff

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Maneet

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Aawesome intro...plzz pm me qen u update

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Shailja

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Posted: 13 years ago

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The concept is really good ! hope to see some real sweet nd cute kriyaansh as well as swaron...cant wait...reallly...😆pls update soon nd do PM me !😃

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Hey Megha u know v always love KriYaansh/ ArSha ff's so keep on writing n do pm me whenever u update it:)

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Megha Arya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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hello everybody...!m back...so seeing all ur comments i can happily conclude that u liked my new ff's intro...!thanx 4 the comments...so just 4 all of u..here's the chapter 1--but before starting here's my ff's logo pic..!!!

[V] INDIA FEST...WHERE JODI'S R MADE..(haha...okkk...forget about thi tag line)

[NOTE= in this ff,,m not going 2 jump directly to goa...!! i want to start from the beginning...so this ff wud have 14th feb, goa journey, dance practices, parties, sharon ko dance karne k liye manana, louians ki awsm performance, and last but not the least...MANY KRIYANSH CUTE MOMENTS...N THEIR DANCES...]

CHAPTER 1

Itz 14 FEB...valentine's dayyy...❤️

both the teams r called in the RDX's office...

kriya was the first one to arrive...and rey being the second one...

{}kriya: hi rey...!! 😃

rey did nt replied...(as i told u ki rey was upset because of all that had happened the last night...and even more because kriya had not even talked to him once n had not wished her HAPPY VALENTINES DAY...)

{}kriya: rey...??aap gussa ho mujse..?

{}rey: mera bolne ka mood nhi hai...!

{}kriya: mujse bhi nhi bologe??

{}rey: nhi...

{}kriya: rey mein...

she was about 2 speak par vicky n nilesh aa gye...!

{}vicky n nilesh: BAHARO PHOOL BARSAO...KUKYI AAJ VALENTINES DAY HAI...(ok guyzz...imagine it with the tune)

rey n kriya were amused...! 😲

{}vicky: hi rey...happy valentines day...mere yar mere sathi...(hugging him)

{}rey: (pushing him back) oye...!ye...yeh kya kar raha hai...??and whot is mere yar mera sathi...!!neha ko bhool gya kya??

vicky remembring...

{}vicky: oh teri...!neha matlab...meri kagu...!mene toh usse wish hi nhi kiya..!

vicky saw kriya...!

{}vicky: kriya...kriya...!!tumne kagu ko dekha??

{}kriya: (still amused) ha...vo bas abi aati hogi..!

{}vicky: accha batao..neha mujse gussa toh nhi hogi??

kriya lukd at rey...

{}kriya: nahi toh...vo aapse bahut pyar karti hai...!aur isliye vo gussa nhi hogi...

rey glared at her..

{}vicky: accha..!sacchi...!(blushing)

but rey was the one to put an end to his blush..

{}rey: accha..!kaise gussa nhi hogi vo tujse??

{}vicky: yar tu dara kyu raha hai..????(stammering)

kriya and rey stared at each other...!

{}rey: dara nhi raha hu...!bas bata raha hu ki toone usse wish nhi kiya hai...so she wud obviously be angry with u!!

{}vicky: vo kal jo kuch bhi hua tha uss k baad mein bahut upset ho gya tha...aur tum jante ho ki jab me upset hota hu tab mera khane ka man karta hai...!aur zyada khane k baad muje bahut neend aane lagti hai...there4 i slept..!

{}kriya: ok..ok...chalo man lete hai ki neha vicky se gussa ho bhi gyi hogi,,,,but fir bhi...i know ki vo vicky ko maaf kar degi..!!

swayam entered..

{}vicky: kash aisa hi ho...!(sigh)

{}nilesh: wooo...yaha koi debate chal raha hai kya ki tum dono for aur against bol rahe ho??

{}swayam: hi guyz..!

{}everyone: hi...!!!

{}swayam: kya hua..??any problem?

{}vicky: problem hi problem hai..!!aur vo bhi meri hi lyf me..!(acting lyk a devdas)[background song=saari duniya ka bojh uthate hai]

swayam was amused...!

{}nilesh: aur sari problems ki vajah hai girls..!! choti-choti baat par bura maan jati hain...

firstly kriya glared at nilesh...but after seeing rey's face,,,she realised whot nilesh actually said..!

(author's note=ok let me tell u wot nilesh's sentence actually meant 4 kriyansh...nil said," sari problems ki vajah hai girls..!! choti-choti baat par bura maan jati hain..." so in kriyansh's case REY WAS UPSET,,NOT KRIYA!!!and he is boy"obviously"...!!!)

kriyansh looked at each other.kriya cud hardly control her laughter...!

everyone lukd at kriya...!(u know y..ok agar fir b nhi pata hai toh mein hi bata deti hu...nil ne jo kaha uss k baad they expectd kriya to say something against it..as she was d only girl there)

{}rey: kyu..??wot do u mean by girls choti-choti baat par bura maan jati hain...?

everyone was shocked...i was unexpected that rey said this!!

{}nilesh: oye...mister defender..!!! u mean ki boys choti-choti bato par gussa ho jate hai..?

kriya placed her hand on her mouth in order to hide her laugh..!

{}rey: nn...nhi...nhi..!mene aisa nahi kaha..!

{}vicky: toh toone kaisa kaha??

swayam understood everything...he knows kriyansh very well!!

{}swayam: guyzz...stop it..!kya tum log bhi...kahi bhi shuru ho jate ho...!

simmi and rinni enters...!!sharon also comes just behind them alone...

and just after them,,!neha and vishakha enters.

{}simmi:hi guyz..!hope we...

before she cud complete her sentence vicky jumped in between, pushing everyone.!

{}vicky: kagu...tum mujse gussa toh nhi ho na??

{}neha: babu not wishing kagu...aur vo bhi valentines day par...!

rey looked at kriya...

{}rey: (to himself) dekha...i told u..!!agar wish nhi karoge toh gussa hona banta hai...!

{}kriya: (to herself) ok...ok...fine..u win!!

{}vicky: sorry kagu,,,!

{}neha: koi baat nhi..!! yestrday jo kuch bhi happened uss k baad neha not blaming u for not wishing!!

{}vicky: happy valentines day kagu... (hugging her)

{}neha: happy valentines day..

{}kriya: (to herself looking at rey)dekha...i told u..!neha will surely forgive him..!that very moment..!

{}rey: (to himself looking at kriya) par mein nhi karunga...!

bharat and amar also came..!!

swayam looked at sharon..!

{}swayam: hi..sharon..!(hoping that she wud reply)

sharon looked at him...and gave a fake smile..!

{}sharon: hi..!

RDX enters..!

{}RDX: hi guyz..sorry 4 being late...!

(ok ab vohi speech hai...just the same...bas ussme se rey k devdas wale dialog's hata lena...)

SO this ends up my first chapter...!!!hope u liked it...!!!!!!!! if yes,then plz COMMENT,,COMMENT,,COMMENT...!!!!mein comments ki bhooki hu..(haha...🤣) ok...from my side,,,i really think this chapter is a little bit confusing...!! i hope while reading it kahi aap confuse naa ho jao...!!in this chapter there was no accha wala kriyansh scene...so in next chapter...there's a kriyansh scene...and i guess u'll luv it..!

NEXT CHAPTER: kriya takes rey to the fire exit...she's trying her level best to manao rey...

THANX 4 READING...!!!!!!do comment..!

Edited by megha_arya - 13 years ago