The Memories of a Butterfly-ch 12 PG142 Updated! - Page 58

Gargee...waiting...waiting...dear...

I'm going to guess it's Khushi in the first chapter! That would be interesting!

Loved the chapter and the little domestic routine Arnav and Khushi have fallen into :D

I am on a commenting spree today everywhere !!
And since yours are the longest due for god knows how long I am commenting here ...
Okay I need to start it with this woman !!
*jahanpanaah tussi na changa great ho...Tofa kabool ho bents down lowest*
Ahhh...finally with that done I guess thats the only way I can thank you for writing this amazing story of yours...I mean I am so in love with memories of a butterfly...And my fav chap being a sadist that I am has to be the one where Arnav shouts at Khushi for those bangles and the one following it. I am such a big feminist I just love it when Khushi stands up for herself makes herself loud and clear and is not scared of the Arnav Singh Raizada, and I guess its thanks to Barun the expressions he shows when they show Arnav feeling guilty just sweep my heart away and the way you potrayed these through these two chaps had me wanting to give you the biggest hug you've ever got🤗

And coming to the last update...well you are seriously going and writing big time like all the writers do . Touching the life of all the characters in the one update and bloody hell it was long too...
Just a doubt who is Shwetha !!?? I am a tad bit confused there but the rest of the update seemed amazing...
And the beginning ..So thats Dia Gupta !! And she loves Adi ?? And what exactly is Adi trying to hide from her ?? And just a request I know I shouldnt be requesting the first time I comment but I couldnt control.. Could you throw a little bit more light on Adithya I mean something more about him. Sorry sorry sorry No offence at all🤔
And the whole Arnav-Khushi convo...OMG that so reminded me about this wierdo wacko friends of mine...he spoils the end f every bloody nice book I've wanted to read him...I could at that moment very well understand what Khushi must have gone through poor she man...But I loved the whole conversation and the fact that Arnav accepts that that was his friendsly convos hes had in months and he'd liked it I was like😃 all 32 teeth showing...😆And ofcourse how could I forget the last line
*It's always your eyes,isn't it Mr.Raizada.* Seriously its always his eyes !!
And Payal's already getting jealous haan...And she's also blushing...awwiee thats just too cute of her.And the way she said "Your Coffee Sir" I could imagine the look on Aakash's face and I went mad laughing at that point🤣
I love the rapo that Aaksh-Khushi share...I wish I sooo wish we could get atleast a bit of this on the show tooo...Khushi's just amazing isnt it ?? I mean the way she makes Aakash gobble all the pasta and then the way she asks him about Payal...I was saying *this dewarji has a smart,intelligent and an amazing bhabhi who's his girlfriend man*😎

I am just loving reading all of your things Gargu...Love you loadss...
PS: Im sorry if I disturbed you with these longgg comments

Please update!

Gargee you write beautifully. I love the way you've sketched out your characters and the plot. Ypu say you favour a certain style of writing, it is great, keep it, I really like it. Looking forward to your next update.

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