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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#551

Heyya Gargee,

Wassup? Caught up with the fluttering butterfly. And with each, painting that she explores her husband I fell in love a bit more. I like the way the story is heading. And titli and colours are quite right together. Thanks for all the pms.

Dee

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#552

All the very best for your exam Gargee.

Thank you for the lovely long update and as promised you have truly laid a pretty strong foundation

Loved Arhi convo. They are finally getting comfy around each other. And Arnav being naughty, letting the secret out of a thriller...

P.S, hope you do not change your style of writing. Very distinctive. I absolutely love it.

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coolgal49

@coolgal49

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#553

Lovely update

I absolutely love the way the story is developing!

You are a fantastic writer!

Keep up the good work and thanks for giving us such a good story

Please update soon! :)

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#554

Gargee - been waiting to find some quality time before I read this ...finally. So you are all over the place with new threads starting and old threads continuing. Lots of activities and progress.

The POV at the beginning is Titli's sister? . The girl is the sister and I am not sure of her relationship to Aditya. Whether its boyfriend, fianc etc. Definitely not husband. This part was raw and disturbing bordering on creepy. Not sure if you intended that. He has some mysterious intrigue going on.

Now for Arnav and Khushi...so cute and charming and slowly settling into domestic comfort. Wish they had a little more interesting interaction but cute nonetheless. It was really funny when he told her the ending. It's like you see someone trying to domesticate a tiger...wonder how long he will purr before he roars again?

Akashi and Payal story beginning. We get some insight into her and she is feisty!

Another thread was Anjali's possible pregnancy? I Am guessing that she has had past miscarriages and Shyam may not be inboard to try again.

Edited by Anamika100 - 13 years ago

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SunriseGreen

@SunriseGreen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#555

What's going on with Anjali? :O And Dia, too!

Haha Akash and Payal 😆 Stupid Akash can't figure such a simple thing out, tsk tsk.

I loved ArHi's breakfast routine <3 Very nice and normal.

Liked the format of the update; focusing on different characters like that was nice :)

Continue soon!

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#556

aahh i loved the growing camaraderie b/w Arnav and Khushi! it is sweet and enjoyable...

and all the other chacracters growing alongside..

and finally Dia is here..wonder where it is leading to..and am curious about what Anjali was thinking about..that was the only real mystery i was actually thinking of..

loved it! do update soon:D

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#557

First of all a big thanks to you and also Chubbix (-_-harsh42) who suggested me to read this FF.. Fabulous concept. I really liked it. As it is the first time i am commen ting i will list down my favs.

1. The whole marriage and Khushi's reaction to it.

2. Thank God Shyam is good.

3. Akash is such a flirt. Liked the entire GF BF thing.

4. Khushi is an artist. Wow.

5. Anjali is such a sweet SIL.

6. What is with Arnav's past, Dia's truth and Hrishi's truth.. Everything is so intriguing.

7. The bonding slowly developing is superb.

8. Akash and Payal's romance is much better than in the show.

9. I really loved the characterization of Khushi.. it is brilliant.

10. Finally update soon. Waiting to read more.

Thanks for the PM>

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-FarwiiDobaara-

@-FarwiiDobaara-

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#558

I AI absolutely lOved it..!!!
The way he thinks about her accepting his silent apology was just soo darn sweet..!!! My favorite part of all was ArHi of course :$
The way he ruined the book for her..!! Awww..!! I could just see his smirk..!!!
Akash and Khushi are just adorable..!!!
Man I swear..I can't wait to read more..!!

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hilly

@hilly

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#559

I'm speechless to say the least, would be an under statement ! :D
this is mind mindbogglingly, out of the world, FANTASTTICCCOO !

like aah.. yet again for the 2nd time.. you've got me hooked on another FF of yours that I truly adore at the moment... the characterization, the plot, imagery, emotions... so perfectly etched and carried out into such a well developed piece of writing. I'm grateful that I've come across this through the Fab. SS i read of yours ... I'm just equally thrilled..

So ecstatic to read you Fictional pieces, it's such a great feeling. I absolutely adore Khush's character and love the friendship building between herself and Arnav.. it's heart warming to see that.. i was just smiling through out..

Those eyes of his eeh, can do wonders with the emotions that he tries to keep in check.. loving the details, the flashbacks, and those you haven't reveled yet... I'm still looking forwards to it.

wow, it took me a while to adjust to fact after re-glancing over the descrip. that Sham is a pretty positive character, and not the evil freak he intends to be in the show and other FF's ... LOL. poor anji... made my heart wrench...

Loving the down right , cuteee relationship btwn Akash and Khushi.. I was grinning over the fact that you made him down to earth, so friendly, and a flirt... total opp. to what he is in the show ! O'llala .. first sight love- crush over Payal, huh ?! can't wait until he spills out the beans to Khush, and i just love and adore their fraaandship , haa.

In the intro. piece has to be associated with Dia (love the name) after having re- read it twice.. i finally undestood... for a second, I was baffled over the fact.. that it was Arn-Khush scene , LOL. i'm like 'what ? already ?! did i miss something ?' ahaah.

Now, eventhough I've tons of work to do... I just wished you had more than just the 9 parts posted, but soo anxious, anticipating, and excited over the fact of reading the other updates coming up..

hoping for a while... Arn-Khush friendship stays harmonious the way that is, and he doesn't go back to being a beast.. and realliii looking frwd to him acknowledging the sketch Khushi has created for him ... grinning !

You wanted a looong update, right ?! haa ! here you go, it's sufficient enough, and PLEASE UPDATEEE ! i need the update dose... it's eating me up , LOL.

You're super good, and PM me when you do update.. spankss ! :D Hurry it already, woman !

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sarra0

@sarra0

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#560

love the concept and the suspense, beautifully written, i love all 3of ur ffs and ur writing style,

liked Khushi and Arnav breakfast routine, cudnt stop smiling wen he told her the ending of the book and her reaction aw so sweet she went to draw him, loved the line its all about the eyes wit you.

Anjali, felt so sorry 4her, iv sounds like she may b expecting and haspgd had a miscarriage before?

Dia, Aditya interesting interesting

update soon can't wait to find out wat happens next.

Edited by sarra0 - 13 years ago