Dying Embers..A SaJan SS...!!!Up.pg30(16/7) - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chulbuli94

Marie😳😳

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MARIE☺️☺️
MARIE🤪🤪
MARIE🤬


Yes My Doll🤗🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome too gud part loved sajan confession n loved their romantic moments thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MSluvsSI


Yes My Doll🤗🤣

dil pe na le~~~~~last epi should beas if sajan r monaya~~~~ahem ahem 🤪
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What should I say more? loved it full of SaJanlicious moments 🤪 [:">|
continue soon <3
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It seems all of us wanna see Monaya's romance through Sajan😳😳😳...our expectations r high,Marie😉... can't wait 4 d last part !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pakpearl

It seems all of us wanna see Monaya's romance through Sajan😳😳😳...our expectations r high,Marie😉... can't wait 4 d last part !!!


n I think it doesnt happen yet that i let down anyone of you 😳AM i right ?🤔

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MSluvsSI

radhi coment ni karye ge tu aj raat update deny wali the tu ni karu ge update :$ n i promise end karu ge SS but teri demands puri honey k baad okay aur next wala second last hai yeh ni OK

to fir i am so happy ab karungi me coment ...

wait mujhe fir se part read karna hai

sajan ke ahem ahem wale scenes u knw😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MSmyworldMS

to fir i am so happy ab karungi me coment ...


wait mujhe fir se part read karna hai

sajan ke ahem ahem wale scenes u knw😆


parh k coment kar dena wil update in an hour agar light na gae :$
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Posted: 12 years ago
shit mere lappy ki battery gayi... mein aaj raat tak comment karti hu
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART SIXTEEN

Samrat was not able to stop smiling since last night when the beautiful realization made them delightful that now they can't be separated...Trust on love.. they had took five years to learn it after losing... this time it had with different charm n feelings.. the love u get..cant be more precious n lovable ...than...when u get love...purity is character that makes it more admirable n valueable..Then You cares for it...coz u pay high for it...from ur heart n soul...

He felt himself blessful when he looked at gunjan who had placed her head on his shoulder...hugging his arm...helding his hand...reminding their moment...cherishing the whispers..feeling warmth of his kisses n hugs..

They had waited long to live their life..but after last blissful night they had realized it was inded worth of wait...n it was just a start..

She was not..able to held an eye contact with him since after they got acknowlged with the assurance that their dream had actually came true last night...

SAMRAT:Chashmish...
GUNJAN:hmm...
SAMRAT:aesy kab tak meri ankhon mein dekh k baat ni karo ge
GUNJAN:Samrat Bohat Traffic hai ap driving pe dehyan dein...
SAMRAT:Chashmish Asey Sharmao ge na tu Sabko pata chal jaye ga...
GUNJAN:Sabko ? Kia pata chal jaye ga?
SAMRAT:Yahi K tm mjh sey pyar karti ho Budhu...
GUNJAN:Mein Budhu ni hon Samrat...
SAMRAT:Janta Hon Tm Meri Chashmish ho Sirf Meri...

...

SUR:mom dad khahan hain mujhey sirf unkey pass jana hai.. mujhey ni khana hai...

SHILPA:Ap key mom dad a jaein gey...

SUR:Ap jao yahan sey..Ap gandi ho..Apney mama ko rulaya tha. mujhey mom dad k pass jana hai..mujhey ni pata...

SHILPA:chup kar jao Sur damag kha lia hai is wqt sey ro ro kar..ab awaz aye na tmharey roney k tu lagao gi aik..

SUR: ap gandi ho .bht burii hon..btao ge mein dady ko apney mujhey aur mama ko rulaya...ap ney mjhey danta bhe...mein dadda ko btaoa ge..

SHILPA;Just shut up Sur.. ab awaz aye na tu...

Just then gunjan walked in n was shocked to see her daugher crying n shilpa scolding her daughter...

GUNJAN: shilpa.. humari Beti ko dantaney ya marney ka haq samrat ya mjhey bhe ni hai...aur tm us sey itni rudely baat kar rahi ho..pata nahn hai bachey dar jatey hain zara si unchi awaz sey aur tm us pe shout kar rahi ho?

SUR:mamaaa...ap khahn gaye the...mein...akeli the...

Sur rushed to her mom as gunjan wrapped her in arms..

SHILPA:Sur chup ni ho rahe the...tu ...

GUNJAN:THANK YOU apko itni taklef uthani pari mjhey pata hota k meri beti ko koi ap jesa smbhal raha ho ga..tu janey sey pehly sochti zaror..

GUnjan clearly hated the fact that her daughter was crying coz of her rude behaviour...or she know her daughter never cry in front of other specially...

SHILPA:TU SOCHna THA NA JANEY SEY PEHLEY? Samrat na sahi tumhari tu apni...

Before she was able to say , Samrat cut her who came there after parking the car...She had thought she hit the right place..but indeed was unaware of sajan bonding with sur ...

SAMRAT:SHUT UP SHILpa..jo kehna tha keh lia tmsey aur worse kia expect kar sakta hon mein jab tum...Mujhey tmhari insult karney k lea Apney level sey Low hona pasand nahn..So Just Shut Up..Tmharey lea itna he kafi ho ga...warna Tum jis Samrat Shergill K samney khari ho voh apni wife aur beti k barey mein aik lafz bhe bardasht nahn karta aur unkei khushi k lea Jaan dey sakta hai Tu Unki zindagi mein Zehar gholney walon K Jaan Ley bhe sakta hai chahye voh uskey apney Maa Baap he kuin Na hon...

His last words made gunjan stunned too..he was not so harsh or rude like he was today...gunjan felt a shiver of fear...

Chashmish Tm Breakfast le k room mein A jana..tab tak dadda apni princess ko manatey hain Kuin My Darling Daughter?

Samrat took sur n his tone changed completely..sur hide herself in his arms..as gunjan moved oposite side to bring...

GUNJAN:Jii...

...

Shilpa was not able to digest her insult so she came folowing gunjan in kitchen...


SHILPA:Tum bohat kush ho ge na Chas...

GUNJAN:CHashmish kehney ka haq sirf Samrat ko hai..

Gunjan wanted to ignore her but seriously she had enough nyc with her in behaviour unlike her...

SHILPA:Acha aur kon kon sey haq tm usey dey chuki ho jo arman ...

Gunjan was extremly upset on her personal attacks...

GUNJAN:shilpa behtar ho ga meri personal life aur mjhsy jurey kisi bhe insan k insult mat karein.. ap yahan sey chali jaein..kuin ki Mein apsey aur rudely behave ni karna chahti..

SHILPA:insult? tmharey pas hai he kon?

Gunjan was realy impressed of her courage of being so shameless...

GUNJAN:yeh apsey behtar kon jaan sakta hai shilpa...K merey pass kiya hai?

SHILPA:voh tmhari bhool hai tmhey kia lagta hai samrat tmsey pyar karta tha k voh tmharey pass hai aj? mein mein chor k gaye the usey..is lea voh tmharey pass...

Gunjan was like WHAT... she was like living in some delusions..

GUNJAN:THAnk You very Much..Apka yeh ehsan kabhi ni bholon ge mein Shilpa...

SHILPA:oh just shut up...Tmhey lagta hai aj voh tmsey pyar karta hai..My foot voh sirf mjhey..mujhey galat Prove karney k lea tmhey use kar raha hai...Tumhari jasi do char ko tu voh wasey bhe tym pass..

Gunjan s courage to bear all her allegations crossed the limits...

GUNJAN:BAs Bohat ho gya..Kab sey mein apki baqwas suni ja rahe hon...Ab Ap merey Pati k Barey mein Koi bhe baat kehney ka haq nahn rakhtein...Agar mein chup hon aur apka lehaz kar rahi hon Tu sirf islea k kbhi na kbhi ap Samrat sey jurri thein...aur samrat sey juri har chez Merey lea Bohat Maeney(Importance)Rakhti hai..Par apki ghatiya soch Jaan kar Mujhey Is baat ka ehsas ho gya hai k Voh samrat k aur humari(Arman gunjan) bohat bari bhool the aur mujhey Tu ab is baat pe bhe shak ni raha k ap Pyaar ka matlab bhe nahn janti ho...

SHILPA:tumhara yeh lecture ni sunana mujhey...Tumhey Bohat garror hai na K tm uski life mein ho ? Bohat bari cheez hai Tmhara Pati...

GUNJAN:mein apko pehley hi warn kar rahi hon.. Merey Pati Samrat K barey mein Respect sey Baat karein..

Gunjan glared her for last time...

SHILPA:WHAT?Respect? Tumhey lagta hai dat u r luccky k samrat k sath tum ho? Uski life mein Bohat si larkiyan Thein..Aur ab bhe hon ge..Samrat jasa flirt kabhi ni badal sakta..Aur tmhey agar meri baaton pe yakeen ni hai tu yeh tasverien...jhoot...ni bol saktien...

She handled her a pack of some pics..which gunjan without wasting a second throwed them in fire of stove...n galred her angirly...n slapped her hard...

GUNJAN:just shut up now..koi aur plan tmhara reh gya hai mjhey aur samrat ko alag karney k lea ? kal Mujhey Samrat sey Door karney k lea hi Tm terace pe merey sey pehley gaye the na...? takey mein samrat ko galat smjho? Well I am really sorryy tmhara voh plan Tm par bhari par gya.. I would like fo Thank u miss.Shilpa..apki waja sey hmey ehsas hua k humey sur k sath aik dosrey ko bhe time dena chahye...Aur Sach Bataon...Thank You very Much Samrat Ko chodney k lea..at least ab uski life mein shilpa nam k disease tu nahn rahi...[Shilpa raised her hand to slap gunjan but gunjan held her wrist..where shilpa was in shock seeing such brave gunjan]...Yeh thapar tm tab mar sakti agar aj mein Gunjan hoti but ur badluck tm Mr.Samrat shergill k wife aur Sur Samrat shergill k Mom sey baat kar rahe the.. jo Apney Pati Samrat aur Apni beti Sur k barey mein aik lafzz bhe bardasht ni karti... N Miss.Shilpa i would like to consider this our last metting..Kuin ki Ab Gunjan ko bhe bewaja Courtesy nibhana nahn ata..aur voh apni zindagi mein zehar gholney walo ko maff ni kar sakti haii ... Acha ho ga Agar tum Apni selfishness ko thoda kum kar lo shahid koi bholey bhaktey tmhari life mein a hi jaye..aur samrat k life sy dur raho..mujhey sach bolney k adat hai..agar Sach karwey lagey hon Tu juice rakhti ja rahi hon ..Have a nyc life ahead. Goodbye
...
Gunjan in their room..n saw sur on bed having her arms folded arround her waist..showing annoyance while samrat trying to make up with her...par she was Struck at no..gunjan n samrat met eyes.. n showed their helplessness n woory..
Gunjan put tray aside n sit next to sur..tried to held her but she didnt allowed..

GUNJAN: Sshrrroooyy Our darling Princesshhh... Mum srrrlly hain..ap unko Hug ni karo ge?

SAMRAT:meri pricess dadda k aik mistake tu maff kar sakti hai na? Wasey bhe dady apni sweetheart ko miss kar rah hain...

Smarat n Gunjan held their ears..n make cute soory face...

SUR:Aur mein ne jo miss kiya ap dono ko ? Jevika Masi Manvi masi bhe chalye gaye mjhey kela chodl k...mein itna darl gaye the...

She was on verge of crying..Gunjan quickly embarace her in.hug...

GUNJAN:aww meri Jaan so sorry Jani..
SUR:mein amy ko ap dono ki complain karu ge..

Sur looked at sam n make a cute annoy face...

SAMRAT:Acha aur agar amy boley tu apney sam ko maff kar do ge?

Samrat smiles lightly n held her hand n asked her lovingly..

SUR:Amy Sam sy bilkul ni.boley ga voh meri team mein hai..

SAMRAT: no way.. Amy hmesha meri team mein hota hai..aur is princess sey pehley amy ka fav mein tha..

Samrat replied in same childish way as both were urging...

SUR:parl ab mein hon..

Sur make a really worse face as she moved to him as he had open his arms..n she hugged him tightly as she not gona leave him now...Samrat was so touched kissed her forehead..he smiles reminding da same cute small baby sur who used to react same whenevr he used to come home back after whole day...

SAMRAT:of course..ap hmari bhe tu fav hain highness... Ab tu maf kia my lord?

SUR: PEhley Sur ko...

Sur was showing him cheek when.before she completes samrat kissed her cheeks.. n Sur kissed his cheeks back..

Sur:Sam is bad..

Sur teased samrat as back in her naughty mood..samrat showed her eyes..

Samrat:Aahann really?

Gunjan smiles with tears..as saw samrat n sur teasing each other as samrat trickled around her waist..n she tries to do it back to him..n both were laughing as they lyed on bed..samrat hugs her n kissed her forehead...

SAmrat: Dada loves his sur..

Samrat says to her as they left each other.. Gunjan takes sur in her lap..

Sur:Sur loves his dadda more..haina mom?

Gunjan smiles at them n kissed at sur s forhehead..as hugged sur from back..n samrat looked at both of them while lying on bed having palm under his chin..

GUNJAN: Ab kush hai sur...Ab khana kahein?

Gunjan blush at samrat s stare and moved to prepare noodles for their daughter..

SUR:bohaat sara par...ab mjhy yahan ni rehna apney ghar rehna hai..

Sur looked at samrat who lyed in sitting position with suport of back of bed...

SAMRAT:Ur wish is command princess..aj k function k bad hm Sur k palace mein jaein gey Tekh hai

Samrat squeezed sur s hand n Sur kissed his cheek..

SUR: yeaa...

GUNJAN:chalein ab hmarey baby ko bhook ni lag rahi?

Gunjan looked at them showing sur her nodless. Sur smiles widely..

SUR:lagl re hai mom bohat sari..

Gunjan made Sur eat .. when bith heard...

SAMRAT:Dadda ko bhe bohat bhook lagi hai princess...

Gunjan looked at him n find as was expecting his stare...she tried to glare him ...to stop staring at her..

SUR:mom pehley mujhey khilana hai apko phir daddaa ko..n no cheating dadda..

Gunjan offered Sur.. but samrat teased sur...n didnt alow her to eat...Sur make first face..but then..sur said okay as samrat made her remind its his turn.

Gunjan didnt help in blushing as made him eat as his eyes were enough to make her feel shy...

as next gunjan tried to make eat sur...Sur told her its her turn n samrat n she wil make her eat..Gunjan looked at samrat n sur as both of them.made her eat..

A small lovingly smile played across their face...

Samrat n sur continued teasing each other while gunjan Enjoyed it silently...

after meal. ... Sur slept while they were discussing happenings with her as she enjyd watched movie along verin n jevika n had slept..it was morning when she was shock not to see samrat gunjan..She had never been alone in this way..N as manvi n jevika had to left for pooja..shilpa was there to take care of her...n then sajan came up...

They felt relaxed as saw their daughter sleeping peacfully...

Sur had head in her lap..n gunjan was creasing her hairs...where sur had slept holding samrat s palm... n her tiny legs were on samrat...

Gunjan was lost in staring Sur..when she felt bit disturbance n get to know her husband is actually trying to realize her to give time to him...Gunajn glares him to stop his antics..as she doesnt wish to disturb sur s sleep..but it was samrat..

Gunjan sighed as felt his tug again again...So finally she get closer to him by sitting with suport of her arm..she yawns...

GUNJAN:bolein kia hai?
SAMRAT:kitna bore ho chashmish..Mein yahan baat karney k lea tmhy bula raha tha and u are sleepppy..

Samrat glares at her fakely...

GUNJAN:Mr.Samrat ap ahista bolein apki princess jag jaye gi..aur ap janty hain agr merey hilney k waja sey voh zara bhe distrub ho gaye tu jag jaye ge.. apko usko jagana hai?
SAMRAT:nahn par ab kamosh reh k nein tmhari boring shakal bhe ni dekh sakta..

Samrat was not able to stop from teasing her...

GUNJAN:kia? meri shakal dekhna apko boring lagta hai?
SAMRAT:Han bilkul lagta hai jab tm meri traf dekho gi hi nae tu tm blush ni karo ge..aur blush k begair tmhara face kitna incomplete hai mjhy abhi abhi tu pata chala hai..

Samrat whispered..Gunjan looks at him n blush.. as they broke eyelock..

GUNJAN:Samrat Ap pagal hain..?

Gunjan stares shyly at their hands as she had entangled her fingers in his fingers..

SAMRAT:Pagal tu ab hua hon chashmish ...

Samrat was lost in her..her face was so close to his...

GUNJAN: Nahn voh tu apkey birth cirtificate pe likha hua hai already..

Gunjan gigled silently ..she looked at samrat n found him lost in her..

SAMRAT:chashmish aik baat pochon..
GUNJAN:pochein konsi khata kar di ab mein ne?

Gunjan smiles lovingly at his crazy antics..

SAMRAT:khata? Bohat chota sa lafz hai Hmara dil churaya hai apney..

Samrat held her hand n showed his heart s beat stating her name only..

GUNJAN:hmm...apko ni lagta voh dil merey pass bohat kush aur safe hai?

Gunjan made him listen her heartbeats stating his name..n gestures teasingly..

SAMRAT:Han voh kush hai..Par apsey fasley Humey pasand ni hai My dear Wife..

Samrat nuzzles in her hairs..kissing her hairs...while held her palm..

Gunjan Blushed n felt her heart beat skipped...

GUNJAN:ap ko bhe sur k trah so jana chahye ap ...
SAMRAT:Par ...?

Samrat tried to ignore..but Gunjan leaned n kissed his cheek..n whispers..

GUNJAN:Hum apkey pass hi hain...
SAMRAT:Tum Meri Jaan ho..

He wishpers back as lost in her completely..

GUNJAN:Aur meri Jaan Tumhary mein basti hai ...Kush?

Gunjan was about to get back but Her mangulsutar got struck in his shirt s button..Both looked at each other... Gunjan s one hand was under Sur s head..while one was held by samrat. samrat s one hand was also held by sur..n other was in gunjan s palm..

They both stares..as samrat gestured her to place head on pillow back..N they rested head together.. while helding their hands still..

SAMRAT:bohat..tmharey sath har pal...

Both closed eyes..as samrat kissed her forehead...n both smiles to each other..

After some silence..their whispers continued as samrat n gunjan were unable to hide their love for each others.. the dream they had just started living...the teasing about their first night was enjoyable for both...as both were feeling equally shy happy n blessed to have some blissful memories...they felt their life much brighter n happier than ever...

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Last part is on its way <3 Any seggestions do mention it clearly...I wil try to fulfil ur expectations...!!

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