Dying Embers..A SaJan SS...!!!Up.pg30(16/7) - Page 27

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MSmyworldMS

i want next update now 🤣


MUft khor comment kartey ni hain update chahiye
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was superb fantastic fabulas part yaar..

gunjan was so broken coz of that stupid shilpa how dare she??

kamini sam ko hug kiya and love you bola... agar mein gunjan ki jagah par hoti aand sam mera pati hota to ek thappad maar deti salli ko..

over alll loved the update and more over loved baap beti scenes...


Do cont soon
thnks for the pm



lol isse jyada honest coment me nai de sakti...

i know iske baad bhi tu update nai dene wali...

bt its my paunful duty to comment 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MSmyworldMS

it was superb fantastic fabulas part yaar..


gunjan was so broken coz of that stupid shilpa how dare she??

kamini sam ko hug kiya and love you bola... agar mein gunjan ki jagah par hoti aand sam mera pati hota to ek thappad maar deti salli ko..

over alll loved the update and more over loved baap beti scenes...


Do cont soon
thnks for the pm



lol isse jyada honest coment me nai de sakti...

i know iske baad bhi tu update nai dene wali...

bt its my paunful duty to comment 🤣

🤣🤣Kbhi kbhi tu comment karti hai par karti hai tu sb sey la jawab🤗

tension kuin leti hai radhi shilpa ko thapad gunjan na marey is sey pehly ss kasey khatm kar sakti hon mein teri akhri khuwish zaror puri ho gi chahye uskey lea mjhey story karab krni parey 🤣


teri honesty k dad deni parey ge 🤣 mil jaye update jald hi now 😉


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Posted: 12 years ago
it was really wonderful upd dear felt bad for sajan hope they will confess soon i love sur n samrat's bonding they r cute father -daughter duo thanks for pm do upd soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART FIFTEEN

Gunjan was puzzled at his grip on her wrist..

GUNJAN;Samrat please chodein mujhey..

As soon as she had said..she felt herself pulled with jerk..she lifted head n saw him looking at her face with mixed emotions...

She was staring to get to know his feelings..when she got stunned as he leaned down n capture her lips...

His lips creased her lips...tasting her lips...

She was too shocked at his kiss..just knew her heartbeats had stopped beating..her hands frozed...her body turned cold..only she was able to feel him..his kiss..his love..his passion..his hurt..his helplessness..his sincerity..his honesty...his desperate longing wish...

She felt his hand letting go her wrist..n his arms embarced her like a doll...as his finger creased her skin..n moved to her back..aruging her to kiss him back...

She closed her eyes...to lived the moment with whole heart n love for him..as he felt her response..his lips smiles bit...as they both melted in their love..her hands moved to his kurta...as she held unto his coller..

She felt shy...n tried to stop herself getting lost..but..samrat didnt let her..as his arms pulled her more close..n..his reaction was enough to tell her...that they were meant to get lost in their kiss...in their heaven..

The kiss prolonged as gunjan s arm encircled his neck..n his fingers creasing her hairs...

As they become breathless...n he felt her slowed down...they gently parted away...resting their foreheads..listening to their heart beats beating in same rythm...Could feel eachother breathes...

Gunjan didnt opened eyes...she was so fearful..she was not ready to even think it as dream which just happened..she had lived in true meanings just few seconds agoo..she was still able to feel his lips...his taste..his love..his passion...

She was still in herself when she felt in real his lips kissing her lips softly n lovingly again...

SAMRAT; Mujhey Sirf tmharey Sath kuch pal jeney hain Chashmish Is yakken k sath k hum dono aik hain..

Gunjan open eyes as tears rolled down her cheeks...n he pulled her for hug...

Tears of hapiness..of feeling blessed..of living the moment along him...dream being with him...only him...n her...

Samrat broke hug n.wiped her tears..n kissed her forhead..n smiled at her..where she was just staring at him...as he made her sit in car..n they moved out of sight of two eyes..

...

Samrat looked at her n find her blushing ... n playing with her dupata..in nervousness n shyness..

The moment was indeed so special .. the feeling was still there...buterflies in her stomach didnt let her to sit in peace...her nervousness was obvious for samrat which was reason that compeled his lips more wider...

He was reminding the moment too..it was so special treasure...

After Five years,Being with eachother, for first time they dont only feel their love but had experienced it...they felt living their whole life..not only their lips...their souls had united in that moment...

It was not mere kiss of two lovers..It was something more valueble n precious for them..which was not describe-able in words...n was only known to them..

She was staring blushing on reminding the moment...when she felt her breaths stoped..she could feel his hot breaths on her face..she was really weell aware of his closeness .. .n she closed eyes as his lips kissed her earlobe while whispering ...

'Aj pehli dafa chashmish Mujhey Ehsas huwa hai K we were not together we were meant to be together...'

Samrat kissed her cheek..Gunjan opened eyes n...Gunjan looked at him n they were facing each other..Samrat put her hairs at back of ear..

SAMRAT;chalein..

Gunjan came back from dreamland n looked him in confusion...

All confusions were cleared as they both walked down...In front of temple...

Gunjan looked at him as they stepped in helding hand of each other...

The dream was turning to real with such beauty that she was not able to express her hapiness..except..her wet shiny eyes..

She shaked head while tears escaping as he bent down on his knees..n held her hand..

SAMRAT; kisi sey pyaar karna mushkil ni hota.. par kisi ky pyaar mein jab mitney ko dil karye shaid usey ishq kehty hain.. chashmish today i confess... meri dhakanein sirf tmhey dekh kar ruk jati hain..Meri ankhein sirf tmhey Dhondhti hain...Mujhey tmhari awaz k waja sey subha jaldi jag jana bht acha lagta hai..Jab tum raat ko dineer pe mera intezar krty table pe he so jati hai tu bht bura lagta hai par yeh ehsas k tm MEReY lea jah rahi the mjhey tmsey aik dafa phir muhbbat kara deta hai.. Tmhey na dekhon tu mera din bilkul ni acha guzrta..office mein agar har trah k tensions mein sab sey zyada jo baat relief deti hai k Chashmish ko mujh par bharosa hai..usney merey lea dua k ho gi..tu yeh ehsas mjhy fir sey kudh pe yakken karney k himat deta hai.. Jab mein tmhey aur sur ko kush dekhta hon Tu mjhy lagta hai k dunia ka sab sy lucky person hon mein ...Aj jab Mein ne...Mjhy laga k k..jasey..mein apni sari zindagi us aik pal mein jee chuka hon...voh ehsas jisey mein aj tak dil k kisi conrner mein hide kar rakha ..tha...sirf is soch k waja sey k hum aik dosrey k lea ni hain...voh ehsas chashmish..meri zindagi ka hasil hain...Tum sirf Meri Muhabbat ni ho..Mera Ishq ho..Meri Dewangi ho...Aj mein tmhey is ehsas ..is yaken..aur purey dil aur honesty k sath...Apna banana chahta hon..Tmhey Apney Rang mein rangna chahta hon...Meri life k sirf aik wish hai k mein tmharey sath jeo..aur jab...akhri sans...

Their eyes were looking at each other...her tears escaped her eyes with each n every word of him...which he had said with so much honesty n sincerity that there was nothing left to even think for her...his words were leaving patch on her heart..she was feeling so emotional n moved of his feelings..that she felt difficult to stand on her feets...at his confession...she kneed down too..crying loudly...resting hand on their hands...n when she heard him saying..she lifted head n looked at him n shaked head...

GUNJAN;Samrat ...

Samrat looked deeply in her eyes...n gave words to his long awaited wish with all his love...

SAMRAT;Will u marry me chashmish? Will u make me believe in happiness? Will u make me Yours? Can I spend my rest of life in Your arms.?Wil u make me alive again with your touch...?.I am waiting for ur answer chahsmish Do u love me?..Pl...

For gunjan it was unbelievable...but warmth of his palm..as his finger squezzing her hand in his palm...assuring her of his love...She replied aggerring to her with much hapines n joy along her tears...

GUNJAN;yes..I wil marry You Samrat...Mein sirf tmharey lea jena chahti hon..aur mar...

Before she was able to continue..samrat placed hand on her lips...n moved near her...

SAMRAT;Shhh..mujhey chodh k janey k khabhi baat mat karna smjhhii..

They joined their foreheads...as their tears left their cheeks...

GUNJAN;Tum bhi nahn mjhey chodh k janey ka socho gey kabhe nahn...

SAMRAT;I love you Chashmish...

His whisper sent shivers in her spine...she felt chillled as his lips touched her lips for a second...n a sweet shy smile played across their lips..as gunjan placed head on his shoulder..n his arm embarced her in hug...as they both had settled on stairs of temple...

...

She recalled the moments when he had asked for her to take vows again ...the way he had filled her mang...the way he tied the beautiful mangalsutar which he bought for her specially n there was SG carved in it...She stares at her mangalsutar...They had marriaged in temple in true meaning...n now they were in a resort...where samrat had planed a special date along her...

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beintaha by atif

She was wearing a white sarree...staring at sky...when she felt the voice...She turned and found samrat in his white shirt n trousers...

She was unable to face the passion n love his eyes were reflecting...

As she tried to move on from near him...he held her hand...n she closed eyes as he throw rose petals on her n her face...she looked at petals n then at him ...his smile drive her crazy..she gigled..as he lift her in his arms...

leaning down on bed..n feeling him over top...

She was holding him from coller...

She closed eys...as his lips creased her cheeks...her nosetip..her chin...her neck...her shoulders...

His love caused her to close her eyes..n feel his marks on her skin...

The precious n valueable moments they shared whole night...was memorable for both of them...

They had lived their wishes...They had become one...

Their soul,their heart ...were just merged in each other love...united forever...

As he kissed her n wrapped themselves in white sheet...she felt shy on reminding their moments..looked at him..as find his drooling smile...she bit her lip..kissed his cheeks n rested head on his shoulder...as they laid down...to sleep peacfully n contented...

They made each other alive with their touch n love...

The past had been fadded might be completely as they both had started their own journey that was only meant for both of them...

...

She smiles at his hug from back...they were wrapped in single sheet...n she was enjoying his trails of kisses on her ears,back,neck n shoulders...

'Kush ho na?'

his whisper made her hug herself more...she replied as creased his arms around her waist...

'Han bohat..Thank You'

She closed eyes with bitting her lips edge...as he bit her earlobe in annoyance...

'Shut up Chashmish'

She smiles lightly as he made her turned in arms..n glared at her...n both stares in their eyes..forgetting everything...he leans down to kiss her..as she moved near...his lips licked her lips...n he kissed her...which she lovingly responses...as they both were once again lost in their heaven...The love has just started to blossom in their life...!!!

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Second Last Part...!!!!!

Comment if you liked the part <3

Edited by MSluvsSI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG!!I AM GONE!!! Seriously.☺️
No words for this update. It was so romantic,passionate,loveable,januable and just WOW!🤪
Tum na chain se jene nahi doge.😆 Ab exams ki prep kaise karun. UPdate was a killer jani<3
Can't get out of it still. I am in Sajan land!☺️🤪
Loved the update. Their kiss☺️ ☺️was so loveable. Then the temple part so so emotional 😭 yet so loveable.😳
The way he proposed to her. His dialouge very well wriiten 👏👏👏👏Their love was expressed so beautifully!<3<3
The resort part ☺️🤪🤪☺️ Only I know how I am controlling my self. SAJAN!
A pure Sajanian update with purity and love emerging in every word and gesture.
The update was rocking. Commendable! I am Speechless and in Sajan world!😆🤪
Love Urz Angel <3
Edited by HSFA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Totally romantic, SaJanlicious update.🤪 😳 loved it. Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i wanted to comment after reading your update

bt then i read precap so now i changed my mind, i am not gona comnt bas
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Posted: 12 years ago
radhi coment ni karye ge tu aj raat update deny wali the tu ni karu ge update :$ n i promise end karu ge SS but teri demands puri honey k baad okay aur next wala second last hai yeh ni OK
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Posted: 12 years ago
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