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Ritu

@.khanak.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#601

Awhh Just read all the parts in one go...And I have no words to describe...You brought tears into my eyes( not kidding!)

Your writing skills are excellent👏

I am loving this FF 😃..just because of your awesome writing...I mean I have read so many awesome FFs but none brought tears into my eyes except yours!

Hats Off to you.I really appreciate your work👍🏼

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PRACHI GOYAL

@prachi06

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Posted: 13 years ago

#602

Hey, just read all parts
they r fantastic

plz add me in ur pm list

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Sarah

@Desi-

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#603

OS : FROZEN . . . Part 14

MATURE READERS ONLY PLEASE

Enjoy! leave heaps of comments as i looove reading them!

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#604

Beautifully Written :) 😳

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#605

That was amazing

Love arnav and the way he is trying to help her

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#606

part 14 was heart wrenching and arnav's love towards khushi has given me tears.plz continue soon dear😊

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 13 years ago

#607

That was beutifully painful and healing at the same time.

It was painful for arnav to see Khushi is so much pain and fear. It hurt him to see how much he had emotionally weakened her. He despises himself for never trusting her.

Arnav's love is the only thing which will help khushi erase all the horrible memories of shyam from her mind.

please continue soon

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Tejal Felicia

@smelling_salts

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Posted: 13 years ago

#608

Khushi's live can't be purged until Shyam dies... Arnav kill Shyam soon or at least send him to the far reaches of Siberia where he may be encased in ice for eternity..

Wonderfully written again... I think the compliment is becoming repetitive but there are no words for the way you write except...keep going! 😊

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gkoolans

@gkoolans

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Posted: 13 years ago

#609

Originally posted by: Desi-
OS : FROZEN . . . Part 14

MATURE READERS ONLY PLEASE

Enjoy! leave heaps of comments as i looove reading them!

what can i say.. u r super fast Desi :D loved this chapter...although i have started feeling that if the snakewa leaves or reaches his demise how the hell will ARHI experience such extremeness...he has always been responsible for pushing them further into accepting their feelings... i can begin to imagine this without Shyam now...😲