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Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#591

loved it, plz update soon, ur update made me cry😭

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gkoolans

@gkoolans

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#592

Desi... im speechless. this is the first thing i did this morning...i read ur update and it heart wrenching...KKG's trauma is so great that she cannot decipher between real and memory... to drive someone to that point...and this is not the work of one person...multiple people are involved in this tragedy of KKG's downfall.how strong can u expect a 19yr old to be?

how does one expect such an innocent age to deal with such immense pressures...

her family, Shyam, Payal and most of all ASR i blame ASR yes...but I fell Payal is mostly to blame...how can be she so insensitive that she forgot that she was the elder one...? that KKG was some one who is always looking for ways to make ppl happy...Why didnt she(payal) react before this happened...how could she LET this happen to her baby sis...?

im so distressed...im 😭...KKG is so messed up! YOu better put alot of patience in ur love ASR! KKG needs every ounce of understanding and more that you can provide her with...

ok...now that i have ranted ...lovely lovely update...enjoyed every bit of the tragedy...as powerful as ur erotica 😉

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#593

aww...so emotional...

the extent to which she was affected gave me goosebumps!

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723461

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#594

omg this actually tore my heart..arnavs pain and khushi is so terrified.
arnav cares for her so much, poor hm, poor khushi i just wanna kill shyam
lovely writing btw. i wascrying by the end of it

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#595

this is so heart wrenching 😭 my god khushi mind got struck woth shyam's words like dead end... she is not in her right senses to thinka bout anything other her saving her arnavji or her loved ones... poor arnav it would be so hard for him to witness these horrors of her life.. my heart cries for both anav and khushi... they both are suffering alot😭

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cuteangelyogita

@cuteangelyogita

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#596

hey hi...

am new to this ff and went through all parts😊

its really awesome... fully emotional...😉

plz pm me...plz plz plz😊

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minnuma

@minnuma

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#597

your narration is very compelling...very well written - i read it all in one go and am waiting to read how arnav's love and patience will soothe away kushi's fears and bring her back to her live life the only way she knows how - which is to give herself so selflessly and unconditonally to the people she loves esp her own arnav...take care and keep it coming!!